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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

wow vikas superb start indeed Raman bhalla is Raman bhalla only finally he win with his mind blowing smile ishra flashback was sweet this father daughter duo looking at ishita finally they met her now I'm excited wht u store for us ??

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Rinki

@IshraMiNeholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Vikas u r an epic writer!!! Every update a new twist ...!
Dude u can even publish a book and become a bestseller author!!! 😉

Liked d prolouge.. 👍🏼

Al charcters intro... Specialy lovd d idea of double role of ishita.. .. 😃

Bak 2 updts..

Pt 1 & 2-->

Ishu.. lvd her frm startng.. 😳

Hate dis subbu entry in 1st prt only.. so much ovr cnfidnce 4 getng prjct nd 4 promtin.. 😡

1st interctn of ruhi-ishu.. here also she saves her frm a road acident.. 👏

Seriulsy hatng dis subbu.. not evn bthrng 2 tel hw she is lukng.. huhh.. 😈

How ishu agreed 2 mary him..!! 🤢

Lykd d raman entry.. nd 1 more thng dat he nvr left his smile watevr situatn it is.. happy/sad.. alwz smilng 4 d sake of 1 prsn.. 😳

RKB.. d gr8 busnsmn knw hw 2 grb d oportunity.. how 2 chnge weakns 2 strength.. 👍🏼

i knew it no 1 can beat Mr.RKB..

1st meetng of ishra.. it thought he will b shckd after seeng her nd wil 2 mihika abt her.. but nthng hpnd lyk dat.. he was so cool.. 😲

nd evn mihika also didnt introduce her when dey r going bak 2 hme nd he gv dem lift..

Plz clear my 1 doubt is mihika is real sis or cousin nd is iishita is only child here..? i mean no vandita nd bala..?

SORRY 4 2 LONG COMNT ND 4 QUES ALSO..

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic
Vikas u r an epic writer!!! Every update a new twist ...!
Dude u can even publish a book and become a bestseller author!!! 😉

Liked d prolouge.. 👍🏼
Al charcters intro... Specialy lovd d idea of double role of ishita.. .. 😃

Bak 2 updts..
Pt 1 & 2-->
Ishu.. lvd her frm startng.. 😳
Hate dis subbu entry in 1st prt only.. so much ovr cnfidnce 4 getng prjct nd 4 promtin.. 😡
1st interctn of ruhi-ishu.. here also she saves her frm a road acident.. 👏
Seriulsy hatng dis subbu.. not evn bthrng 2 tel hw she is lukng.. huhh.. 😈
How ishu agreed 2 mary him..!! 🤢
Lykd d raman entry.. nd 1 more thng dat he nvr left his smile watevr situatn it is.. happy/sad.. alwz smilng 4 d sake of 1 prsn.. 😳
RKB.. d gr8 busnsmn knw hw 2 grb d oportunity.. how 2 chnge weakns 2 strength.. 👍🏼
i knew it no 1 can beat Mr.RKB..
1st meetng of ishra.. it thought he will b shckd after seeng her nd wil 2 mihika abt her.. but nthng hpnd lyk dat.. he was so cool.. 😲
nd evn mihika also didnt introduce her when dey r going bak 2 hme nd he gv dem lift..
Plz clear my 1 doubt is mihika is real sis or cousin nd is iishita is only child here..? i mean no vandita nd bala..?

SORRY 4 2 LONG COMNT ND 4 QUES ALSO..

I guess no vandu and bala for Ishita Vishwanath Iyer.

Vandu and Bala will be for Ishita Raman Bhalla.

Mihika is Ishita's own sister.

thanks for comment,.

If I write the book and publish.Publisher will be in losses no one reads my stories.

very few you can count them over fingures.

4 comments after 10 hrs.

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Swapna

@ishra_Fav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Awesome. I always read your work, they are quite interesting stories. This one is my favorite one, please update soon cannot wait for ishita and ruhi bond

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

confidence down.dont know when i will get back

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

very intrstng vikas...

sorry fr late rply...

its a difrnt updte frm ur reglar one's...

its very cool nd v ery intrstng...

raman's chrctr is very sweet...

thnks fr pm...

updte soon...

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: shavi2311
very intrstng vikas...
sorry fr late rply...
its a difrnt updte frm ur reglar one's...
its very cool nd v ery intrstng...
raman's chrctr is very sweet...
thnks fr pm...

updte soon...

dont get fooled with Raman's smile.

he is not at all sweet.

he hides everything in smile.

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Jiyaa

@jiyaa02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Nice!!

But one confusion. Y raman is not shocked to see ishita iyer??

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: jiyaa02
Nice!!
But one confusion. Y raman is not shocked to see ishita iyer??

he is shocked.

But he learnt to suppres his emotions .you will get to know reason.

he wont display any emotion.he have a problem.

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Wow !!! Vikas this is an awesome story..
I loved the way it started initially and the way Ruhi and Raman kept looking at Ishitha ..
Raman kept smiling without getting angry even a bigger surprise ..
Just love the way story is moving ..
The flashback was graceful and heartfelt
Just loved every single line of this FF
Continue soon and Pm you
Thanks

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