MY DREAM TRACK FF.UNDEAD(part 23added)28/01/2015 - Page 33

When r u updating this ff?

Eagerly waiting for the next part..

Please update soon..

I can't believe myself that I din't update for two weks that too undead.

I will try today.

bring it on vikas

waitingg

Did new Ishita ever kissed Raman till now.

Making update wil be there today.

Scene starts with Ishita waking up it is around 5'O clock,Ishita had make it habbit to wake up at that time to make Raman do his exercises.It has been a week since her marriage,marriage which turned her life from simple to complex.It would be a dream for most of the woman to marry a rich,successful and handsom man.But it has never been dream of Ishita Iyer.She dreamt of simple life she expected a caring husband earning 5 digit salary to be with her always to share all his worries and happiness with her.

Ishita definitely got that caring husband.But what made it complex was his first wife .She is look alike of Ishita in every terms.She don't know how but she always felt strange similarity.She has lived 30 years in this earth but she never saw such strange things in her life which she is seeing now.

Her husband the mighty Raman Kumar Bhalla night mare for any one who opposes himin what ever field they wish.He is caring and loving atleast he tries to bridge the gap to say almost bridged the gaps.He loved his first wife very much that he was ready to live with a improper heart whole life as she treated it.Ishita knew if she asks he will accept to heart transplantation but she wanted him to do it himself for her .

She started respecting him more and there is a corner in her heart which already accepted him as husband in all terms but she is not yet ready to accept it openly and ste iin her shoes completely.She is yet behaving as a stranger in his life.She wanted to know completely about Raman and Ishita.She always feared can she love him same way as Ishita.Raman always encouraged her that she never will be compared with Ishita as it is her life and a new lie for him.Ishita will be always part of it as his first love and mother of his child.She is mother of that child too mother which she accepted openly.

She looked at hgis sleeping husband she always likes to see him sleeping .He looks like a child in sleep.No one will agree it is same mighty Raman Bhalla.She loved him that way as he wont be spaking any thing and there wont be his irritating smile.

His smile it never left his face and she almost never saw him without his smile.She loved that smile but bad news is it is what irritates her more.It always looks like a taunt for her but she loved it to see it in his face.But what she sees now is a gentle smile free from worries and every problem he ever knew.

She just lost in him and forward herself to kiss him and she kissed him in his cheek.It would have been proper if Raman has not tilted his face and it landed on his nose and upper lip.Making him awake in an instant.

It came as shocker for Ishita.She knew Raman wont be angry but her fear is she went to quick and she don't know Raman's response.

Raman guessed her hesitation and came back to his teasing mode.Raman Bhalla a giant for outside world but in his house he is normal man.He is trying to adjust himself with his new/old life.He loves teasing Ishita as he did same for old.But he hold a greater respect for Ishita in all ways he don't know reason but she already has special place in his heart.

My be because she dared enough to step into his life or accepting everything without complaint or her courage to stand against him if needed.Many more .

Raman "Tum donon kee puraani aadath hain naa.Itnaa important moment thaa.Merey neend mey he ekiss karnaa thaa."

Ishita "Mere aisa koi iintention nahen thaa.Main bass phone ley rahen thee."

Raman "Jhoot bolna bhee nahen aatha.Theek hain I don't mind.I know I am handsome.Sabh ladkiya yahe chathey hain.You are not exception." Teasing her.

Ishita gave him an angry look "Aapko nahen lag rahan hain kee aap kuch jyaada soch rahen hain."

Raman "Bilkul nahen .Main wohee bol rahan hun jho duniyan bolthee hain."

Ishita "Aapkey peechey naa Shagun key alaawa koi ladkee nahen hain."

Raman "Tumhey aur koi naam nahen miley fir sey ussey kop laarahen hon."

Ishita "Fir sey?"

Raman then looking little annoye "Ishita bhee mujhey ussey key naam sey tease karhtee thee."

Ishita just laughs at Raman's expression."Waisey Raman aapko ussey itnaa problem kyon?"

Raman "Kyon ?Problem ussey nahen usska self proclamation sey hain."

Raman "Jabh main college mey thaa ussney self proclaim kardiya ee hummara affair chal rahan hain aur main ussey pyaar kartha hun.Who ussthak nahen rukhi.Usskey parents sey milkar mera shaadi bhee fix karney kee koshish kee.Uss time mainey Ishita sey shadi karee aur sabh set hogayan.Fir dubaara koshish kar rahen thee tum aagayee."

Raman "Waisey tum donon hummesha mere madad ky lieyn aathey hon."

Ishita just gives a brief smile thinking similarities between han Ishita.

Ishita "Aap bura naa mano tho ek baath poochun?"

Raman "Han waisey bhee bura manney wala hun poochon?"

Ishita gives him a angry stare "Ishita au aapka pehley kiss kabh huan thaa?"

Raman looks little confused and Ishita was tying to hide curiosity.

Raman just burst into laughter.

Raman "Tum jyaada socho math ussney bhee mujhey sothey huen nhee pehla kiss kiyya thaa.But fara hain kee main uss samay soney ka naatak kar rahn thaa.Abh uth gayan."

Ishita looks confused.

Raman "Mujhey tumsey ye hummed nahen thee yar.Mujhey laga tum chupkey nahen karogee.I though you will be more gutsy tum bhee darpok nikalee."

Ishita slaps him on his shoulder.

Ishita "Kyaa huan thaa uss time?"

Raman just wakes up making preperatioon for YOGA and Ishita follows him to guide him.

Raman started "Hummaa shaadi ka second month thaa.You know .Ishita ney mujhsye shaadi sirf apney padaayi continue karney kee thee."

Ishita "Aur end mey naukaree bhe aapkey liyen chod dee"

Raman smiles ."Han"

Raman "Kyaa haun thaa.Mujhye bahuth bhukkaar ho gayan thaa Thyphoid shaayad.Mujhey yaad nahen Ishita ko hoga."

Raman "Ghar mey koi nahen thaa.Maa gahr mey nahen thee.Kuch kaam key liyen Pune gayee thee.Aur main bimmaar pad gayan."

Raman "Tho Ishita ko merey khyaal rakhnaa pada."

Raman "Mainey mana kiyya thaa.Bola koi nurse appoint karloonga.ut who maaney hee nahen.Ek huftey thak ussney mujhye ek minute bhee nahen choda.Har minute mera khyaal rakh rahen thee."

Raman "Ek huftey college nahen gayee.She cared for me lot.She wanted to do that."

Ishita "Fir kyaa huan?"

Raman "Ek huftey baad college gayee tho bahuth saarey lecture sunney padey."

Raman "Unkey doston mey sirf uskee shaadi huin thee.She is only married among friends.Who log tho kuch samjheyngey nahen.Unko laga kee hum kuch Akeley mey time spend karney jhoot bol rahen hain.Aur usska taang keechtey rahen."

Raman "Ek huftey naa aaney par lectures sey bhee daant padee aur saree ilzaam gayan hummarey shaadi par."

Raman "Ishita ka gussa sathey aasmaan pahunchh gayan.Us samay usskey liyen usska paddyi bahuth mahiney thaa.Aur jabh hummarey shaadi key kaaran wahan break honey ka darr lagee tho saara gussa aakar mujhpey nikaal dee."

Raman "Ghar aakar mujye left and right sunadiyan.Mujhey ek mauka nahen diyya baath karney.Fir jabh khatham huan khudh ko kamrey mey bandh kardee."

Raman "Mujhey laga who mujsey naaraz hain tho disturb naa karoo aur main silent hogayan."

Raman "Jabh madam ka gussa shaan ho gayan madam udaas ho gayee kee main ussey baath nahen kar rahan hun.Ussko patha thaa sska decision hain kee merey saath rehna .She wanted to.But uss gussye mey mujhye sunadiya.Ussko laga kee main gussa hun aur mujhey manaaney ka plan mey lagee."

Raman "Jab main so rahan thaajabh mujhye bkyaa bolna hain practice karthee thee.Mujhey bahuth mazaa aatha thaa usska bad bad dekhekar.Tumhaara bhee."looking at Ishita.Ishita just shifts her gazes downward.

Raman "Usssamay achaanak sey kiss milgaya.Main silent tha uss samay.Baath mey bahuth chidaaya ussko uss baarey mey."

Raman "I don't know when but she was always important to me then.Shaadi key pehley huftey key baad humney kabhee uss contract key baarey mey baath nahen kee."

Raman "Shaayad it was destined."

Ishita has small drop of tears in her eyes listening about Raman and Ishita.

Raman sensed it.

Ishita made an excuse "Raman main Ruhi nko dekhkar aathe hun."

Raman knew she is sad and he cant clearly judge her feelings.It is moe complicated for Ishita .

As Ishita is leaving Raman hold her hands and pulled her toward him.

Raman "Main hummesha ussey yeh kehnaa chahthaa thaa.But tumhey bhee tho bolna apad rahan hain."

Raman holding her by her waist tightly.

Raman "Kiss naa gaal par nahen but yahan dee jathee hain" tracing his fingers over her lips as Ishita looks at him lost.

Raman don't know what made him do but he forwarded himself to feel his wifes desires.

Edited

superb...romantic update vikas

too good...aww...i was smiling thouroughly

Raman bhalla is such a tease

hot property...naa purani ishita se control hua naa new vali se..😳😳

too gud update

loved that flashback scene

and ending just superb

me usse bhi kehna chahta thaa...aww

so he finally gave into her desires

good job viKas

this tym pls cont soon

you are a quick updater

we expect more from you

It was lovely update, ishita's insecurities, desires and how Raman understand her feelings. I really wish that one day the Raman you portray will also be Raman from the serial as well. please continue the good work