MY DREAM TRACK FF.UNDEAD(part 23added)28/01/2015 - Page 5

Scene starts with Ishita eating breakfast and Mihika was very happy after the news.To say she is super excited.

Mihika "Amma humey kall raath ussey ney drop kiyya thaa.But humney ek pal key liyen bhee ussey tensed nahen dekha.Poorey bhar muskuraathey rahen .But humey kabhee patha bhee nahen chala kee ussney apnaa chaal chala thaa."

Mihika "I swear to god koi bhee pehchaana nahen hoga kee.Uss muskuraan key peechey itna bada plan thaa."

Same time Subbu comes there to meet Ishita.

Mihika "Akka aap mujhey office drop kardogee kyan mera car kharaab hain naa."

Ishita signs yes.

Ishita "Hi Subbu.Itney subaha yahan aagayen."

Subbu "Kuch nahen basss sabsey milney aaya thaa."

In TV it flashes that Bhalla enterprise snatched project from Khanna's in last minute.Subbu gets irked with this news but Mihika was listening news again and again.

Subbu was about to change the chanel but Mihika stops him.

Mihika "Main dekh rahen hun naa.Tum kaisey badal saktey hon."

Subbu "Jeeeth ka khushi itnaa jaldhee math manaon.Sirf ek project hain issey jeethney sey tumhaara company ney kuch bada nahen kamaaya."

Mihika "Han.Ek hee project hain .But who bhee tumharey company keyt saamney sey jeetha.Fir bhee kuch nahen hain.Aur jyaada aaney waala hain."

Subbu "Tum logon ney cheating karkey jeetha.Saamney sey jeetha nahen saktey they tho peechey sey."

Ishita "Subbu chod do uss baath ko ,abh usskey baarey mey baath karkey kyaa milega.Hogayan naa."

Mihika "Cheating ?Humney?Sab jaanthey hain kissney hummara tender code churaaaya thaa.Humney tumlogon key taraha peechey nahen sabkey saamney kiyya jho bhee kiyya."

Ishita "STOP IT.Abh koi behash nahen hogee iss baath par."

Mihika gets some call from her company.

Mihika "Yes sir."

Mihika "Sir but Why ?Aap jaanthey hain mainey iss project key liyen kitnaa work kiyan aap mujhey nikaal nahen saktey."

Mihika "Sir.Theek hain sir.It's my pleasure.I will be there sir."

Mihika was happy and super excited after the call.

Ishita "Kyaa huan?"

Mihika "Main aapko bathaathe hun.Mujhey uss project sey nikaal diyan gayan hain.Mujey abh Raman sir key saath kaam karna hain.Sir ko yeh shahar nayan hain naa issliyen unko yahan helo karney."

Subbu gives not interested glare at her .

Subbu "Main chaltha hun."

Ishita "Bye."

Subbu leaves and Mihika gets ready to go to office.

But down side Raman's car was waiting for her.Ishita was shocked as he came there.But she just gets into her car as Mihika gets into other car.

Ishita leaves from there but not before watching Raman Bhalla looking at her with same smile.

Mihika "Sir thabkyou sir.I feel honoured to assist you sir."

Raman "Koi baath nahen."

Mihika "Sir who project.Sir aapney kiyya kasiey.I am still in shock that we won that."

Raman just have that smile.

Mihika "Means aapsey behthar koi nahen jaantha hoga kee uss point ko kabh aur kahan laana thaa."

Mihika "Aap poorey time pey jaanthey they kee who project humey hee milney waala hain issliyen aap itney cool they ."

Raman"Is it finished.Who baath poorey ho chukee hain.Abh baath karkey kyaa faidha .Lets concentrate on new project."

Mihika "Han sir.But ek sawaal who project kaun handle kar rahan hain."

Raman "Mihir."

They reach ofice and Mihika have a very busy day while Raman was as usual in same way getting to know new place and employees.He din't feel any difficulty to motivate them.

Then on other side Ishita has different situation.She has usual day and she was quite busy.She finished her appointments for the day and reached house to see tensed atmosphere all over society.There is a meeting going on with families of whole society.

Ishita goes to her mother who was also tensed.

Ishita "Amma kyaa huan?Sab log itnaa pareshaan kyon hain."

Amma "Court sey notice aaya hain ."

Ishita "Kyon?"

Amma "Hummarey society key peechey jho park hain naa."

That park is not just a simple park .It was exactly located in centre of that area.It is directl connected to their parking lot .To say both are combined.On the other side of park there is a hospital on one side while other side an oldage home is there.Taht parked served all of them equally.It seved as playground for kids.Refreshment for senior citizens and patients of hospital.Lot more.That park in centre of that society.

Ishita "Han kyaa huan?"

Amma "Court sey notice aaya hain kee.Who park ka land abh who handover kar rahen hain.Aur humey uss area mey rakhey gaadiyon ya occupied kiyan kuch bhee hon khalee karna hain."

Ishita "What?Who aisey kasiey kar saktey hain."

Amma "Who hee sab log soch rahen hain.Kaisey rokh saktey hain.But suna hain kee kissey ney unlogon ko bribe kiyan hain.Pressure uupar sey hain."

Ishita "Hum abh kyaa kar saktey hain."

Subbu comes there same time.

Subbu "Kyaa haun tum itnaa tension kyon hon?"

Ishita tells him everything.

Subbu "Tum iss baath ko lekey tension hon.Choddo Ishita hum kuch nahen kar paayengey."

Ishita "What do you mean kuch aneh nkar paongee mathlab."

Subbu "Ishita hum uss park ko save aneh kar paayengey."

Subbu "Suna hain kee Ashok sir involved hain.Ussney yahan shopping complex open karney ka plan hain."

Ishita "Yahan?Subbu iss area mey .EK side mey hospital hain.Doosrey taraf oldage home.Yahan kyon karega."

Subbu "Ishu tum samjhogee nahen.Who bass ek bahaana hain.But ussney kuch plan kiyya hoga."

Subbu "Ishu tum bachnahen paogey .choddo.Waisey tumhey kyon faraq pad rahan hain.Shummarey shaadi key baad tum waisey merey ghar shift honey waaaley hon.Tho yahan kuch bhee hon.Why are taking it to head."

Ishita "Subbu.Yeh mera ghar hain ,shaadi key baad bhee mera iss gahr sey rishtha nahen tootega."

Subbu "Tum tho senti hogayen.chod do."

Subbu "Waisey ek chota saw park hain .Usskey liyen yeh sabh important hain kyaa.EK park sey kissey ko koi profit nahen hain.Wahan ek shopping mall hoga tho profits crores mey hongey.You can' t see that."

Ishita "Har waqt paison kee padi hain.Jsut leave it.Yahan bahuth log hain.Koi tho raasth honga."

Ishita "But tumhaara Ashk sir seedhey ley nahen saktey kyaa.Auction rakhney kee kya jaroori hain."

Subbu "Yeh sabh samajh aathey tho tum dentist kyon banthee."

Subbu "Ishu.Iss taraf sey yeh log kuch paison kam karch hongey.Kee koi sanction kiyya hoth tho badey hathon ko jyaada paison dena padtha abh .Bahut reduce hogayan."

Then after few minutes they go back home.Mihika just entered and came to know about the park.

Mihika "Mujhey kuch nahen patha.Raman sir ney bhe ekuch nahen bathaay lag rahan hain.Sir issmey interested nahen hain."

Subbu listens this and boosts Ashok as tricky mind who is making oppetunity from nowhere.

Subbu "So hummarey liyen koi competetion nahen hain."

Ishita and Mihika were silent and so were others.Same time appa comes there.

Amma "Kya huan Vishwa.Kyaa decide huan."

Appa "Hum sabh contribte kar rahen hain.Kee park hum socity key naam register karey aur kissye aur key haath naa lagey."

Appa "Aur hospital and Oldage home waaley bhee contribute kar rahen hain."

Subbu just smirks as if it is joke.

Mihika "Tumhey hassey kyon aarahen hain."

Subbu "Tum sab log milkar contribute karey tho bhee Ashok Khanna sey jeethna."

Ishita "Stop it Subbu.Hum koshish kar rhaen hain jho humsey hosakega hum karengey iss park ko bachaaney."

Subbu leaves after few minutes.

Ishita "Appa auction kabh hain?"

Appa "Iss haftey .Friday."

Mihika "Appa humey jeetheny kee chances hain kyaa."

Appa "Hummarey society mey total 120families hain.Har famiy 10 lakh thak contribute kar sakthee hain.Aur hospital walon bhee kuch paison arraneg kar saktey hain.Fir almost pandrahan karod thak jama kar saktey hain.Who bhee land value sey ten times hain."

Amma "Hum jeesth saktey hain."

Appa "Hum kehnahen saktey.But koshish kar saktey hain.We will try our luck."

Then whole week passes with tension atmoshphere in whole society.They all know once the park is occupied they will silently start to occupy the surrounfding areas so it is about saving their home.

Then finally the day has arrived and all are worried and waiting to know what happened.

Appa being the secretary of society is representing the society.Subbu also was there as he came along with Ashok Khanna.There are few other competetors who din't look dengerouns.

Bid started with Govt announcing the initial cost as I crore.

Some bidder "2 crore."

Appa "3 crore "

Then bid continued for few moments and then finally .

Appa "20 c"

All are little surprised as they came to ten times the cost of land.

Then finally Ashok spoke "Pacchas karod."

All are shocked with this amount no one even had guts to rise the bid again.As 20 C is brave amount but now 50 came as a shock for everyone.Everyone shocked and sad they lost what they want to protect.All have tears n their eyes.Subbu is smiling along with Ashok sseing others in that state.

Subbu came beside Ishita and Mihika who are standing deppressed.Not knowing what else they can do.They have tried all their ways.

Subbu "Bola naa Ashok sir ney bahuth mehnath kee iss project key liyen.Who itney asaani sey haar nahen maanegey."

Subbu "Pacchas karod issileyen bola kee sabka himmatha thootey."

Ishita looks at him teary eyed even Mihika was sad .

Then they could hear announcer announing the bid

"50 crore first time"

"50 crore for second time"

He was about to hit the hammer for third time but they stopped seing a car enetering the arena.

It was black car .To say pitch black as if it is indicating devil .There was not a single part of it that is paited in other colour.

All are looking at it who might it be.Then they could see a man coming out of oit completely dressed in black.

Ishita recogonized him immediately .It is Raman Bhalla .Even Mihika was shocked to see him there.

Raman Bhalla just came to arena and sat in his position.

Announcer announcs that bid came to 50 crore.

Raman looks at Ashok who has victorious smile in his face.But there is some fear in his eyes seeing Raman.Raman just gave his smile and rised his hand to bid his amount

Raman "saun karod."

Even Ashok Khanna was shocked now.To say scattered now.This prooved more than worth for him also.He was played the same game he played.He tried to show what bhe is capable of to Society but now he was played same game by Raman.Not knowing what else he can do.

Every one shocked it is not the amount any one would be seing in their life time but here it flowed like water.Everyone thinking that Raman is mad.

Ishita and Mihika were also in same state.Subbu was shocked as his boss Ashok.

Then bid finished in Raman's favour and he won it and he has same smile in his face.Society people are still in shock that their self respect have been insulted this way.They left that place shocked as if broken from inside.

Raman was standing there.Ashok goes near him.

Ashok "Mujhey kall key haar key baadh laga tum samajhdaar hogey aur intelligent hon but tum tho badey bewakoof nikaley."

Ashok "Yhe land utnaa profit nahen de sakthee.Tumhey saun karod ka loss."

Raman smiles and says "Mera loss key baarey mey baad mey sochtey hain.But tumney bees karod sabko khareedney mey lagaaya usska kya karey.Main tho kissey bhee taraha waapas paloonga iss jameen merey pass hee hoga.Tum kyaa karogey.Tumney tho muft mey paisa baantlee mujhey madad karney."

Raman "Thankyou." Showing him the direction of his car.

Ishita and Mihika look at Raman.Mihika want to leave form there.

Ishita "Ek baar tum unsey baath karon shaayad ?"

Mihika "Akka saun karod kharch kee hain ussney .who itney asaani sey jaaney nahen dengey.Nahen tho main pehley jaakar milthee."

Ishita then still in confusion takes steps towards his car like some unknown force dragging her towards him.

Mihika not knowing what to do just follows her.

Ishita "Sir.Hum jaanthey hain .Yeh aapkey liyen koi buisnesss ho saktha hain.But iss park ko lekar poora area dependent hain .Aap humsey yeh cheenlenegey tho yahan sab log ka zindagee badljaayegee."

Raman looks at her he has a smile on his face but it is not what she saw when she saw him previous time.It is victory smile and has a evin grin on his eyes.She know she can't do anything.

Mihika "Sorry sir .Mere akka apko jaanthe nahen hain .We were sorry."

Mihika tries to take Ishita away from there.

Raman stops her.

Raman "Mainey iss area par saun karod kharch kiyya hain.Yeh 10 acre land .It is more than enough land for just construction of a shopping mall.In a correct hands we can get a profit of 500 crore."

Mihika was still in shocked condition and same is Ishita.

Raman "Aap kehrahen hain kee.Main iss profit ko choddoo."

Ishita "Sir main waisey nahen kehrahen hun.But aap ek baar sochiyen .Aap yahann kuch bhee karey saarey society .."

Raman stops her from speaking.

Raman "Main karoonga.I will leave this park as it is."

Both Ishita and Mihika were shocked .But his eyes told something else to Ishita.

Mihika was about to say thanks to him.

Raman "I will help you with this .So I need a return favour from you."

Pointing at Ishita.,

Ishita and Mihika were shocked as Raman pointed at Ishita.

Ishita "Excuse me.Main aapkeu help kasiey kar sakthee hun."

Ishita "Aap tho mujhey jaanthey bhee naehn hain."

Raman "I know you mrs Ishita Ra.." stops and "Ms Ishita Vishwanath Iyer."

Ishita don't know what to say.Mihika is silent.

Raman "Main aapko jaanth hun.But I will leave it to you whether you can help me or not."

Raman "Aapko mere beti kee Ma ka acting karnaa hoga."

Ishita and Mihika are shocked .

Raman "You heard it right."

Raman "Meri beti ko lagatha hain kee aap usske maa hain.I know yeh sach nahen hain.Isslieyn aapko kuch din key lieyn usske maa ka acting karna hoga."

Raman then remembering the incident in his house.

Ruhi "Mujhey mama chahiyen.Mainey unhey dekha hain."

Raman "Ruhi zidd math karon.Mainey kitney barr kahan hain.Who tumhaarey mama nahen hain who koi aur hain.

Ruhi "Papa nahen mainey apney aankhon sey dekha hain.Who meri mama hee hain."

She was crying and Raman could'nt see her like that.

Raman "Ruhi tumhaarey mama ...Theek hain tumharey mama ko iss gahr mey laonge."

Ruhi "Aap jab thak ussey nahen laathey .Main khaana nahen khaongee."

Raman comes out of the room rememebering Mihika telling about the park issue and whole society got togetehr to save it.

Raman "Its your decision now.I am waiting her for your decision."

Raman "I will be waiting till noon .You can tell your decision by then.I will come exactly at 12 to pickyou up aap Bhalla mansion mey rahengey"

Raman sits inside his car and leaves.

Ishita want to speak something but it is too late.

Mihika "Akka abh kyaa karey.Mujhey laga Raman sir acchey hain but who hummara kamjoori ka isthamaal karna chahthye hain."

Ishita was still in shock as it would be her decision to make.She makes her dteps towards appartments.She could see different place from what she lived all are making arranegments for temporary setup for their parking.Kids bing warned by their parents to not again go back to wards park again.Most people sad and there is no trace of happiness in any one's face.

Ishita goes backt o house and remembers how she was attached to each and everything related to that park.She was bought uo there and she used to play there as kid and her father and mother daily walks ther and many more.

It rest's to her final decision.She tells about what happened to their parents.They strictly denied it .But it is not just about her but whole societies memories .

Then she could listen clock stucking 12.

Ishita knew if she din't reach there immeditly what he might understand.

Then she rushes out side to see him and he was waiting outside the appartment.

Raman "Aapney kyaa dicide kiyya?Aap act karney tayyar hain."

Ishita looks at him and "Main uss bache kye liyye tayyar hun.But if you promise me that you have to maintain your boundaries."

Raman "I am neither interested in you.Meri beti nahen hothe tho mujhye aapey pass aana bhee passand anehn hain."

Raman "I am waiting .I give you 30 min to make your arrangements."

Ishita leaves from there she could'nt believe what just happened.How could a person do such thing .That smile in his face and the deal he kept to her and his eyes saying lot more which cant be true to his smile.A person as calculated and calm as him and no one can imagine he could do such things.

She leaves from there to prepare herself for the journey which is going to turn her life.completely.To what is written in her destiny.

nice start, looking forward

It was an awesome update..👏👏

I dont know Y U feel that Its not that Good ...

I dont think that Its a Let Down ,...Its good ...Its wonderful Actually ...👏

1 thing I would lik to add is ...Make it appear more Realistic ...

I know its very Easy for you ...def not a tough task ...

Many ppl writing OS/SS/FF but no one wud hav even imagined about Ishita's look like

That's the reason why I call You PHD Writer ...😆

Keep Writing ...!!❤️

ishu selfless persn who thnks nd concernd more abt others nd agre wid d condtion of RKB 2 get bak dat area..👏

its gtng intrstng frm each updte...

dis subbu 😡 totally money minded...

raman is vry cool nd very dangrous...

love to ishra chemistry in futre...

what let me down is responce.

It was posted yester day and I am attempting this type of track for first time and no of peple responded and gave opinion is hardly 6-8.I think I can count on fingur tips.

wait for story to come buddy.