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PART 18

Scene statrs with Ishraru coming to Bhalla Mansion in Mumbai and Mrs Bhalla was waiting for them.

She is happy and excited.Ishita is little scared.

Raman bends and takes blessing form he r even Ishita follows the suit.

Mrs Bhalla looking at Ishita she is happy looking at Ishita.

Raman "Ussey aisey kyaa ghoor rahen hon.Tumhey bathaaya tha na kall."

Mrs Bhalla hearing his rumbling voice "Tumharey awaaj ko kyaa hogaya."

Ruhi "Daadi papa ka danton mey problem ho gayee.Ishima ko surgery karnaa pada."

Mrs Bhalla looking in his mouth "Tum kabhee nahen sudhrega.Abh bhee theek sey khaan nahen aatha."

Ishita was silent not knowing how to start speaking as she never knew about Mrs Bhalla.

Then Raman was about to enter the house and Mrs Bhalla stops him.

Mrs Bhalla "Tum kahan jaa rahen hon.Ghar mey naye bahun aaye hain aur griha pra vesh key bhina andhr jaa rahen hon."

Raman "Kitney baar karogey.Udhar bhee huan naa."

Mrs Bhalla "Yeh bhee tumhaara ghar hain.Yahan hona jaroori hain."

Mrs Bhalla turning to Ishita "Tum tho sharmaa rahen hon.Yaar issney kuc nola kyaa merey baarey mey.Koi darney kee jaroori nahen hain."

Ishita was surprised she expected her to be little strict and heavy but she is loud but sweet.

Then Mrs Bhalla makes all roituals and does Ishita's griha pravesh and few more rituals to be followed.

Then Ishita was going to her room as told by Mrs Bhalla and Ruhi is with her daadi enjoying time.

Ishita enters the room and Raman was already there.Ishita could see many pictures of Raman and Ishita all around the room and she could sence how much close they were.

Ishita is looking around room and Raman who was working on laptop .

Raman "Yeh sabh Ishita key hain.Tumhey issey koi problem nahen hoga.I will ake arrangement for yours"

Ishita who was looking at Raman and Ishita photos hung on wall which has Raman lifting Ishita on his arms and they both are smiling.

Raman "Yeh Goa mey lee gayen thee.Specail day thaa hummara.Ussey din mujhey patha chala kee Ishita was expecting."

Ishita was startled by sudden sound then realized what he said.

Ishita "Aap donon bahuth close they naa.I can understand."

Raman "Han they.Tum jyaada saadiyan pehenthee hon naa."

Ishita looking strangely at Raman "Han !kyon?"

Raman "Ishita tho chudidaar prefer karthe hain .Saree kabhee rarely pehenthee hain."

Ishita "Tho?"

Raman "Main bass batha rahan hun.Don't use clothes in this cupboard yeh Ishita ka hain.Tumhaarey liyen main naya banaloonga."

Ishita "Merey liyen merey hain.Main kyon uska use karoongi."

Raman "Wohi tho main bol rahan hun.Use karna nahen padega."

Ishita "Theek hain."

She was surprised by seeing Raman's photos as she could see different Raman there more happy care free with Ishita.Ishita was also so much happy.

Looking at them strange happiness flew through Ishita's veins also.

Then her gazes fell on a showcase.It has a sword in it.It is made of platinum and has few stones and diamonds embedded in it.

Ishita looking at it strangely.

Ishita "Raman yeh kyaa hain?"

Raman looking at it smiles.

Raman "Gift thaa mainey Ishita ko diyan thaa usskey birthday key liyen."

Ishita "Gift mey talwaar."

Raman "Jhansi ki Rani hain.issliyen yeh diyan aur kyaa detha jho ussko useful hain."

Then Raman remembering.

Ishita is in her room and was annoyed .

Ishita "Sabne gifts diyan aur Raman tho bhool hee gayan.Mihir ko yaad dilaana pada.aaj mera birth day hain."

Ishita "Iss Ravan kumar sey aur kyaa expect karsakthee hun main."

Ishita is scolding him in mouth itself.

Thens ame time Raman comes from behind and hugs her tightly.

Ishita is annoyed "Chodiyen mujhey."

Raman "Nahenn chodunga tho."

Ishita "Tho?Aap mujhsye baath math keejiyen.Aaj mera birthday hain sabney wish kiya.Abh raath gyaarah baj rahan hain abh thak aapney ek baar bhe nahen bola.Aapko tho yaad bhee nahen thaa. "

Raman "Kissney bola mujhye yaad nahen thaa."

Ishita "Aapko yaad tha tho mujhye wish kyon nahen kiyya.Aap abh jhoot math bolyen.Issey accha to Nelu hain naukar hain ussney bhee bola."

Raman "Tho main boldetha tho mujhmey aur ussmey kyaa faraq rehthaa.Abh dekho tumhey kiynaa accha yaad hain mainey nahen bola.Boldetha tho bhool athee."

Ishita "Abh aap us stupid logics use math keejiyen.Aur mujhye chodiyen."

Raman "Kahan jaana hain?"

Ishita "Kahee bhaa bass aapsey door."

Raman "Sorry.Out of options.Tumhaara time abh doosro ko dediyan hain.Abh bass mera time bach hain."

Raman "So from now on my time aur tumhaarey saarey appointments and calls are cancelled ."

Raman "I have to spend time with my beloved wife."

Ishita was still annoyed "Abh yaad aaye aapko."

Raman "Last bola tho kyaa huan.Sabsey special tho main hee hu naa." Kissing her in cheek.

Ishita is still annoyes and pouting.

Raman "Tumhey aaj do gifts milengey.Boldo pehla kaunsa waala chahiyen.Pehlaa tumhaara hoga.Doosra hummara hoga."

Ishita understood what he meant "Aap hee deejiyen."

Then Raman gives her a gift wrap Ishita is confused what is in it and opens it and shocked to see sword in it.

Ishita "Yeh kyaa hain."

Raman "Meri jhansi ki Rani ki talwaar gaayab hain tho specially banwaaya.Ek baar ek pose tho do."

Stretching her hand keeping it in his hands.

Ishita "Issey seey aapka khoon kardoongi."

Raman "Try it."

Opening his arms.Ishita is shocked at this sudden act then slowly hugs him.

Ishita "Aisa gift koi detha hain kyaa?Kissye ko bol bhee nahen paongee."

Raman "Issliyen doosra bhee hain.Are you ready."

She just blushes knowing what is coming.

Raman "Sharmaaney sey kuch nahen hoga.BTW yeh gift tumhey aur koi nahen de saktha." Naughtily.

Ishita "Main kissey sey lethee bhe nahen.Bass aap sey."

Ishita just hides her face in his chest while Ramanlifts her up to bed.

They enjoy their moment together and Raman tells her wishes at just 11:59.

Raman breaks out of it.

As Ishita was closing the door.

Raman smiles "Tumhaara birthday kabh hain."

Ishita "Kyon."

Raman "Bathaaney mey tax lagthee hain kyaa.Bathaon naa.?"

Ishita "Nov 14."

Raman smiles .

Ishita "Aap hass kyon rahen hon?"

Raman "Ruhi ka birthday bhee usse din hain.Infact hummara shaadi ka date bhee."

Ishita "Aap donon kaa."

Raman "Ruhi hummarey marriage anniversary mey paidha huin thee.Issliyen hummesha celebrationa double hotha thaa."

Ishita "Hummara 11 feb."

Raman "Uss din bhee ek special hain."

Ishita "Kyaa ?"

Raman "Main nahen bathaonga.Tumhey khudh patha karna hoga."

Ishita "Yeh math boliyen kee ussdin Ishita ka birthday hain."

Raman "Nahen but mera hain."

Ishita is shocked to peak she din't saw it coming.

Ishita then hitting her head "Belated wishes.Sorry mujhye patha nahen thaa."

Raman "Kall utna drama mey main bhee bhool gayan thaa.But I don't know Ruhi kasiey bhool gayee."

Ruhi coming same time understood she forgot her fathers birthday as she was planning his marriage same day.

Ruhi comes running and hugs him"Sorry papa.Belated happy birthday.Aap mujhye yaad kyon nahen dilaaya."

Raman "Mujhye laga tumney surprise plan kiyya.Surpris etho diyan mera shaadi karwaakar."

Raman smiles and Ishita embrassed.

Same time Mrs Bhalla calls Ishita and Ruhi.

Raman "Ishita saath Bhajey humey jaana hain.Jaldhee aana."

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PART 19

Ishita leaves to attend Mrs Bhalla and Ruhi is along with her.

Mrs Bhalla was seperating jewellary from her counter.

Mrs Bhalla "Ishita yeh sabh tumhaarry liyen hain."

Ishita "Yeh sabh kee kya jaroori hain.Yeh sabh karney kee koi jaroori nahen hain."

Mrs Bhalla "Yeh sabh tumhaarey he hain.Mainey tumhaarey liyen khareedha thaa."

Ishita "Mathlab Ishita key liyen."

Mrs Bhalla "Tum bhee Ishita hee hon.Aur yeh kyaa Ishita bularahen hon."

Ruhi "Daadi papa Ishima ko tho naam sey bhee nahen bulaathey.Mujhey bhee mana kiyya mama bolney."

Mrs Bhalla scolding him in herself "Tum choddo ussko.Mainey tumhaarey liyen khareddha .Meri bahun key liyen."

Ishita Main yeh sabh kaisey le sakthee hun.Yeh Tho Ishita key hain.Who aapkey pehlee bahun thee."

Mrs Bhalla laughing "Nahen.Main jaanthe hun Ishita ko iss ghar mey apnee jagaha hain aur sabkey zindage mey bhee.But tum usski jagaha nahen apney jagaha aaye hon."

Mrs Bhalla "Tumhey iss gahr mey aur hummarey life mey alag jagah hain.Tum yeh yaad rakhnaa."

Ishita remembers Raman's words.

Ishita was silent.

Seeing Ruhi and Mrs Bhalla Ishita gets a doubt.

Ishita "Auntyjee aap bura naa maano tho main ek sawaal kar sakthee hun kyaa?"

Mrs Bhalla understood what she is going to ask "Han main bhee uss plan mey thee.Tum donon ka shaadi me mera bhee involvemet thaa."

Ishita is shocked .Then she tells she was actually planning to ask Amma and Appa for Ishita's hand to Raman .But then she came to know about her engagement with Subbu.

Mrs Bhalla "Humney tho socha abh namumkil hain.Uss samay humey tumhaari behen sey patha chala Subbu key baarey mey.Who kaisey insaan hain."

Mrs Bhalla "Humey laga kee uss jaisey insaan sey tumhaarey shaadi rokhney mey koi galathee nahen hain.Aur Ruhi ney Shagun ko bhadkaadiya."

Mrs Bhalla "Tumhaarey shaadi key subaha mainey Raman ko phone kiyya aur ussko samjhaaya kee Ruhi ko maa chahiyen aur jabh Ruhi ney tumhaara haath maanga.Plan success."

Mrs Bhalla "Ishita maaf karon puttar.Yeh sabh mainey mera pariwaar key khushi key liyen kiyya.Par main issliyen sharmeele tho nahen hun."

Ishita was shocked at revealation she don't know how to react.Even though both Ishit and Mrs Bhalla revealed everything she is not angry at them but somewhere she is happy.She felt this people are better who did cheat with love for her than people who faked love for their needs.

Mrs Bhalla "Bass main kitney dinon sey intazaar kar rahen thee tumhey dekhney.Bilkul Ishita jasiey hon.Par tumhey apnaa alag baath hain.Tumhey alag rakhthe hain ."

Mrs Bhalla "Aaj main bahuth khush hun tumhey dekhkar meray saarey khwaab aaj poorey huyen."

Mrs Bhalla "Aaj Ruhi key liyen ek maa hain aur Raman kee patnee."

Ishita heard how helpful she was for Ishita and how she acted as cupid for them.

Now she is seeing directly.

Mrs Bhalla "Ishita tu jaa putthar party key liyen time ho rahan hain Raman wait kar rahan hoga."

Ishita gets ready and goes to party along with Raman.She was first time alone with Raman surrounded by strangers .Her only known person was her husband who himself was also a stranger for her.

Raman "Ishita don't get tense.I am with you.Tumhey darrney kee jaroori nahen hain.If you feel bored tell me we will leave the party."Raman spoke those words sensing the tense in Ishita's face.

Ishita just nodded seinf her husband close.

But a surprise came in party for both seeing Ashok and Subbu.

Ishita was shocked to see them both.

Then Raman meets the person he has to meet and then he helps them to get a contract they get to know about Ashok's presence.

Ishita "Raman Ashok bhee iss field mey hain kyaa."

Raman "Actually nahen hain but kehthey hain naa dushman ka dushman doosth hotha hain."

Ishita "Samjhee nahen ."

Raman "Suraj Khanna.Ashok ka bhai hain who mera puraana rival thaa.Who iss field mey pehley hee hain."

Ishita "Aapka rival aapsey pehley ."

Raman "Main Inida mey concentrate kabh kiyya.Mera saarey business tho world wide speread hain.Abh yahan aaya hun."

Raman "Main yahee koshish kiya hotha tho baath alag hothee."

Raman leaves to get a drink and Ashok was speaking to Suraj on something and Subbu comes near Ishita.

Ishita tries to not notince him but he came near her.

Subbu "Hi!Ishita."

Ishita just smiles .

Subbu "I din't expect you here.Oh yaa tumhaarey pati key saath aaye hogee."

Ishita was silent.

Subbu "This is all what you wanted right."

Ishita "Excuse me."

Subbu "Expensive dresses.Costly parties and name and fame.Isslieyn Raman Kumar Bhalla ko fasaaya tumney."

Ishita gets instantky annoyed and same time Raman comes there he heard what he said.

He just comes and stands there .

Subbu "Pehley unkee beti ko fassaya aur usski jariyen ussey shadi kee.Nice planning."

Raman was in usual mode smiling and Ishit was getting very angry on the words he is telling.

Ishita was about to say something.Raman stops her.

Raman "Ishita don't "

Ishita "Raman yeh sabh jhoot hain.Mera kabhee aisa intention nahen thaa."

Raman "You still din't get it.Who bass issue create kar rahan hain.Abh dekho kyaa hoga.Hum kuch bolenega tho issue badega .Hum aisey chod dengey tho who bewakoof banega.Chod do ussey.You have to learn about this."

Then after few minutes Raman and Ishita comes back home .

Same time he get a call from Sector asking him in his interest in engine manufacturing and it is what Raman wanted and he tells them will inform in couple of days .

The oment he cuts the call his smile is evident of much more.

Ishita "Kyaa huan?Achaanak itna bada offer kaisey mila."

Raman "Mera germany ka ek client party mey thaa.Mainey usska help liyam.Problem solved Suraj eliminated."

Ishita "Mathlab."

Raman "Mainey uney company ka details bathaaya.Aur Ashok key business loss key baarey mey,So obvious choice main hee hun naa.Who mera client bhe thaa.So ussko patha hain hummaray company key baarey mey."

Mrs Bhalla also gets excited and was distributing sweets.

Mrs Bhalla "Tum donon naa Raman key zindagee mey sab khushiya hee laayen hon."

Mrs Bhalla "Kall tumhaari shaadi huin aur Aaj Raman do badey contracts jeethliyan.Uss baar bhe wohi huan thaa."

Ishita was confused and Raman was silent and stern.

Mrs Bhalla "Ishita sey shaadi key agala din hee Raman ko ek bada award mila thaa kyaa award hain?"

Raman "Fast growing Enterprise aur Best Enterpreuner."

Raman "Maa main uss bar bhee bola thaa abh bhee bol rahan hun"

Raman "Luck naam kee cheez nahen hothe."

Raman "Who naam jho log lethey hain jisskey pass apney haar ka reason na patha hon."

Raman "It is just used by loosers to cover up their mistake."

Raman leaves from there.

Mrs Bhalla "Ishita tum fikar math kar.Who aisa hee hain."

Mrs Bhalla "Par sach yeh hain kee Jab Ishita isski zindagee mey aaye thee sab kuchvsahee ho rahan thaa aur ussey koi rokhney waala nahen thaa.But who ghar mey bhee rehthaa tha.Par jab sey Ishita gayee.Ussko ghar aaney ka ..."

Ishita understood what she meant.

Mrs Bhalla "Abh tum aagayen hon naa.Sab badal jaayega.Thodey din kee baath hain sab kuch theek hojayega."

Mrs Bhalla leaves telling this and Ishita was in shocked state on confidence she had on her and how she is gonna make this possible.She then looks at Raman and Ishita's photos in room.

Raman "Tum luck pey vishwaas karthee hon?"

Ishita "Aapko kyaa lag rahan hain main karthee hun."

Raman "Ishita karthee thee.Shaayad tum bhee."

Ishita "I believe in destiny.Jho hon hain hokey rahega.Aap aur mai ussey badal nahen saktey.But luck?"

Raman "Tum kuch poochney aaye hon."

Ishita "Hum kabh thak yahan rahengey ?"

Raman "Jab thak maa kaa mood na badaley.Who humey kahee jaaney bhe nahen dengee.Aur who yeh ghar chodkar nahen aayegee."

Ishita was silent then Raman looks in all surroundings.

Ishita "Kyaa dekh rahen hain?"

Raman "Bahuth cheezey missing hain.Extra pillows aur mattress nahen hain aur AC ka remote bhee gaayb hain aut temp bahuth low rakha hain."

Ishita was confused not understanting the meaning.

Raman "Jaroor maa ney kiyya hoga usskey alaawa koi nahen kar saktha."

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow.. i loved the part everyone is giving Ishita the space...
asusually Raman and ishita was lovely...

Raman ne Talvar gift kiya in flashback ... flashback was awsm...

i loved tht part Raman cooling down Ishita... it was too unique ifelt...
just lovely and beautiful updates...
thanks vikas😊
Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
suprb...
loved mrs.bhalla nd her love dtowrds ishu...
raman calm natre nd takng all contrcts...
mrs.bhalla palning was too good...no pillows, no xtra quilt ac temp low...
kya tarkeeb apnaya mrs.bhalla ne...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
OK so master mind is toshiji
fb was nice
friends870 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Loved Mrs.Bhalla support & her confidence in ishita..
Raman's cool and business mind was simply superb.
Can't wait for the next update..
pls update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update ishita and mrs bhalla's bonding is so nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm updates dr.
Beautiful.
Mrs. Bhalla and ishita's bonding nice.
Raman and 2 ishita's moments r so sweet.
Update nxt sn.
Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb. eagelry waiting fr next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
waahhh
mrs bhalla s the strongest cupid here 🤣

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