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PART 2


Then with in minutes all are gathered to clear the suspence.Subbu cam eback to Ishita and they both sat togethee.Mihika was with her coleagues and not surprised Raman Bhalla was there standing there confident and smiling.

Subbu "Kya dekh rahen hon?"

Ishita "Kuch nahen?Mihika."

Subbu "Han who white shirt mey hain naa who hee hain Raman Bhalla.Dekho kaisey hass rahan hain.Kuch hee time mey who hasse gaayab hogee."

Ishita "Subbu.Mihika ney bathaaya kee kissey ney unka tender code leak kiyya hain.Who sach hain kyaa."

Subbu "Kissko patha.It is just their own explanation for the loss.Who waisey yeh project haarney waaley hain.Bahaan chahiyen naa.issliyen banaaya hoga kee tender code leak huan hain."

Subbu "Just wait you will get to know."

Ishita couls see light shiver in his eyes indiacating statement to be true that it is stolen.But she was not surprised but what surprised her was Raman Bhalla.How is he maintaining that smile even now?

Then She could see .Some people climbing the dias and everyone looking at them.They have few files in their hands and a cover .

Then she saw them discussing and she saw Mihika and her boss standing there.She could see Mihika tensed and she called Ishita to come near her.

Ishita "Subbu .Main Mihika key pass jaathe hun.Who bularahen hain."

Subbu was not at all interested so he simply let her go.

Mihika was standing beside Raman Bhalla.

Ishita "Tumney mujhye kyon bulaaya."

Mihika "Akka I am tensed.Koi nahen hain yahan.Raman sir ney sabko ghar jaaney key liyen kahan.I am waiting for result."

Then same time announcer on the stage starts speaking.Ishita din't listen anything but she could see smile in his face unfazed.

Then she heard "We have tough competetion hera among Bhalla Enterprise and Khanna's but we have a winner by border .Both have bid for same money but Khanna's were very experianced in this field so Khanna's take the lead."

She can see smile in his face still now.

Ishita was standing with Mihika who was waiting for next order from her boss.She could see Ashok Khanna's huge smile in his face and winning grin.He looked at Raman Bhalla and gave a victory smile.

He came to Raman Bhalla and he simply gave him a shake hand.

Raman Bhalla "Congracts."

Ashok Khanna "Thankyou.You just lost by margin.But you are tough opponent."

Raman "That I am.You can call me if you need any help."

Ashok Khanna was shocked by what he said and same were many.Mihika was puzzled and Ishita don't understand all this was looking silently.

Ashok "Aap iss shahar key liyen nayen hain aap mera help karengey."

Raman "Why no?Aap iss shahar mey salon sey rehrahen hain.Aur aapka company bhee bahuth experianced hain."

Ashok "Han."

Raman "Aapka company pacchas saal pehley suru huan thaa.Aur aapkey machines bees ssaal pooraaani hain.Mainey suna bhee hain kee dass saal sey unka sevicing bhee nahen huan.Tho quality to kam hogee he naa.So if you need any help I will do it for you.Duniya chotee hain hum doobara jaroor milengey." Giving him his visiting card.

Raman Bhalla walks out from there still he has that smile.

Ishita sees Subbu celebrating with his co workers and messages him that she is leaving.She is walking over the entrance.

She couls see Raman Bhalla speaking with media.Mihika stops to listen what he is speaking.

Reporter "Sir Aapney kahan kee .Khanna industries key machines puraaney hain.Aap unhey help karengey.Kyaa yehh sach hain."

Raman "Han sach hain.Unkey puraaney machines key wajahansey cost and quality mey problem hogee.Who log time mey supply karney kee koshish karengey tho quality mey compramise karnaa hoga.Agar quality mey koshish karey tho demand match nahen karpaayengey."

Reporter "Aap unkaa help kasiey karsaktey hain."

Raman "Hummarey pass most advanced machines hain.Efficiency unkey machines sey duguna.SO you can understand what I say."

Mihika and Ishita leave in Mihika's car.Both were silent.

Ishita "Tum utnaa sad kyon hon?"

Mihika "Akk it was my dream project.Hum miss hogayen.Who bhee unlogey ney cheating kee hain.But hummara boss kuch nahen kiyyaa.But unkaa help karney ka plan hain."

Ishita "Tum tension amth loo.Yeh projetc nahen tho doosra milega."

Suddenly car stops and they realized some problem with engine.

They were waiting on other side for a taxi and they could see a white car commig there.W hich stops looking at them.It was very big and look specially made .It belonged to Raman Bhalla and he is driving himself.

Raman "Kyaa poblem hain?"

Mihika "Sir hummara car repair huan hain so."

Raman "Main drop kardoonga." She sit in car Mihika sat beside Raman and Ishita took backseat.

Raman "Kahan jaana hain."

Mihika "Mayur Vihaar .sir main raasth bathaongee."

Raman "Good."h e starts the car and about five minutes later.

Mihika "Sir if you don't mind can I ask you a question."

Raman "No need.Main bathadetha hun.Yeh sirf ek project hain.Isskey baad humesy hazaron milengey.So why should we get tensed."

Mihika "Sir but aap iss project key liyen aaye they.Hum actually jeeth sakthey they.But aapney humey rokha kyon."

Raman "Wohee tho galthee hain.Who chahtha hain kee hum yeh karey last minute trials will make us nothing but it will prove fatal to company."

Rama n"Hum karbhee lethey tho kuch amount reduce karthey.So compromise in profits.Unncessary.So lets wait for chance and strike."

Raman "Duniyan chothee hain.Bahuth chothee.Aaj ussney khela kall hum khelengey.Mujhey kissye ney kahan ."

Mihika "But aapney unko help karney kee bath kyo kahan."

Raman "Kee zindgae bahuth chothee hain sab hummarey dosth hee hothey hain.Aaj hum kissey ka madad karengey tho kissko patha who shaayad humey kabhee kam ka hon."

Raman then thinking about something.

Raman and Ishita were in some water falls and they are enjoying there.Ishita was happy and playing with water and Raman was happy seing her that way.Raman hugs her from backside.

Ishita "Raman chodiyen mujhye koi dekhega."

Raman "Issliye kehtha hun.Hum donon ko akeley reserve karna chahiyen thaa.Koi nahen hoga humey disturb karney."kissing her on cheek while leaving her.

Ishita "Raman aapko hummesha aisea hee lagega.Raman but hum donon key khushi key liyen sabko kyon inconinience create karey.Who log bhee apney family key saath time spend karney aayen hain jaisey hum donon."

Raman "Tum apnaa lecture bandh karon.ujhye neend aajayegee."

They were then sitting beside water falls drinking coffee.Then suddenly they hear a kid shouting loudly for help he was drowning there.

Ishita immediately rushes to help.Then when she almost lost her step in water.Raman rescues her andjumps to save the kid and was successful.

Then later Raman comes back to Ishita who was rubbing his head with towel.

Raman "Ishita tumhey jaaney kee yaa jaroori thee.Koi aur bhee help kathey naa.Tumhey kuch ho jatha tho."

Ishita "Raman aap hon tho mujhey kyaa hoga.I know aap mujhey kuch nahen honey dengey."

Rama n"But koi aur bhee unka help karsaktey hain."

Ishita "Kee zindgae bahuth chothee hain sab hummarey dosth hee hothey hain.Aaj hum kissey ka madad karengey tho kissko patha who shaayad humey kabhee kam ka hon."

Mihika "You are strange sir.Koi believe bhe nahen karega kee.Aao itney badey company ka powner hain.Aap haarney ke baad behe aapkey chahrey mey smile nahen gayen."

Raman "Waada sey bandha hun.I promised a special person in my life.That I always keep this smile on my face.what ever happen."

Then they reach Mayur Vihaar.Raman leaves from there but Ishita noticed in whole journey that Raman was looking at her through mirror.

Raman leaves fromthere as he recieves some call and sisters retard to their room.

Mihika was happy now after speaking with Raman and she is confident that success is waiting for more.

Ishhita and Mihika wnrt to bed being tired in a boring party .Ishita is confused remembering the kid she saw morning.She could see how she looked at her and then Raman Bhalla .

Then she slipped to sleep after thinking about both incidents.

Then in morning she woke up suddenly because of huge sounds .Mihika was shouting loudly and was excited.

Ishita jumped out of bed and .

Ishita "Kyaa hogayan tum itna suabaha suabaha kyon vhillarahen hon."

Mihika "Akka please don't stop me .Aaapp bhee shock hojaongey.Yeh dekhkar."

Mihika shows Ishita the news paper where it is written that Bhalla enterprise snatches the project from Khanna'.In details it is written project was dicided to give to Khanna's but in last munute of signing it was givent o Bhalla's.Reason being Khanna's inferior machinary compared to Bhalla's and hiding the fact anput their company machinary costed them with disciplinary charges.

Ishita was shocked seing this news.Now she remembers he incidentally telling that he will help them if needed.Then pointing out their weakness infront of media and indirectly everyone.

He snatched project from their had front with smile and no one ever saw it coming.

Mihika "Akka dekho ussney apna jaal jala kissey ko patha bhee nahen chala."

Mihika "Abh samajh mey aa rahan hain.Why is Raman Bhalla called Insane Mind of Buisness."

Ishita could still remember his smile and how coll he was whole time and no one saw it coming.

Mihika "Sach mey humney last minute changes kiya hotha tho profits kamm huen hongey aur unkaa yeh secret lissey ko nahen patha chaltha."

Mihika "But abh.Hum project bhee jeeth lee.Profit bhee kam nahen huan aur unkey uupar disciplinary chareges aur who log yeh clear honey thak doosrey project apply nahen kar saktey."

Mihika "Raman Bhalla is Raman Bhalla."

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Awesum update
u rocked in frst part only vikas
ishita met frst ruhi and then raman
all shocked to see her
rivalry of ashok n raman
i think raman will win...as usual
aww..he kept smiling
keeping promise
ashok just pomp n show
so ishita with subbu still
lets c how she comes to know his true face

Good job vikas
i guess u r writing second also
will be waitinhg
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Awesum update

u rocked in frst part only vikas
ishita met frst ruhi and then raman
all shocked to see her
rivalry of ashok n raman
i think raman will win...as usual
aww..he kept smiling
keeping promise
ashok just pomp n show
so ishita with subbu still
lets c how she comes to know his true face

Good job vikas
i guess u r writing second also
will be waitinhg

Thabks for reading buddy.
Subbu has long story till he breaks his engagement.
He will keep promise life long till death.
She dont care about his professional life till little time.where he asks for help against Raman she would be staying in bhalla house for Ruhi.
thanks for reading and liking.
updated secong part.
hope you like it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

Thabks for reading buddy.
Subbu has long story till he breaks his engagement.
He will keep promise life long till death.
She dont care about his professional life till little time.where he asks for help against Raman she would be staying in bhalla house for Ruhi.
thanks for reading and liking.
updated secong part.
hope you like it.

wow...the future track seems interseting
gonna read second part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Raman bhalla is ramn bhalla
I knew he would win
ashok kya cheez hai uske samne
vikas...that raman ishita memory sequence was awesum
both father daughter duo looking at ishita and she is confused
well...i think they gonna come n live in mayur vihar now
maybe
cont soon
will be waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Raman bhalla is ramn bhalla

I knew he would win
ashok kya cheez hai uske samne
vikas...that raman ishita memory sequence was awesum
both father daughter duo looking at ishita and she is confused
well...i think they gonna come n live in mayur vihar now
maybe
cont soon
will be waiting

no.
Ishita has to go to Bhalla mansion .
Raman will make Isita act as Ruhi's mother
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing... Superb... Mind blowing...
Both ruhi and raman r staring at ishita and she is confused.
RKB is RKB.Mastermind of business.
Awww he is keeping the promise he made 2 ishita. So sweet.
Is there love between raman and this ishita in future?
Seriously dr,I didn't think this1 become this interesting.VRY SRY 4 that thought of mine.
Again,amazing story. Update sn.tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RMGT

Amazing... Superb... Mind blowing...
Both ruhi and raman r staring at ishita and she is confused.
RKB is RKB.Mastermind of business.
Awww he is keeping the promise he made 2 ishita. So sweet.
Is there love between raman and this ishita in future?
Seriously dr,I didn't think this1 become this interesting.VRY SRY 4 that thought of mine.
Again,amazing story. Update sn.tnx 4 pm

Yes there would be love story between Ishita and Raman.Both.Even flashback also there is story.Not a simple one.Complicated there also.
Only you are saying it is intersting.I updated them at 8'O clock and only two people gave opinion.
You and ankita.
I don't know what to say.whether to continue or not.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

Here I am planning to make the list of PM's for this ff.There are many who wont read in my buddy list so I decided to make it seperate .

You can tell me either you want this pm or not .Same way you can remove your name from list




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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

no.
Ishita has to go to Bhalla mansion .
Raman will make Isita act as Ruhi's mother

oh..ok ok

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