OS: His Eyes Don't Lie (Updated Last Part (4) on Pg 8)

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RheaSh

@RheaSh

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Excellent in one word.
Ishita's expectations finally paid off. Her Ravaan Kumar finally had to let his shield down.
Loved the way you used Vandu akka's baby shower as a context to show how truly Ishita's blessed having such loving and caring in-laws.
Ishita ultimately showed to everyone including Subbu and his mom that nothing mattered to her except HIM---this part was icing on the cake.
Waiting for your next piece.

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Dear I see that you are a Newbie. If you start the PM service then you would get a flood of likes for sure.😆

Just read all three parts in one go and what an emotional roller coaster you took me through. An amazing and beautiful experience through the eyes of Ishita. The way she said "His eyes dont lie" everytime towards the end, just tugged at my heart. His remorse,his guilt, his anger. Her determination was enough to encompass all of it. Just loved it dear.😳

Waiting hungrily for next part😆 and expecting more stories from you😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Hey this is beautifully written.

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Hey this is beautifully written.. I love the way you've used the title in each update.. so apt😊

Continue soon😳

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sulochana90

@sulochana90

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

wow

so true what a family ishu has , she can fight any situation when her whole family is by her side

loved how ruhi never let go off her ishima's hand

loved the way ishu gave back answer

and Raman just hats off so caring so protective so loving how did he think he could stay without her how could he think that his love could like without him

wonderful chapter

plz update the next part soon

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Amazing update...

Read all three parts in one go...

Brilliant...👏👏

Waiting for the last update...😊😊

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Remya

@remya1990

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Wonderful update dear...

can very well picturise the situation.

loved it dear...

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Brilliant update!
Finally he had to let his guard down. Her silence and wait finally paid off and he spilled out the truth. The support she has is just so heart warming and the way she gave it back to Subbu and his mom, totally worth it. The best obviously is, he spoke up! ⭐️

Loved the update, it was truly brilliant. Keep up the awesome work! 😃 Waiting for the next part already Continue soon :) Thanks! 😳

Edited by -IshRaDivAn- - 10 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

this is d beautiful story
really loved it

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

only one word to describe it PERFECT...

Awesome update...

the family ready t o fight for her...

Chandran aunty ugh 😡

so Ishita has finally won the war in the battles going on...

liked these few lines...waiting for more

his eyes tell me that I have won... but being only human I want more... I am tired of this war that we have been fighting... I want the words now... and I know that they are going to come soon... because his eyes don't lie...

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