OS: His Eyes Don't Lie (Updated Last Part (4) on Pg 8)

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Hello everyone... it is a boring Sunday and the new spoilers make it even worse... so to distract myself I wrote this small piece.. it is from Ishita's point of view... hope you all like it... Enjoy!!!
PS: not proofread.

Part 2 is on Page 3
Part 3 is on Page 5
Part 4 is on Page 8


HIS EYES DON'T LIE

The whole family is shouting and yelling... Amma is crying... Mummy ji is comforting her while hurling accusations at him... Appa and Papa ji are calling him a failure... Simmi is insisting that he could never do such a thing... Asking him to tell the truth... Romi is being pulled away by Mihir and Mihika as he makes a grab for his collar... Asking him how he could do such a thing?... But I just stand there... staring at him... wondering if what I just heard was the truth or a very bad joke... I look at him... See him fidget with his fingers... shuffle his feet as he silently bears the brunt of everyone's anger... and then I see his eyes...

They say that a person's eyes are a reflection of his deepest secrets... and this fact couldn't be more true for my Raavan Kumar... Raman has had such a bitter life till now that he has learnt to hide his true feelings... that aggressive, angry and arrogant mask that he has been wearing for the last six years has become a second skin to him now and not many people can look beyond it... But I can... his words, his actions, his attitude and his body language may be saying something... but his eyes never lie... and finally I have learnt to read those eyes... understand what he is feeling rather that what he is superficially saying...

That is the reason that I look into his eyes... searching for the truth... because I refuse to believe what he has just said... I refuse to believe that he cheated... that our relationship is a farce... that he has fallen for this woman who stands there all smug and arrogant... I can hear Vandu Akka asking me to say something... I can hear Romi assuring me that he is with me... I can feel Mihika and Mihir standing behind me... silently telling me that they are with me... I can hear the elders tell him that Ruhi will always stay with me... no matter what... but right at that moment... all I care about is to get 5 seconds... just 5 seconds where I can delve into his soul... understand why he is lying...

And then I see it... A thrill of triumph runs through me as I see that look in his eyes... I see the apprehension in his eyes... I see the way he refuses to look at me when he asks for a separation... I see the way he tries to glance at me from the side trying to ensure that I am OK... If he really does not love me he wouldn't care... it wouldn't bother him that I am hurting... but it does... his words say that he is in love with this woman standing next to him but his eyes say that he loves me...

He looks at me... and then his eyes shift to someone behind me... I see him give a look of assurance... I see his eyes tell that person that everything is taken care of... I turn back to see Bala Jiju standing there... not looking at me... not meeting my gaze... but looking at him and Akka with guilt filled eyes... suddenly I have an inkling... he loves me... he loves me enough to love my family... to protect my family... I look at him and smile...

Two minutes ago my world was falling apart... but now I am OK... I am OK because even though I may not know everything, I do know that he is lying... I may not know why he is doing this... what the future holds... but I do know that he loves me... loves me enough to lie for me... I know that he may be saying that he doesn't...but his eyes don't lie... they tell me that he does... so I am going to wait... I am going to wait till he tells me the truth... because I trust him... because his eyes don't lie...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing os
I loved the way it showed that Ishita knew Raman couldn't cheat on her 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishralover

Amazing os
I loved the way it showed that Ishita knew Raman couldn't cheat on her 😊



Thank you!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was so touching.I mean the way ishu decoded Raman was so emotional.
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Originally posted by: lourel24

It was so touching.I mean the way ishu decoded Raman was so emotional.


Originally posted by: remya1990

This is beautiful...emotional...loved it.


Thank you!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb.
Very well written.If possible do continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..
Lovely OS dear.. It was beautiful <3
The unsaid understanding between them, the extent to which she knows him and understands him was penned down so beautifully.! It doesn't take her long enough to see through him and she finally does.. She being the only one who can do that.

Loved the OS.. Would love to read a continuation to this one ! Wana see how she confronts him.. Continue if possible :) Thanks..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ishita knows Raman, understands him in and out.. This is well explained here.. I so want this happening in the show.. Awesome...
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Loved it. I hope they show this on the show.
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Wow... Thank you everyone for liking this piece... for the first time i am actually writing a part two... hope you all like it... Enjoy!!!

PART 2


It is three in the morning... everyone is finally asleep... but I am still waiting... waiting for him to come home... after the drama last night... he really needs me... but I know him... he will not ask for me... he would rather drown his sorrows in a bottle of scotch than ask for support... but this time things are going to be different... I am not going to let him get back into his shell... so I am waitng for him... at times like this I really miss our house... I wish we were there... then I could stand at the balcony and see him come... that usually gives me time to plan my approach towards him...


It is late... he has still not come... sitting here is not helping so I go to the one person who makes all my problems disappear... My Ruh... as I walk near her room I see him... gently trying to wake her up... asking her if her Ishima had her dinner... Ruhi is too sleepy to answer so I walk in and tell him that I dint... that I was waiting for him... I want to smile when I see the look he is giving me... I know that just like the rest of the family even he is wondering if I have lost it... Amma actually said that the shock of what happened made me mentally unstable... but what they don't realize is that I know him... I know that he would never cheat... that he is trying to protect someone... maybe Bala Jiju...


I see concern for me in his eyes... then I see that concern being masked by anger and indifference... he is spewing rubbish at me and roughly pulling me towards the kitchen... I hear him say - "Always a drama queen... you did not even leave this occasion to gain some footage. What did you think... that you can go on a hunger strike... gain sympathy... who knows this might just be a way of committing suicide... but know this... I will not change my mind... I do not want to live with you. You get that?"- when he started speaking for a moment it hurt... but then I saw the pain in his eyes and realized... Raman Bhalla was expressing his love by giving a verbal lashing... so I take a deep breathe... close my eyes for a second... gather all the courage that I possess and just blurt it out - " I love you Raman... I am happy with you... without you and Ruhi my life has no meaning... So NO!... I will not give you a divorce... And I am not asking you for an explanation... I know my Raman... he would never cheat... I know you are protecting someone we both love... I will not ask you anything... just remember... I am gonna be here... always ready to talk..."


I turn back... grab an apple from the dining table and walk towards our room... just near the stairs I turn again... only to remind him once again that I trust him and also to request that the effect of this drama not reach Ruhi... as I walk up the stairs I cant stop chuckling... the Great Raman Kumar Bhalla looked confused... his eyes had shown the confusion, anger and most importantly happiness when I told him loved him... my bouncer had blindsided him... now I am going to wait... because I know that in the next 10 seconds he is going to be back in the room... with a few more hurtful things to say and do... he thinks he can get protect me by cutting himself from my life... that by being a jerk I will leave him... but I am also ready... he is going to find out that this time I am going to win... I know that the next few days are going to be rough... he knows what hurts me and he is going to use it... but what he doesn't know is that I stopped listening to his insults a long time ago... I no longer pay attention to his words... Now I read his eyes... because his eyes don't lie...

So that is it... hope you all like it!

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