OS: His Eyes Don't Lie (Updated Last Part (4) on Pg 8)

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-mujna-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

Hii mujna.. (sory dnt knw ur real name) bdw i'm rinki.. 😊
Finally i readed all d 4 prts in 1 go .. totaly lovd it.. 👏
I just loved it, speechless of what to say
Do right more os/ss/ff like these, just love reading it..
nd plz pm ur nxt story it wil b pleasure 2 read it.. 😊

Hi Rinki... I am Anjum... Thank you... will definitely PM the next one... 😊

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Just read your whole OS in one go and it was really good. I do hope that Ishita understands Raman this well in the show as well when this track starts.

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sulochana90

@sulochana90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

its such a amazing thing

very beautifully described

loved it every bit

True love expressed in true senses

after reading this i understood what it means when they say to be unconditionally and irrevocably in love with anyone

hats off

thank u

👏

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Sandisha Drepaul

@disha93

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Mind blowing ending!!!

Very beautifully written ... 👏

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

wonderful ending⭐️
beautifully described👏
really enjoyed this os😃
superb hun👍🏼

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

This is too good dear! Keep writing more. Looking forward to ur next write up

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

beautifully weaved story!

I loved the confrontation between Raman and Vandu the best. This Raman was the reason YHM was so good!

LOVELY :)

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

What an absolutely beautiful end.

Terrific job... loved her understanding of who Raman is, and their journey towards eachother - it's their understanding and acceptance of eachother that makes their love so special.

I really love this story and I hope to read more from you in this forum.😊

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Amal Aziz

@-AmalAziz-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

woww... Its Amazing !
loved it ... Read All in One Go.. Its Beautifully Written.

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

it was perfect ending to a beautiful written OS.👏

every word of the OS needs to be highlighted..can't say which is better than the other...for personally when Ishita thinks she doesn't need the words anymore...but still when RKB says it they take her breadth away...lovely...

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