OS: His Eyes Don't Lie (Updated Last Part (4) on Pg 8)

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RheaSh

@RheaSh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Second part's equally superb.
Loved Ishita's thought process and the way she read him.
Do continue soon.

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sweetiepiee090

@sweetiepiee090

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Loved d way ishita answered him nd she could read him through eyes.. Continue soon..

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-mujna-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: RheaSh
Second part's equally superb.
Loved Ishita's thought process and the way she read him.
Do continue soon.

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-
Wow..
Lovely OS dear.. It was beautiful <3
The unsaid understanding between them, the extent to which she knows him and understands him was penned down so beautifully.! It doesn't take her long enough to see through him and she finally does.. She being the only one who can do that.

Loved the OS.. Would love to read a continuagion to this one ! Wana see how she confronts him.. Continue if possible :) Thanks..

Originally posted by: swati62
Loved it. I hope they show this on the show.

Thank you all... your comments were the reason that i wrote part two!

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow😃..its only a true soulmate who can see you through😊..Who can sense the unspoken words/ undone actions😊..That was such a beautiful piece of writing😳..I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.😊.Please do write more often😊

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Whoa!! Another awesome update!! Loved it!! Continue soon!! N make it a lil longer na please!!

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Snigdha Gautam

@Serendipity05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

nice :) post next part soon...

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Remya

@remya1990

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This was truly awesome.

waiting for the next part, a bit longer please,if you could.

loved it!!!

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awesome update..

so how well Ishita knows Raman ...she knows that he will trick evry insult know to him to hurt her...but but very well written that she doesn't listens to his words anymore but reads his eyes

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ALEHA

@ALEHA2011

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awesome loved both parts do continue soon

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

That surely was such a flawless update..
No words..no conversation between them except a few words by her and that did it all. He is visibly stumped and she knows what's coming her way. You have penned down her emotions so well, the way she sees through him, it just reaches the viewers. 😃
I wish and pray that we get something of this sort and this level of maturity and understanding between them in the show too.. 😳

Thanks for the continuation. Undoubtedly, would love to read more! Continue soon :)