The Beautiful and The Damned - IshRa TS - Part 2 - Page 13 - Page 5

Originally posted by: btalwar

Reserved

you know na ... bringing Subbu makes this one extra special ... 🤗 Aani

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Aani ... to begin with apologies for not unreserving here earlier .. I thought I already did 😳 ...

Hey no issues Bhanu I reminded you only because I assumed you must have forgotten and it happens to me too god knows loads of times 😳

Now coming down to your OS ... as I said ... Subbu makes it xtra special.

I knew I would have a supporter in you 😉

Honestly, to begin with I totally took it as Raman's POV ... in fact since I was so deep into my perception that even when I read ex's husband ... I was like ... for the first time Aani's disclaimer ... Not Proof read came true.

😆 I wanted to mislead on purpose at least half way so I used vague terms cos I wanted my readers to be surprised to find this from the POV of a character we saw barely for 5 mins 😉

But then ... after a split second ... I was like ... could this be ... I immediately went back to the beginning and re read it and ... woaah ... kudos girl.

thank you 😳

It is sadly known that Subbu will not come back to the show, but in all honesty ... if I want him to come back... it should be like this ... more than Raman getting jealous about Subbu ... it should be the other way round.
Subbu should get to know that life is fair to everyone and everyone deserves and gets his/her share of happiness.

Oh I wouldnt count on that Bhanu just yet, how can you lose hope the show has barely begun the realization phase just started - abhi aage jahaan aur bhi hai abhi ishq ke imtehaan aur bhi hai 😉

The last line ..Everyone but him lost in the moment of celebration.

I do not have an icon of bowing down otherwise I would have out it for you. While Ishita was lost in the celebrations .. he watched with a lost stance ... could it be more ironical, yet more beautiful.

You already know that your writing transports the reader(I was about to write viewer bcoz your post is more of a visual medium than written) into another world ...

Definitely want to see what happens next and what happens when Subbu finally meets Raman ... the man who completed the woman he had once left because he felt she was half a woman.

Brilliant.

thanks a lot Bhanu for being so sweet and generous in your praise and I for one am not one of those who want him back for a jealousy track but to know more about Ishita, cos he is the other half of her story - Raman is her end, her fairytale ...but he is the beginning, the red herring she assumed to be the prince 😉 and yeah why should he not see what he lost? Like we have said he wasn't evil but a coward... so in a stark contrast to Shagun he has to have regrets

Originally posted by: swathibalan

Wow aani..a post from you made my day

Amazing. The way you cleverly worded it. I thought it was from Raman's perspective at first.

Then realized it was Subbu's

Very clever writing girl.. waiting for the next parts esp after the last line

P.s. can u pm when u update please

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Beautiful is what it is, looking forward to next part eargerly where our dear Mr and Mrs bhalla will be more of a participant :)

That is such a stupendous idea aani, I so wish they'd incorporate something like this on the show, BTW this subbu is becoming my favorite in your pieces for obvious reasons ;)

Continue soon!

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Wow Aani...thats an awesome piece of writing

Originally posted by: Bruce_L

Read it in one go.

From HIS perspective! Thank you Aani for coming up with this idea.

This is TS na, so will comment about it at the end😛

Originally posted by: lourel24

Beautiful.Initially ,I thought it was Raman who scrutinizing every move of ishu but latter on found him to be subbu.hope to see such scenes in show too.

Originally posted by: SWAN123

I have loved this show for the same reason I love your writing. You can almost touch those guys on the screen in your minds eye and your Ishita and Raman are almost always what I would love to see on the show - a mature India soap. I so love these two- Karan Patel and Divyanka and you Anni for adding to the texture
and hugs 💔

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

Aani .. Beautiful :)
Honestly, never thought it was Subbu but gradually it just brought a smile on my face.
Subbu is one character which I miss the most in YHM, so thanx for bringing this amazing figment of imaginaltion.
Updateee Soon :)

Originally posted by: -Hima-

Superb Aani!! Subbu observing Ishita! Loving it! Very cleverly written.. I thought it was Raman from the beginning.. but midway, I realised it was Subbu! Yay! Bala-Vandu have a baby girl, Sravu's sister! Looking forward for the next part!

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Beautifully written!