The Beautiful and The Damned - IshRa TS - Part 2 - Page 13

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

hello dear😊
its been so long
hope you are well

nice concept👍🏼
amazing part⭐️
a good insight in to subbu's thoughts👏
looking forward to the next part
take care

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

oh i'm sooo glad to see a story from you - i've missed them (though the vm was absolutely beautiful). i had the biggest grin when i saw your pm 😃😆

loved the first part- will this be a two shot or a three shot?
really enjoyed seeing from subbu's perspective, as usually we get to see this from raman's jealous perspective
awesomely written as always 😉👏
pls continue soon

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clover

@clover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Brilliantly written. I realised quiet later that Subbu was narrating. I have been really looking forward to read something like this. You know something along the lines of how Subbu or Shagun would react and feel when they see Raman and Ishita together once they fall in love. You made my day. Thank you.😊

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Just read. Eff this is going to beyour BEST EVERRR. Its pretty late, ive an early morning tomorrow, editing this tomorrow :)

YOU, MY GIRL... ARE LOVED. THANKKK YOUUU FOR SUBBU! Dil se, you absolutely know i crave this.

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Aani

This was cleverly written... and beautiful too... i say clever because you make us feel a lil bit for Subbu (you real agenda here 😈)

Wonderful Aani... A happy Raman and Ishita... a bickering Mihir and Mihika... it is indeed a sight for sore eyes... i am very curious to read the next part!

"Of all the words of mice and men, the saddest are, "It might have been." - Kurt Vonnegut

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

This was perfect. Such a satisfying read! Wonderfully written!

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Ash

@-RisingAsh-

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

This was something really beautiful.. So flawless.. Loved reading it <33

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Great shot. Subbu needs to come back and see Ishra. So like to see this angle on YHM.

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Veeann
A beautiful snapshot of regret ... Bravo 👏

thanks Veaann 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Vedika211
Very nicely written. I realised midway that it was from Subbu's persepctive, after Raman was introduced. The second last line, and the last line, are both brilliant - icing on the cake.

thanks Vedika 😊 and yep I wanted to take my readers for a ride so that misleading was intentional 😳