The Beautiful and The Damned - IshRa TS - Part 2 - Page 13

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Juggaadd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Subbu? I thought it was Raman's perspective. Specially since the "mother-in-law" talk came. That was a surprise Aani.😃

I too loved the episode but for entirely different reasons. Ishita gave a hint but it was Raman who elaborately explained it and I fell in love once again.😳😆

I think Ishita's character has been ruined. She is no longer the simple, pure soul she was. The mahaanta has gotten in to her. Now every action of hers seems pretentious and patronising. I, for one, wanted her to apologise for interfering and prodding so much in to Mihir's life. I thought Raman would be angry. The scenes were abrupt and there was total lack of connection between the successive scenes.

Yet, Raman made me forget all that. I was reminded of your stories throughout his dialogue. The style was similar.

Waiting to read where this one is headed!

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PRACHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

beautiful os
n different update soon

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Colt.Pixy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

wow aani .superb view from subbus side. he wanted to talk with her ? waiting for next part

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VENBA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Awesome start...👏👏👏👏

Thanks for the pm..😊😊

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

I realized midway that Subbu was the one who was talking. For a change this was a new perspective. Loved it!! Beautiful display of Subbu's feelings

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JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Wow Aani. For the 1st few para of the story, I really thought it was Raman who was with Ishita. You penned it fantastically. The suspense build up on the mystery man ... good shot. Subbu is an unchatered character and bringing him in, is a fantastic move; showing him what he has lost, even though he has his own family, where he would receive the same kind of love and care, it's still not the same as watching your 1st love with someone else. Now, he would know what Ishita must have endured in the past. The best part in this is...lost opportunities, lost relationships, lost moments...all this is from Subbu's side. For Ishita, she has moved on...Love this.

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Vibhuti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

It was very sweet to read...😳

no twist n turns...just a scene with so many emotions.. loved it!👍🏼

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AdventureGirl14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Wow, all those feelings for Ishita.. from Subbu's perspective! Really didn't see that one coming. I re-read the whole scene again when I realised it was actually Subbu and not Raman obsessing over her😛

We're really desperate to get this guy back on the show, right?😉

Really loved it. Waiting for the Raman-Subbu confrontation😊

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.Ranju.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Aww Aani beautifully pen down😳 Subbu;s dialogues are too good. I think we will see him only in our forum OS and SS😆 Waiting for the next update!! Will send you buddy request, please do PM me😃