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Vedika211

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Posted: 10 years ago

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The sun and moon story was so beautiful!

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Malangan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

well thnk u again...its ur appreciation dat helps me write even better . next update is coming soon

i promise its a real soon ;-)

loads of love
~shab 😊

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Malangan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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hello guys :-)... thanks for being patient with me...i knw i did promise to update "soon" but it took me daysss to update it...i hav been writing nd deleting the update coz i wasnt happy with so many things... but i finally decide to go with the last drft i ve written ...hope guys like it

~part: 3~

He was waiting for her to come back. So he could talk to her.he put ruhi toh sleep its been more than a hr still she wasnt back ..he went to look for her .it was pitch dark she wasnt in the kitchen nor in washroom.he panicked thinking she left..but the the main door was locked aswell.he heard a low sob frm the balcony.he saw her silhoutte .her hands were wrapped around herself as if giving support.he stood behind her nd she felt his presence ..she wiped her tears and turned to go
"Ii..ishita.."
"Bahut late hogayi hai...ssry apko disturb karne k liye"she said cutting off his wrds
"Ishita mujhe tumse...ishita...i think we need to talk"
"There is nothing to talk raman" nd she walked passed him. He held her wrist stopping her.
"Raman. Mera haath chodiye" said ishita gritting her teeth
"Aapki marzi har waqt nahi chal sakti raman" she left jerking her hand
He went behind her his anger had no limit what does this woman think of herself ...first she goes and hurt herself than throw tantrums.he went held her shoulder to stop her
"Raman i m telling ...donot create drama in the middle of the night"hissed ishita in anger
"As per u say ishita..."he said gritting his teeth ..he held her wrist nd walked oit of the house taking his keyes
"Raman leave my hand ...ye aap kya kar rahe hai.."
He walked towards parking taking her with him.she kept hissing and stopping ..but he took no heed of her wrds. He stopped next to his car
"Chuppp...ek dum chup" he said his anger was evident in his eyes.
Ishita knew better than arguing wen ravan kumar is angry.he pushed her in the passenger seat and seated himself in the driver seat. Next few minutes went in pure silence .he drove aimlessly on the roads of delhi
"R..raman"
He glared at her which killed her next wrds
Soon they were on highway she decided to keep quiet so dat his anger was atleast bareable ..so dat they can talk. Ishita closed her eyes enjoying the breeze which hits her face.her mind drifted to the days earlier events..thm meeting and his harsh wrds ..which still echoed in her ears.a lone tear escaped her. She silently wiped them unaware of a silent spectator who hav been aware of her every move .few minutes later they were stopped.she heard the other door being opnd and then shut. She knew soon her side will be opened too nd she was to be danced at his tune.but nothing of sort happened.few minutes passed she heard the gushing of water a littlee far away and the earthy and grass smell hit her senses.she opened her eyes to look where they were. She was surprised to find themselves at bank of a river ...nd nothing but pure beauty surrounding them.she looked at the timd and was surprised to knw they hav been out for more than 2 hrs...nd they didnt even realise it.no wonder they hav been living together for more than 10 months and never realized it. How they became an integral part of each others life dat its impossible to imagine a future without each other.her chain of thoughts were broken with a loud splash .
She looked around to find her husband.only to find him sitting on the grass and throwing pebbles in the water. Like seriously? How childish can mr.ceo get throw pebbles to show anger ? Raman is no lesser than ruhi.ishita smiled at the thought.there was something about the environment which brought peace to her messed up mind..she took a deep breath and went sat next to raman ..holding legs close to chest.resting her head on her knees and looking at the serene water...which flowed without any fear nor any barriers.it moved to its own way danced to its own rhythm .none can stop her nor catch her .dats why rivers has always been rebillious it followed no rules nor any borders flowed all the way to meet the seas. Where her individual identity was lost and was only know as the sea water. She being pure and sweet have no worries being mixed with salty and hard water. She lost her existence to be his.she broke every ties to be his. And seas give themselves up and mix up with river to creat a sweet water.she lost are identity he lost his nature to be Compatible to her.it was all because she loved him with everything she hav .she was made to be his.she never expected his love in return she was his never realising his sacrifeionly if human could be as selfless as the nature is.Almighty hav created such a beautiful place with minute details..where everything depicts an undying love story ..only we human are too busy to notice it and apply to our lives..she sighed again at her thoughts

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Edited by sweetshab - 10 years ago

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Malangan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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"Kitna sukoon hai na iss jagah main...har bechaini ko ek umeed..har sawal ka jawab...miljata hai"said ishita
"Haan..i found this place two years ago..."
"Beautiful place...only if could see it" said ishita
"Its indeed beautiful...its depicts a stry...a"
"Love story" continued ishita
Raman looked at her amusingly
"Love story how ?"he asked
"Ye jo dhara haina raman ..badi ziddi hai...ye pathar tak ko cheer k chali jati...apne pyar se milne..jahan ye apna wajood kho deti hai..aur samundar iske pyaar main apni haqeeqat mita deta hai...aisi hai inki mohabbat..unconditional "
"You amuse me at times ishita...really? Who could hav thought sumthing like dis" he laughs
"Pyar karne k liye srf pyar kafi nahi hai...pyar main bahut dard hai...ab aap bataiye aap kis dard main hai ?"asked ishita
"Main..main koi dard nahi hai"
"Jhoot ..apke shabd chahe jaise bhi ho main unka matlab samjhti hoon raman.."replied ishita
There was silence between them..pure silence
"Pyaar karna asaan hai...pyar ko nibhana mushkil"said raman cutting the silence
She looked at him questioningly
"Kabhi kabhi pyaar kafi nhi hota...maine shagun ko bahut pyar kiya...par shayad mera pyar uske liye kafi nahi tha...aur mujhe nahi lagta k mera pyar kisi k liye bhi kafi hoga...tum jo khwaab dekhti ho na..main un sab main rang nahi bhar paonga.."said raman
"Maine ye samjh liya hai ki shagun kabhi meri thi hi nahi...aur use khone ka ab dukh nahi...but jo mera hai use khokar jee nahi poonga...bahut der baad mujhe mera
Sukoon mila hai...usey main pyar mohabbat k dayre main dalkar nahi kho sakta...haan main bahut selfish hoon .ye raman kumar bhalla bahut selfish..wo apna sukoon ...apni zindagi ka matlab nhi khona chahta"continued raman
"Apko kyun lagta hai aap kuch khodenge?"asked ishita tears rolling down her cheeks
"Mujhe meri kismat par vishwas nhi ishita...aaj toh wo mujhpar meherbaan hai jo zindagi ka matlab tohfe mein degayi...par agar ye mujhse cheen jayega toh msin bikhar jaonga...main bikharne se darta hoon Pyar ka darr nhi hai ishita..judai ka darr hai..kho dene ka darr hai"he said
"Pyaar main darr ki koi jagah nhi raman"she said
"Hum dono ne pyar kiya ...aur kho diya...pata hai kyun?...kyunki wo kabhi humara tha hi nhi...aur shayad jise hum pyar keh rahe hao wo pyar hi nhi tha...bas ek ehsaas tha.."she continued
"Tum kaise keh sakti ho jo hum aaj samjh rahe hai wohi pyar hai?" He asked
She laughed
"Pyar samjha nhi jata bas kiya jata hai...jab samjhdari..shabd ..waqt..aur expectations ke dayron main bandh jata hai na tab wo ek samjhauta ban jata ...jo hum dono ne kisi waqt mein nibhaya tha...par aaj humare beech main jo hai wo in sabse bahut door hai"
"Sunset chahe jitna bhi haseen ho...uske baad kali andheri raat aati hai ishita...tum kyun nahi samjhti ki mujh jaisa insaan kabhi kisi ko pya"he was interrupted by hdr
"Ahaan raman dont say dat...maine apko pyar karte huwe dekha hai...apke dard ko dekha hai...so dont say dat...u know main aaj tak aap par naraz for only reason ki aap
Door bhaag rahe hai ...khud se apne pya...iss ehsaas se..aur isme aap khud ko chot pahuncha rahe thay...please dont put ur self through that pain"she said tears rolling down her cheeks
"Ye dard ab mera saaya hai ishita...loot chuka tha main apne har ehsaas se ..srf ye dard mera saathi bana raha.."he said
"U know raman...its not hard to let the bruises go...main apse nahi kahongi ki aap aagey badey...agar aap khudse agey nhi badenge to ateet hamesha saya bana rahega..."
"Kya tumahara adhoora pyar tumhe nahi rokta agey badhne se?"he asked
"Wo pyar nahi tha raman...wo agar pyar hota toh ab bhi mere saath hota...wo agar hota toh kabhi adhoora na hota...wo toh bas ek zariya tha meri taqdeer se milane ka"her words gave him an internal peace ..which was longing for
"Apko apka ateet nahi bas aapke sawal rokte hai"she said
He looked at her in awe
"Aap bhale hi mujhe pyaar na kare...i dont mind..but main aapse apna haq lene nahi doongi"she said
"Haq?" He asked
"Apko pyar karne ka haq...ye aap mujhse cheen nahi sakte...my heart belongs to u whether u want it or not. Because I love you with whole of existence"she smile
They both sat their in silence ...her confession echoing in his mind
"Ishita...har jazbe ki ek hadd hoti hai ...after dat u get tired of things...human tendency ..will u leave me ?"he asked
"Raman kya aap khudko chod sakte ho ?" She questioned him. He knotted his eyebrows in confusion
"Exactly ..jaise apko khudko nahi chod sakte ..i will never leave u either..apki nafrat jhel sakti hoon aapse door rehkar pal pal marna anhi...ishita Raman Bhalla is selfish aswell" she replied
"Maine bahut try kiya ishita...but main tumhare layak kabhi ban hi nahi sakta"he said in a defeated tone
"Layak raman ? Aap jaise hai mere liye perfect hai...nd who are ou to decide it ?" She asked
"Jo tum aaj ignore kar rahi ho ...future main ye sabb.."
"Then it will be u who could leave me...main ek adhoori zindagi jee rahi hoon raman"she said as matter of fact
"Tum kabhi adhoori nahi ho sakti ishita...u are way more precious then u credit urself for...tum wo jo mamta ka roop ho...tum wo jo rishton ka vishwas ho...tum srf pyaar kiye jane layak ho...tum meri zindagi ka adhar ho...i wouldnt hav been ..if u werent here...mar raha raman bhalla jise tumne saansein di ..jeene ki wajah di ..is dil ko dhadkanein di"he said pointing towards his heart
"Tumhe chodne se pehle to ye chodna padega mujhe...kyunki raman toh saansein bhi nahi le paayega ishita k begair"he said...while both had tears in their eyes
"Aaj maine jana Izhar karna hi pyar nahi hota...pyar toh aap jaisa bhi kiya jata hai...khudki ki haqeeqat meeta kar doosre ka hojana...aap srf mere raman ho"she thought and hugged him tight. Surprising him further.few seconds layer he hugged her back
"Apko kareeb rehkar agar mere saansein bhi ruk jaye to gila na ..hoga ..akhiri dhadkan bhi apke naam hogi "she silently prayed
"Agar sach main duayein qabool hoti hai ...to aye khuda bas itna kardein ...ishita ko har pal mere paas rakhna inn saanson ki tarah" he silently prayed
They were embraced for quit a long time...living the beautiful moment for eternity
"Ishita ...ghar chalein ?" He asked
"Ummm" she replied
He stood up helping her and strted to walk towards his car
"Kuch jazbat...alfazon k mauhtaj nhi hotey...aap bin kahey mujh sab kuch keh gaye raman...i love u tooo"she thought
"Raman"
He turned only to see the beautiful hues of violets..blues and otange in the sky
"Ek nayi subah...srf humari" she said
The smile spread on their lips conveyed their happiness
Like always they never realised the time they spent together...which was only theirs !

Ankhaye lafz thay ...aur pyar main bikhre hum thay...izhar bhi yoon huwa alfaz bhi bekhabar thay...jhalke ansoo hai muskurate labon pe..barsi duayein humpe...roohaniyat khil gayi ehsaas e mukammil se

oki ...i knw it was too cheesy...nd long one at dat...i tried my best to keep it short. nd hereby i promise to never write a stry more than a single update.

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keep the love coming

~shab 😊

Edited by sweetshab - 10 years ago