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@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

The update was very beautiful... and the story of Sun and Moon was very inspiring...

I loved it!!!

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Jenny_1709

@Jenny_1709

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Oh my god. That was so beautifully written!! Awesome!!! I am just speechless. Please continue sooon. And pm me if possible :)

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

The sun n moon story had fiven me goosebumos while I was reading it.I"ve never heard it before.I think it's ur original work.No appreciation will b enough for this.Great work my friend!👏

Would like to b PMed for the next part 😳 buddying u.

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

wow..!!! awsum update it was...!!

And the story was soo soo awsum..!!

loved it..!!

The way u expressed the relationship of ishita and raman comparing them with sun and moon..!!

you have really described it well...!!

And ruhi iss soo cute..!! Finally she voiced the inner turmoils and thoughts of raman..!!

Adorable part..!!

will be waiting for next..!!

post soon..!!

and if possible plz pm too..:)

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

wow...beautiful update yrr..
sun nd moon...u described it in a wonderful way...good job dear...updatexsoon
n pm plss

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

thnks all for ur appreciation n love Thanks a ton :-)
ur appreciation really means a lot :-)
and the sun n moon stry ..i was inspired by a poetry read long tym ago added few things frm my imagination and tadaaa outcome was dat stry ...which i wasnt very sure abt :-P and u guys appreciation made me love the stry ..thnks for dat .

loads of love
~shab 😊

P.S: last update will be soon...got super busy missed few episodes of YHM and the awesome stries written here ...*many things on my mental list* nd yes i love u all ❤️

EID MUBARAK :-)
Wish u all happiness, prosperity,love and smiles ...Ameen !

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

That was an awesome update...
I loved the love story of Sun and Moon and how you portrayed Ishita and Raman as the sun and the moon.. It was so deep and thoughtful.. Something I have never read..Awesome thinnking.. 😃

Looking forward to the next part. Update soon..😊

Edited by -IshRaDivAn- - 10 years ago

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Juhi

@JUHI.HI

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

well written buddy...must say,...u r a grt writer..👏

read both d parts at a stretch.. raman's fear n insecurity to ishu's hurt...dealt vry well...esp d sun n moon stry...so beautiful.. u gav a different dimensn n definitn to sun moon bonding...lovely writing... do update soon!!😃