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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: YhmCraze

Aww ! Its super Cute.



awww m elated :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: VENBA

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Brilliant update...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">just loved your writing..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">The way u have written and displayed their emotions was beautiful...👏👏</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Awesome...👏👏</font>



thnks :-)
happy it kept u glued :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ishra123

superb
beautifully written
write more
lovd it
nice end
thanks



thnks :-)
will try strting a new one :-)
end...well i'd call it a new beginning ;-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64


thnks :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

that was such a cute and superb part..!!

Loved each and every bit of it.!!
Raman and Ishita's convo really touched my heart..!!
It was soo emotional na..!! but m so happy...raman had not confessed directly...but still the words which he didn't spoke conveyed his love for her.!! And ishita who very well understands "khamoshiyaan.."
Wow...just loved it..!!
And plz dont stop writing..!!
Plz write os with more parts..!! it soo good to read..!!
Thanku so much for sharing such a wonderful work with us..!! :)
take care...!! and looking forward for ur more works..!! :)



thnks :-)
m glad u liked it :-)
it was indeed a heart touching convo
raman ...the man he is would never openly confess his love to her...yet couldnt hold himself aswell.
dats the essence of their relationship...it was always their khamoshiyan which spoke volumes.
i will never stop writing...eben if i get rotten tomatoes...coz dat the thing i love the most ...writing :-D
i promised to not write more than a single update...m a major procastinator...keeping readers waits is awful...i myself is a reader n i knw the irritation :-P

will come back with new one sooon :-)

thnks for the aprreciation it reallly means alot :-D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

That was superb loved the confession by Ishita



thnks :-)

ishita is always the blunt one ...nd cannot keep huding things for long
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: zola007

Lovely update !

Beautifully written !
Thanks for the PM😊




thnkss :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: chinudolly.yhm

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">👏really such a </font>

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">beautiful mind blowing , fantastic story</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">i so so so so so loved it .</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">great work dear </font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">keep writing more ,</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">everything was so mesmerizing and magical </font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">really what an amazing story ! </font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">it was a great pleasure to read it </font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">u wrote so beautiful </font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">super duper awesome story</font>
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m overwhelmed with all the love :-)
m so glad u liked it :-)
nd u saw the magic in it...wat more could a writer ask for ?
nd apprreciation makes it even more beautiful :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
thnks all for the tym u've spent reading this :-) a dil se thnk u :-). and the appreciations...it really does motivates me to writer better. ur appreciation means a lot to me :-).
and yes i will not continue this stry ...i might not do justice ..if had continued it. my only thoughts were to write how well they settled in thrir khamoshiyan...yet love each other unconditionally...its not the confessions dat makes ur love stronger...but emotions and understanding does the magic...so ive ended it where they need no confession for the love they live.

i will come up with a new OS soon...till thn miss me :-P

loads of love to all the lovely readers ❤️

~shab😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow yaar... brilliant ur words just was mesmarising .. well done lovely writing👏👏... thanks dear😊

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