Disenchanted - IshRa OS - Page 4

aani aani u r such an outstanding writer or i can say u r a great story teller this os is mind blowing i agree with u i am not happy with Raman at all firstly he confessed his love to ishita than he said to do u think mujay pagal kutte ne kata hai its a height of everything than again he is blackmailing her its enough i literally want ishita has to show his right place in her life all the time he takes her as granted


loved ur concept u r a mind reader u read our mind mostly people do not like raman's behavior u have written beyond beautiful their conversation is realistic but i am dam sure this will not happen in show becoz its a history of YHm they did not drag Raman & ishita issues whenever he hurt her they just wind up in one episode just holding ear n holding hands is not enough now

but i loved this forum there are so many outstanding writers who fulfills our wishes like that in their stories and u r one of them

Simply Brilliant. But You need to come up with a next part for this one. It cant be left like that not when I know Raman is that one person who loves her unconditionally. Come on he's got to prove it to her besides making her realize n accept that so does she love him unconditionally. My hopes are from you, God knows when or if ever the same will happen on the show.

Bang on girl ...I so wish that those writers of the show create such scenes in serial...I'm so very damn disappointed with Raman's attitude in this week...

u r a awesome writer yaar.. i love reading ur os.. this was a mindblowing 1 :)👍🏼🤗

Awesome OS and very fitting title!! I actually want Raman to hear it all from Ishita in YHM. I just can't digest this blackmailing thing.

FABULOUS !!!!!! 👏 👍🏼..

fabulous dear👏
this was quite deep
i love how u always portray ishita as a strong and sensible woman⭐️
loved the conversation between them👍🏼
although i did feel a bit bad for raman at the end, he sure does need a reality check...
thanks for the weekend treat🤗

Beautiful OS Aani Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

It's always a pleasure to read your stories...loved this beautiful OS..very well written. The past couple of episodes of YHM were quite disappointing...wonder whether we' ll ever get to see something as beautiful and logical as your OSs on screen. Hats off to you my dear...we all are really lucky to have you on board.

Wow!!!