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Posted: 11 years ago
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Speechless. Flawless and trully exquisite. It was beautifully written. I dont know how do I describe it but each and every. Emotion was portrayed very well. The charm of the os didnt deter for ever a single line.the words ishita used the definition of love and difference of it. Then the truth of their relationship was written down nicely. I somewhere felt raman would analyze his feeling towards her to know weather what she was proclaiming was really the truth of their relationship or were they past it.

Would like if u write a continuation os after this with ramans pov and maybe somewhere they realize that's its more than sirf Ruhi ke liye and that so called friendship of theirs. Pls continue this one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
so sweet...yeh hain...mohabaatein...IshRa style...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gosh!u r brilliant beyond words.Everytime I read ur work I go on without blinking my eyelids.I just go on n on n feel shit!why it had to end.The way u describe human emotions is just superb.I didn't liked the way Raman blackmailed ishu.Firstly he has committed mistake n instead of feeling guilty he has the audacity to blackmail her n boast as if he was some leader.really shamefull but few has the quality to put their emotions exactly the way they feel n trust me u r blessed with it.emotion logic =ur work.hats off yaar.few favorites line of mine""A joke loses its charm and humor if you hear it enough times Raman."very true."I m not in the place to do that".
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Good one Aani!
Keep them coming.😃
Edited by Metamorphmagus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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take your time Vanny 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

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Superb OS aani👏 I liked the way she kept holding her confession 👏👏

Thanks Zene 😊

I just read and read without blinking eyes from she called him he is not pace leader rather lone ranger. omggg, what a comparison again. how is it possible you come up with so apt comparison scenario every time aani. hands down!!!

Thats somehow the way I see it, he has followers no doubt but he works out his problems mostly all alone without asking for aid from anyone, he only went to Ishu for Adi because he didnt wanna get cold feet at the last moment and her presence would have ensured that 😳

starting from he should have asked her about his promise to bala and mihir, shows she was already fuming at him 😆
Yep 😆

yes yes once in a while even I want her to bring "sirf ruhi ke liye" taunt for him and the way he is becoming the boy who cried wolf, he deserves some waiting period now . I really liked she told "she needs time to know if it s fake or real" for once I din like he played with her feelings I know it was all fun but she was really in him and she got kick 😭

I just want them to have some confrontation where the Sirf Ruhi ke liye thing crops up and it really rattles at least one of them, and just yell enough already; somehow I want it to be Raman who breaks first and admit he is in love 😉

aissh I liked her thoughts for love with ruhi. such a adorable and selfless bonding and aani, you reflected it in very realistic way we see in our personal life. keep glowing aani

they are adorable together and I can so see Ishu seeing Ruhi as her north star 😳

What a perfect slap "sirf ruhi ke liye" thoroughly, we are just partners and no right on each other
completely suitable title !!!

Thanks again Zene 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoe

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Beautiful conversation Aani btwn IshRa! Much needed...I always wanted this kind of a open and serious tlk btwn these two about the real feelings. I like their nok jhok and fun part..but after a point of time, it does lose its charm...These 2 are mature adults and need to open up and talk about their feelings..how long can they hide their hurt and feelings from each other!

Hey Jyo thanks, like you said I enjoy the banter too but its like none of them even tries to move forward afraid of upsetting the balance of their relationship; fine I can get that... but a monologue in a single scene ... that much I would like to see, Raman recently was fuming in his office when they talked about Subu and was relieved when he heard she is over her ex... but come on man ponder why it matters to you


Ah if only something like this happens on the shows too! Now tht would be something to watch out for..

I did get upset with Raman when just said those magical words to Ishita just to divert attention adn then claimed he didnt mean any of them! For me, you should say i love you to a person only when you truly mean them and not make a mockery of those words!

yeah I didnt like it too if he wanted to distract her he could have shared a funny story, some experience of his, something about Ruhi or Adi, she would have heard it patiently but another wasted confession at this stage, I couldnt like that 😳

I so wish CVs read all your writings..there is so much depth that you add to these characters that they seem so real to me!
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As always wonderfully written Aani..now i look forward to your writings every weekend..its like my weekend is not complete reading atleast one of your wriitngs!

Brilliant writing! loved this lines you wrote! 👏


"Love...you lay a claim over a person you love, allow a person who loves you the right to hurt you or make you happy or ask you things or... basically unless and until love is involved -no relationship gains prominence and one which lacks it has no real importance.

Thats how I feel, you can be with anyone but unless and until you love them, you dont feel like you have a right over them nor do you feel like being accountable to a person until you feel that that person does love you... we have relations... close and distant and all - but the ones who matter to us are the ones we love not just those we are closely related to, for eg I dont get along with some people even in mom' family simply because I cant stand their attitudes 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

Oh dear I needed this after yesterday's epi.

Everyone on this forum is feeling for Ishita in one way or other. They are venting it out through ideas like A girls night out or Ishita reminding Raman about the sirf Ruhi kr liye contract and it's a breath of fresh air to read all this stuff because as you mentioned, as much as we might love Raman but this blackmailing act of his was not really justified (they have taken it in a fun way but still)

thanks Tweety nah Ishu isnt the party gal type, she may go along the flow if her sisters come up with it, but wont be the one who plans or starts it

Disenchanted-Perfect title that you have taken here, Aani(though we have never interacted much but have seen all others calling you Aani😊)
this conversation is a must between IshRa. (I hope they show something like this)

Thank you and you can call me Aani 😊

So beautifully you brought up Raman's breakdown incident in the limelight. The way she helped him, he is bound to feel ashamed now. Though there was no sign of guilt on his face like others but still he had her fear in his mind.

I think the cvs never raised this and thought hey why not connect?😳

Subconsciously he thinks she owns him or why would he be so afraid of her? BUT one can even say that he is not afraid of her but of her lectures and the fact that she might let this thing out to his parents. Both possibilities are open to thought.

He def feels a sense of belonging now and all that bravado he put up was just for show, but yeah he def didnt wanna hear from his parents... if anyone has a right to scold him it is wifey 😆

I hope they don't keep this unfinished (like Sheila ki Jawani )and show us the repercussion of this one (I am saying this because of the dental fiasco that's about to come).

SKJ is gone and actually thank god for that, and I think it is logical too. Mrs Bhalla was worried about her hubby at this age as well and her sons 😆

Once again, Hatts off to you for write this beautiful piece👏👏

thank you 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: happenstance

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Aani, wow this really struck a chord particularly because of the almost 'limbo' situation that is being shown to us onscreen. This is the conversation that needs to be had between the two of them. There is alot of 'skirting' around their actual issues. Sometimes I feel like these two take one step forward, only to take another two back.

Hey Uz I know they are in a limbo... I am not asking for a confession or consummation here, somehow I am scared of those cos once that happens most shows lose their charm 😉😆 but come on at least wonder what is changing between you guys, ponder why is there so much sense of belonging now is it merely because the marriage has been accepted or something more 😳 he gets angry when he hears of her ex, wants to take her out on a trip alone, worries for her, cares for her, is protective and possessive of her - at least he should question his changing feelings but no he would rather joke and taunt

For me there needs to be a realisation, and one sooner rather then later as to the actual proximity and 'truth' of their relationship. These two have been to the edge and back and have survived. Once they realise how important it is to communicate with one another on all levels, the apparent void in their current relationship will no doubt lessen. Also I want them to stop concentrating on the 'literal' and 'linear' relationship that they share and explore the relationship for what it really is.


Exactly ! the Ehsaas needs to come in... there needs to be some sorta of movement here in the relationship in their head at least... or something I dont know

I have no idea if what I'm making sense here Aani😆😳

you made a lot of sense Uz 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks daisy 😊

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