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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

simply awesome
loved it
hope so something like this happen in yhm
u r writing is amazing

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kayan

@kayan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

i don't have words to describe how wonderfully u have written it 👏.

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Nehamak1234

@Nehamak1234

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Love all ur os' s...they r too gud...amazingly written 👏

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Autumnn

@Autumnn

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

How you do it every time Aani.. Outstanding.

Our relationship is charade line tear something within me. It must have done same to Ishu to say it & Raman to hear it.

After the ILU confession, they bringing in Ruhi ke liye ..I had not like it.. Not at the stage their relationship was. That time Ishu only had said it first & Raman agreeing & telling her she better remember it. So bringing that up again in the show really cannot say how Raman would react. Will it pinch him? If it is going to hurt him & make him realized then am all for it.

Love how you connected Raman under anesthesia incident to this Ishu one. Raman sure needs to know how Ishu found out his secret about DNA & Ruhi issue. That was brilliant piece of writing.

Lines on unconditional love.. Heart touching & so true!!

Love it!!

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Rajji (Shanu)

@.Rajji.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow left me speechless!

i think that if i was in ishita position, i would just have ignored raman right away with this line : "you want to step in, do so, but that's so not MY problem. good luck, you're alone in that" and i would have gone to sleep.

But i'm so glad that ishita went through with the conversation because everything she said was so on point.

I don't really "LOVE" raman as much as i love ishita (there something in her that just pull the right strings of my heart) because raman shouts too much for my taste. He is really a nice guy but the shouting thing puts me off so so much. Since i don't LOVE him that much, i don't really care about what he does and when he is rude to ishita.

i don't really care because i think that he is just mad in his head.

But i can understand that some people find him way too rude and things doesn't sit right with them. That's why you wrote this os right? And i'm glad you did because it was hella beeautiful !! Loved reading it.

I loved how ishita explained everything calmly and how you remembered the track with Ruhi's DNA and brought it to light in this OS .

also the part about the innocent love of children was really smart!

raman was a bit thick, he didn't understand that there was no "us", no "love" in their relationship because he insisted that she was his wife again and again... he doesn't want to face things!

Edited by rajji-cutest - 11 years ago

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awesome one shot.

it was so sensible and very well written.

My favorite lines in this one shot are

"Love...you lay a claim over a person you love, allow a person who loves you the right to hurt you or make you happy or ask you things or... basically unless and until love is involved -no relationship gains prominence and one which lacks it has no real importance."

Love is the line which are separating them.

I love it

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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WittyFlair

@WittyFlair

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

I had just made a post on how Ishita doesn't have rights on him and vice versa...and you've made an OS on it! 😛

What I really really loved about this one is that you explored Ishita's wounds. In the show, they've pretty much glossed over it and make it seem she's moved on with Ruhi, but they never explore her insecurities in falling in love with another adult. Not only that, but you've highlighted in Raman that a simple ILU to her isn't even good enough, because she's so scarred from her first love that she wouldn't even believe it. Brilliant work!

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Remya

@remya1990

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Your ability to understand individual people and their thoughts is beyond any explanations. Few people have this ability. You very well have. And this is very well seen and felt in your writings. You are a good writer, a critic and an understandable person.

i don't know what to say after reading your works. But i really wish to read more. And i do expect you to be an established author of very good books.

your writing is a pleasure to read.

gives a soothing effect and moreover it gives the readers open solutions of the puzzles created in the situation that you take over to write. And thus your writings doesn't hold just to pleasure but it gives a warm feeling which was so wanted. Worries,may be it personal, it really vanishes. Simply, your writing is cure to wounds.

These are not just words but i really mean what i said in this.

Thank you for your wonderful writing😊