Disenchanted - IshRa OS - Page 5

Brilliantly written..the entire dialogue was so logical and perfectly written..outstanding piece of writing..loved it a lot dear..thanks for this wonderful OS😊😊

CV's want raman to be funny, first it was him making ishita go back to sleeping on the couch, then it was the blackmail. Maybe these things are funny to some, but it was insensitive in my eyes. I don't think CV's realize that raman comes across as a jackass while attempting to be funny.

That conversation. I read every word with rapt attention. My God, Aani, that was so beautifully written! And you even went back to the scene where Raman was vulnerable after the injection and how Ishita had been so nice to him. There's the difference in both of them, Raman sometimes takes it too far and you have portrayed her feelings so well! Her every word was like a slap on his face and finally Raman had no response to her.
Loved this. This is my favourite piece of writing by you, although I love IshRa's romantic scenes, I simply loved this the most from all your writings because it was written so well. Her dialogues - literally made me feel for her. And that's something that only a talented writer like you can do! ❤️

Some thing i read first in the morning...and am happy...its brilliant...u r a gifted writer...

loved it! much needed convo between ishra👏
sorry can't write more- home is teeming with relatives

Thanks for PM.

Wow what a writer you are.
I agree with each and every dialogue of yours.There are people in the forum who might not agree but I really want this track to be there in YHM with same dialogues n explanation. We somewhere want that Raman should fall for her...he should be weak infront of him...which eventually will be shown by CV...but I personally think Ishu deserves much more better,understanding n caring loving partner instead of Raman who keeps on misunderstanding her,disrespect her,plays with her genuine feelings.
Abe Raman itne karne k baad Shaitan bhi pyar se baat karna Sikh jaye but u...totally not even worth thinking

very well written one-shot..👍🏼

Omg that was awesome !!
I really lvoed it !!

oh em gee Aani!