Longing to Belong - IshRa Two-Shot | Part 2 - Page 14 - Page 17

Originally posted by: happenstance

Aani- I've gone and forgotten where I reserved😳😆 old age I tell you

This was so beautiful I loved it, which goes without saying as always. The banter that you create between them on paper is truly wonderful, it has me laughing out loud and grinning like a school girl at times too.

I also wanted to say, there was as you had said a lot more dialogue here. Your words are so enchanting, that even though it meant more concentration on my part to read it in hinglish i was mesmerised by it all.

Eagerly Looking forward to the next one hun 🤗

Originally posted by: jojo1986

Loved it

Originally posted by: Nikita99

Simply brilliant!! Looks like it will be Simi drama next week however you can definately take us to Europe with Ishra. Please update soon!

Originally posted by: likithakmh

Can we please have a part 3?

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

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first of all 20 days 😲 lmaoo we can only think in dreams and fan fictions. impossible for show😆

both of them are in so much sync 😆 thinking other is not liking this idea 😆 understand each other very well. raman knows where he is still lacking to show his feelings for her 😳
loved romi here😆 ishu's face would be redder than tomato 🤣
aww even I wished before some deep convo between bala and raman but i think that time has gone. now only ishra are there to push towards each other. no other person would be helpful to make understand former.

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

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very nice concept 👏

thanks Zene 😊
in a way i liked raman's manipulating style that was switched on by bala 😆

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Aadmi umeed kar sakta hai, chalo theek hai... mat badalna, waise bhi... wahaan ki ladkiyan tumse toh jyada hee patli aur lambi hoti hai... tumhe unke wahaan ke kapde fit bhi nahi aanewale thhe

Mihir Mihika bachhe... toh bina shaadi kay... mujhe problem nahi lekin

omggg aani, you rock. i can easily imagine kp speaking all one liners 👏😆
finally he made speak from horse's mouth and making her accepting challenge😆 by making all arguments nullified 👏

LOL trust me I share the same sarcastic streak like KP and RKB personally so these were easy to write 😆 not to mention having been a debate champion helps 😆



gosh he was openly grilling her , i can feel how much she was feeling embarrassed☺️
may be ishu is feeling that it is challenge for her to control and still stay with him despite of being head over heels for him and she thinks he does not want to go with her but actually it s challenge for raman to show her place in his heart and life as well in just 20 days. raman understands it very well.

LOL the challenge is for both of them - for her it is to show Raman he doesnt affect her and for him it is to make an effect on her 😉

how much I am wishing now for HM track in your TS keep your thoughts coming up babes👍🏼

thanks hon

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Loved both the parts Aani.

Ishita's concerns are real ... its time Raman paid attention to her insecurities and concerns.

Raman- Ishita's conversation was so realistic and it was amusing to see how he got her to agree using their usual tactics ... challenge the other person & he/she would agree to anything 😆

Originally posted by: Lata_ishra

Loved it

Originally posted by: rutu83

loved the second part as well
raman's trepidation in the beginning was 👍🏼
when ishita asked what would we do there, i almost expected raman to start singing ghoomenge phirenge nachenge gayenge aish karenge aur kya 😆 i knew which route he was going to take to get to his manzil but when he said hawww and closed his shirt buttons i actually laughed out loud 😆🤗 the dialogue bazi and the way raman turned the whole thing around was so well written and can definitely see divan doing this scene with aplomb 👏
but this raavan kumar bhi na- ab challenge aisa kiya hai to she definitely will not respond to him on the trip. aur aise hi ghoomne ke liye jana thodi na hai- love story thodi na aise hi aage badhegi?
loved the two shot- but any possibility of an os/ts/ss on the trip itself?😃

Originally posted by: Isma_A

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