Longing to Belong - IshRa Two-Shot | Part 2 - Page 14 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Jyoe

Aani!! 🤗 Muaah..\!

yahan to honeymoon ka track shuru ho gaya! Yay!!Finally thanks to you! I was like this 😃

Loved the IshRa convo and how Raman got to challenge Ishita to agree to come to Europe..Thats so like them!!😆

Plz continue the 3rd part..cant wait..i m getting impatient and eager to know how Raman makes her feel special

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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WOW, just WOW Aani... your HInglish dialogues added the spice to it and made it perfect. You have been right in choosing to write this way.

Hey Lucky thank you and I thought of this one in Hinglish itself so hence the way I wrote it 😳

I read both the parts together. they are wonderful. This man knows her SO WELL.

yep he does, well parts of her 😉

But they are both still dhakkans 😆 He can't seem to be bold enough to tell her how he feels, and she is clueless about her feelings for him.

LOL thats the fun now isnt it - in the show as well - he is feeling so irate at the mere mention of her ex and she has no idea what went wrong and they are still so clueless what is happening here 😳

This story had the depth you usually have in your writings, and the fun that we are used to see KP and DT enact. I could really imagine them mouthing these lines... well done my friend 👏

thanks Lucky 🤗

Here goes :)

"And that is why, when he finally did come across the street, I lit my cigarette with my lighter - not to make him feel like a fool who had fallen for a trick, but rather because he had said, 'you had better luck with matches,' when in fact I had not. It was not the matches that brought him across the street. It was the matches that kept him on the bench." - Adam Levin, The Instructions

P.S: I only had a few mins today, so I dont think I will be editing the comments on part 4 of the SS today. Will try tomorrow. Sorry 😭

no probs Lucky take your time LOL I have given you lots to do as it is 😆 trust me replying is getting to me and I keep writing more and more, I CANT get myself to STOP 😳 an issue I NEVER had before!

Originally posted by: fraser

superb aani.. just come to know your real name...
well written and refreshing too...
you use bala character as a boost here and again bala comes at rescue for ishra by giving them some gyan on relationship
i love to read sequel of this story

Originally posted by: felciya

Awesome.

Originally posted by: chinudolly.yhm

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Originally posted by: ruhanikadhawan

niceee..