Longing to Belong - IshRa Two-Shot | Part 2 - Page 14 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

very cute and awesome update

Raman and ishita coversation was very cute and lovely. Raman didn't loose and finally convinced ishita for the trip. The way you pen down their conversation i could picture them in my mind.
enjoy a lot reading this TS 👏


thanks so much Javeria 😊

@bold - once he puts his mind to it the man is unstoppable after all 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wow... beautiful... luved it..


thanks Swetha 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks Aaliya😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

How much I loved their cute banter.. Bechari Ishita, Raman ke baaton mein phas gayi.. Beautifully written as usual👏


thanks dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

That is some progress in their relationship. I can't believe Ishita fell for that trap so easily. What I really liked is while Raman is a little hesitant to express his actual thoughts, he did not shy away from the task and get Ishita to agree.

Well done!
I understand your thought process regarding the trip but the way I see it, though they get caught up in the family issues, it is the same family that brought them to this point in their relation. They need the family as a catalyst. Just the two of them for twenty days will bring them closer but not so much as twenty days the family will. I am not saying they should always be with the family. They should be left alone but not for so many days. The short period of alone time they get, I think is more effective.


Hey Sneha
@bold - Oh Ishita is quite naive and also somehow easy to provoke sometimes when it comes to Raman 😆

@red - no issues about the diff of opinion Sneha and I penned twenty days as I have included so many destinations in all of Europe and Thomas Cook DOES offer a twenty day package... and also I felt the time would be apt since its more than just a few days and not exactly as long as a month and the kind of things they have faced since the beginning cannot be just sorted in a weekend trip after all😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

Superb Aani

i loved ur quote ... and thats what Raman exactly did 😆
man their convo was too gud...
i was laughing reading Raman's replies 😆
mast update Aani...
btw u sure u r ending it in 2 shots only...
i think u can take it further...its going too gud yaar...
think abt it...


thanks Meet

@bold - the reason I used it was the same😆 and yep this one ends here I cant take it further anymore 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Superb turning point...perfect challenge!

cont soon!


thanks Vidya 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nivib09

brilliantly written..the dialogues are perfectly written..just as Raman and Ishita would say in the serial...i didn't feel that i was just reading a fan side of story..it's brilliant ..would love to see this on screen...waiting eagerly for PART 3...cheers...👏


thanks Nivi and there is no part 3 this one ends here since its a two-shot 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Beautiful. You had both of them thinking the other would not be happy about the trip written so well. You brought their communcation gap issue up front. Loved it.


thanks Jazzy

@bold - that is the root of so many issues and MUs in real life too after all😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: happenstance

Aani- I've gone and forgotten where I reserved😳😆 old age I tell you

This was so beautiful I loved it, which goes without saying as always. The banter that you create between them on paper is truly wonderful, it has me laughing out loud and grinning like a school girl at times too.
I also wanted to say, there was as you had said a lot more dialogue here. Your words are so enchanting, that even though it meant more concentration on my part to read it in hinglish i was mesmerised by it all.

Eagerly Looking forward to the next one hun 🤗


Hey Uz no issues happens to all of us sometime 😊

@bold - aww thank you 🤗

@red - this one needed dialogues and this was how - in hinglish- it came to me will try to stick to English more though lol easier to type and think for me though Hindi isn't an issue to me - I live in India after all, but the language I mostly THINK in is English

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