Rust and Stardust - IshRa OS. - Page 7

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omggg Aani...THIS...THIS...is the BEST OS i hv read on IshRa on current track...n trust me THIS IS SHOW waale IshRa too... pehle i also thought there should be more days of silent treatment frm ishita,desp raman...!! But when i thought later...y should Ishu stay away?Also hvnt Raman been SUFFERING for makin wrong choice since day one?how much more can u kill a person whos already dying DAILY?? Her MAIN PROB ws she thinkin Raman hvin affair with Shagun..But when she will come to knw truth,her major prob is gone with the wind...the ONLY prob tht remain is Raman din show guts to tell truth..!! And tht can be sorted if they hv a heart to heart talk...Am sayin so is coz when Raman told her half truth post hotel incident,thought she din listen to him tht day-next day on a saner state she WAS ready to giv him chance as she ws sure whtver he ws doin ws for adi n NOT for shagun..!! n thtsy evn aftr her initial breakdown on picnic,she could send RuMan to picnic as again she understood Raman...!! And on these lines,i can say ur OS COMPLETELY FITS current IshRa equation..!! I knw u dnt lik current track..Yet u came up with this as if its a frm ppl lik me who had alwz loved this track 😊

Kudos to u aani..this hv bcome my MOST FAV OS written by U...!!

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I too wished that this scene had happened later on where there is some sort of communication between IshRa but right now, in a way, this scene seems pointless to me. Unless it leads to a conversation like in your OS but I doubt that's going to happen.

I like how you wrote it in a super realistic way where in Raman tries to tell Ishita what he's going through but without breaking the promise he has made to Adi. Cause we all know Raman wouldn't do that. And loved the moment when Ishita just hugged Raman when she realised he was breaking down.

This really was a meaningful OS. If only, such a scene would happen in the serial.

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Awesomely written...brilliant scene...kaash we see such a scene onscreen...😆😉

Originally posted by: EviSab

Such a brilliant piece of literature!!! Honestly it's because the OSs i am still watching YHM. Otherwise I have already lost interest coz of the current lousy track. Hope they'll show us something like this. You are fantastic.

Originally posted by: blue5sky

That was awesome!!!

So cute...some of you guys and your OS's really bring the Ishra we all want to see into our lives!!😳👏

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Oh Lord! it was beautiful! The best redemption seen ever in case of raman's sputidy. But seriously this piece of yours is my fav and I think I'll reread it because its a treasure. And you had me at the tear kissing part and the dialogues in the end were just perfect. As they say nothing is more sexy than a real conversation.

Once again, kudos for this talent buddy! Masha Allah :)

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Hey Aani!

Nice one!

Like I said before I never read spoilers but have a general idea because of the titles. For once I am glad of the "Ruhi ke liye" excuse. It will at least give them a chance to sort things out by being on speaking terms. I, for one, am curious to know what Raman wanted to say to Ishita near the car but couldn't because of that ill timed call.

His desperation made him quite bold. I mean, pulling Ishita down and pinning her!😆

Sometimes I wish Raman would go invisible for one day and follow Ishita around. That would knock some sense in to his head. He must really be hurt at the silent treatment because he'd rather have her angry because that shows she cares like you said. I was thinking the same thing a few days ago.

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

what a killer scene. damn res for more . aissh why can't this happen in show 😭😭

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oh anni, allow me to call you parallel writer of RKB s character shaping. thank god I din unres before what i now realize haaah. same happened last ep " i ll not leave you, you are my wife" and his action of dragging her authoritatively perfectly went parallel to this write up 👏
gosh this shows how much you are aware of raman's depth and you know how he ll react to her silent treatment

LOL Zene tell me about it when he started beating Perv up I got so hyper 😆 you understand the sentiments right? 😉😆 and although we saw because of SBS he would drag Ishu away next I so wasn't prepared for him to go all possessive and territorial over her and when he did I was like YAY... I just saw him on a breaking point actually when this scene aired on SBS the makers did it in their own way but yes this was in the making how much can a man overcome with guilt one like RKB at that could hold back himself - he has been missing her badly, he feels sorry and guilty and learning what Amma did just knocked the wind out of him so finally he had to have that moment of epiphany that yes I am not just a dad which is what this scene did here, in fact in my next OS - Its complicated - too I ended it on a note where RKB has a line that kinda makes him conscious of his choice 😉

my dream reading your os came true the next day
what I feel even ishita is going to react same like this OS in next bedroom scene😉

😆 no idea what the next bedroom scene would be like but from the looks of it RKB and his oneliners return next week 😛🥳

scene would be diff, dialogues would be diff but theme her nature is going to be similar 😛

Angry and disappointed as she might be, something about this man makes it impossible for her to be indifferent she has learned. The night before when she could not bring herself to look after him when he returned she got their daughter to take care of him so now when she sees him cry, it hurts her to see him in this state even when he has hurt her so much. He rarely let's his guard down she has learned, she had found him an insensitive, heartless man when she first met him and now she knows the truth which is not at all what she had assumed it was. He has one of the most loving, giving, gentlest hearts; she has come to know - only life has made him this person who hides his emotions as well as the man who hides from them.


^^this is the best part for me after he grabbed her


thanks Zene 😊