Originally posted by: serendipity.
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WHAT THE HELL WAS THIS?! 😲
I mean it in a good way, promise! 😛 😆 This was unbelievably good, OH MY GOD! Main bhi ine saath jazbaaton mein, and aapke words mein KHO gayi thi! 😛 😆 seriously! This was beyond what i thought this would be! 😳
THANK YOU!
Thanks Reens 😊 and LOL I know you meant it in a good way even if it wasn't I wouldn't have minded it - critics help you learn too 😳
LOVED how Raman forced himself on her (okay im mean 😛) but i mean that passion and intensity, i mean OFCOURSE, Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla... there were 50 other ways you could get her to listen to you... but trust me... i didnt mind his tareeka, ONE BIT! 😛
🤣 Okay, im laughing here, but as i read it it was so beautiful and intense, the intimacy without the generic literal intimacy was just great, beyond words!
😆 desperation makes you do crazy things and here he is desperate to talk to the woman who is his wife and somewhere though they have yet to acknowledge it this relationship is far beyond the Ruhi ke liye tag now so the intimacy that came somehow seemed natural to me... yes the way it came was unexpected but hey this was about him missing her terribly and I knew n0 one w0uld mind this 😉😆
Oh, How i would give ANYTHING to watch something similar in the show! I mean the way he just couldnt do anything but still wanted to take away her pain, and kissed away her tears, like OH MY GOD! How intensely intimate and B E A U T I F U L ! <33 ❤️ :'( too god Aaani, just Too Good!
thank you 😳 and her pain is really bothering him on the show too... could see that in SBS today when he almost hugged her, I am sure when this dumb track ends we would get a hug... at least I hope we do, come on we deserve it for putting up with this track
it really was beautiful, and then the way he just buries his head in the crook of her neck and she as if on cue, also hugs him back as tightly! aah LOVED it! :D <3 It was beautiful how he let it all out...
he really is reaching his breaking point I wont be surprised if he cries once this mess is solved and cries in front of her
told her everything, and i LOVED how Ishita didnt change her stance, because i mean, shes being super logical, this was so real... how could she trust him when he's still not telling her the truth?! LOVED this exchange between them, the conversation... no third parties involved... a SUPER OS! You should be super proud of this one! 😃
that is the crux right = he would not stop with his I cant say anything hence the RUST in the title for old things... and STARDUST - for all the dreams and longing.. I love this line from Lolita the rest is rust and stardust which I felt was apt here 😳
Keep it up, Cant wait for more! 🤗
thanks Reens 🤗
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