Rust and Stardust - IshRa OS. - Page 10

Originally posted by: paru_rox

How do you manage to write so well. I envy you Aani 😛

Fantastic OS 👏 ... and one of my favorite amongst the ones you have given us for this track.
I loved everything ...their doubts, their sadness, their tears, their confrontation ... most of all loved their longing for each other. Re-read the part where they wipe each others tears ... it was beautiful and extremely well written.

Also absolutely loved the line where Raman tells her that she not give him the one punishment he can't take ...staying away from her *sigh*. Beautiful.

I read your previous works whenever I get the time ... they never get boring 😊

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

superb Aani...

this is the best of stories i have read in last few days...

loved it thoroughly...

though i know its not possible in show but it will be a treat to see them like this 😳

atleast we can have an intense convo like this...

so many hopes from show but never mind after al we have u 😉

super duper amazing yaar...loved it

Originally posted by: deepjin

almost can imagine it happening in front of my eyes...beautifully put to words with every emotion n tears👏

Originally posted by: -AnGel_Mind-

Awsum OS 😃

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

*Reserved*

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*Phew* I'm on an editing roll!

After this, I just have to edit After The Storm. Unless, of course,you or Lucky post something else. 😆

Hey Vanny LOL I really flooded the forum recently so no issues take your time 😊

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Wow! ☺️ ☺️

This was just wow! ☺️ ☺️

I wish Raman had done this in the show!!!! Eeeps!!! ☺️

thanks hon and he is getting there if this past week is any preview to go by 😉😆

Okayy. *Out of fangirling mode*

Honestly, IshRa need to have a very serious heart-to-heart. Talking isnecessary sometimes. I loved the way he tackled her and didn't allow her to leave and made her listen. Sometimes, even listening is a problem and Raman knows that better than Ishita. Poor guy!

@bold - my mantra is talk, I need time to open up but once I do I can talk someone' ears off 😆 so yeah I want them to openly communicate and lay things on the table seems like the CVs are also getting there, RKB had to talk to Mihir this week albeit for a different reason and issue 😆

And then his plea for her to not leave him. Awww! But I'm happy that you made Ishita's resolve strong! He chose his actions and now he must face the consequences. Idiot! 😡

Actions have reactions and unless and until you can justify yourself you cant expect co-operation as per me which is why Ishita had to do what she did 😳

Too good Aani! 👏

Thanks Vanny

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Oh my.. Honestly Aani, what a brilliant piece of writing...

This was such a touching one.. Why couldn't they have this in the show.?? It was such a beautiful scene..

Every bit of it was perfect.. You really are a brilliant writer.. 👏

The moment from the realization of them sleeping in each other's arms to The moment of them pouring out their pain.. It was so touchy.. He kissed her tears away and she held on to him while he cried in her arms.. Damn, it was so well portrayed.. 😭 Hats off to you..

The rest of the conversation was brilliant too.. He asked her to never go away.. I can only imagine this happening on the show.. It would be so dreamy..

Totally loved this OS.. Keep up your awesome work.!!! 😃