Rust and Stardust - IshRa OS. - Page 8

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Ahha... I am writing one too :)

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kaan pakadke sorry for not editing before. When this came out, i was busy writing my own story, then I got lazy. SORRY Aani😭

no need to be sorry Lucky 🤗

Now, THIS is what I am talking about... Raman needs to take a step forward and jolt them out of the lull they are in. He's caused this mess, and he should take an effort to smooth things out with her. They need to talk. how many times do we have to say this. Unless they start talking they cannot just get into a healing mode.

Yep I couldn't digest a man like him would just sit around and sulk in a corner forever lol I have somewhat a mercurial attitude myself so know he couldn't just always wallow around in self-pity and guilt people like us cannot be dormant for long :P

Your whole description of the crying and tears part was 👏 Really Aani, it was visual and emotional at the same time. I could see it happening.

thanks Lucky 😊

and the ending gives us SO much hope Aani... at least it gave me hope! her saying that she wished she could have met the old Raman actually is an incentive for him to go back to his old personality.


That was the reason I ended it the way I did, cos the old Raman wasnt just softer and sweeter but also... he wouldnt let anyone affect his judgement 😉
Here goes:

"The morning brought more peace if it did not entirely dissipate fear." - Elizabeth Gaskell, Sylvia's Lovers

Ah lovely quote as always 😊

Originally posted by: btalwar

Woaah ... What did I read just now ... this is amazing stuff ... you write scenes which are so realistic and believable. You make them sound so realistic that it feels as if we are watching it rather than reading it ... simply wow ...



Hey Bhanu thank you... I cant do melodrama to save my life 😆 cringe at the mention of it so try to keep it as real as I can so thank you for saying that 😳😊

The best part with your work is that you have always aligned the characters and their respective behavior with the present situation. At the moment, something like this is totally expected from Raman who is day by day getting desperate to talk to Ishita. He can resume to doing something like that ... and like you have mentioned, he is a complex character who rarely brings forward his emotional side unless and until pushed ... and this track seems to be doing just that ...

And his desperation came forth last night at last with that exclamation of biwi ho tum meri! LOL the guy had had enough of her silent treatment, his guilt, being snubbed and mostly staying away from her 😉 the old Raman would have left Ishita to her own devices like he did post getting perv arrested and making it known for all the world he wont and cant do more people can act now as they want but NOT expect a thing from him, this one was soo sooo longing for Ishu he grabbed her hand and dragged her away and finally being who he is screamed at her to get into the car because he just wanted to be with her 😉

The way u have described the pain both of them are going through is too good... we all know that lack of communication can have serious implications ... so a confrontation like this is definitely required ...


Yep lack of communication is the source of 90% of problems as per me people simply need to speak up and listen 😳

If I am somehow able to find Aladin's Gin, my first wish will be to replace you with the present CVs 😳 😳 .

As always, thanks for the PM. It is always a delight to read your work.

Cheers

Bhanu

Aww thanks Bhanu thats sweet of ya to say

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome one-shot..👍🏼

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest

this was one of the most beautiful OS i've ever read!!!!

Originally posted by: modernfamily

I'm spellbound Aani. Due to time crunch, I hardly comment on posts these days. I just read the posts on my way to work and just hit the like button at max. Trust me this this one has compelled me to comment. Although the track is going a little low these days, I'm one of those who is still unfazed by the events so far. The silence between the two is building up a longing within me, just as it is creating an emotional and sexual (though latent) tension between Raman and Ishita. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the OS and the way you have put across their anxieties, thoughts, misunderstandings is amazing. It also gives me hope that these two will come around pretty soon.

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

m dead😎... this was a master piece 4 sure... loved it 4rm the core :)🤗

Originally posted by: mnr123

Awesome OS I wud so love to see this one show ... 😃

Originally posted by: rusha4003

👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ...FABULOUS !!!!!

Take a bow , my dear !

You ought to be the writer of this show ... 👍🏼

Originally posted by: gk_09

This was AMAZING Aani! 👏

Beautifully written - now only if something like this would happen the show.

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Lovely update