Rust and Stardust - IshRa OS. - Page 6

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

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Originally posted by: ...RamonaG...

awesome OS Aaani so romantic n emotional ❤️. Beautifully written👍🏼👏

Originally posted by: sobha

i just loved it..i love the way u write..do u have literature as study bg??

😃

i m ur os fan...love all of them

Originally posted by: Autumn.

You always give wonderful conversations between Ishra. This scene has not happen yet in the show. And now I want all this conversation to happen in the show between Ishra. But know it wont be happening.

I love your writing. I am kind of actually addicted to your stories. Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: _Seera_

Just fabulous! I loved every thing about it... I wish this is shown in the show!😕

Originally posted by: happenstance

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This must be the fastest i've unreserved, but time is on my side today thank god!

Aani oh gosh, i don't know what to say- literally. i must find another word instead of beautiful but seriously this was just heartbreakingly beautiful😳

hey Uz thank you 😊

This is the conversation that needs to be had between these two. There needs to be some acknowledgment as to why each other's actions/words matter so much to them both.

I know man! And seems like some part of such a convo may be shown finally from today' SBS scene - he almost hugged her! thats freaking huge when it comes to these two honestly the day this majboori track ends I want them to have a nice, long IshRa scene like that day in the party of Raman' friends

i liked how in the end he had no choice but to resort to physically stopping her, because that is one aspect in which she can't overpower him. Then the breakdown, the letting down of his guard. You conveyed in such a convincing and aesthetic manner. Her hopelessness in front of him, was just so endearing too.

@bold -Its the juxtaposition of this factor that appealed to me he is emotionally weak right now and his guilt is just drowning him and the only strength he has at the moment that can help him is physical which he would use on Perv tonight 😆🥳

Aani as always your work is such a pleasure to read hun🤗🤗

thanks Uz 🤗

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

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Originally posted by: Nichuss

wow,... i loved ths heart to heart talk...

kaash ths hapns in yhm...nt the bedrroom scene 😛(its not

happening i knw) but ishra need a talk...heart to heart talk...

ishu needs to knw her trust nt broken,,,,,,

Originally posted by: Isma_A

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Aani, I loved this piece!! So so so beautiful! Raman forcing Ishita to talk and listen and getting it all out, and ending the piece with two steps forward but still that one step back-- perfect way to describe them right now and how the story should move on the show. The dialogues were perfect, and just the kind of dialogues we need to see and hear from Raman!! I can't take these two in pain anymore. 😭

Beautiful, Aani!! Loved it!!

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa

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oh my god! what did I just read now...fantastic👏 no words to express...

I could feel their emotions too. one of the best os I have read😳

and thanks for the pm