Tangled Webs - An IshRa OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: drooler

beautifully written

loved it

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

wow this is wonderful.

very well written and amazing because you skipped the whole drama of revelation. It is justa mature and sensible conversation between two adults and their journey which has officially begin to the destiny of trust and honesty.

I higly doubt that the adi matter will solve like this. Even if the matter will get solve calmly how will raman mend the broken trust, thats the biggest question.

I am hating shagun, he is very good at manipulating anyone and even using her own son for her selfish mitive which i am sure will cost her greatly in the future.

Enjoy a lot reading this one shot.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: serendipity.

reserved, i was itching to read something by you on this track.

BRB

Originally posted by: Shanig123

Aani if only I have excess to the writers of the show I will tell them to read your OS . I am so tired of the current track I only take part in LU and don't watch it . I think you know what an emotional person I am .hats off to you my friend you are a great writer I wish you nothing but the very best life has to offer .

I would be really dissapinted if Ishita let's him off the hook this time . Raman and Shagun are both really bad parents in my view . If you don't tell your kids and teach them from wrong to right society will and how does society teach kids ? Drugs ,alcohol stealing etc Once you allow a child to taste what is in the outside world that is it . Child is gone forever . Saying that I only hope they show how Ishita will teach both these ignorant people the value of good parenting . lying in any relationship is not tolerated and should not be accepted . You have a better way of expressing Aani Brilliant .

Originally posted by: arshi33

Wow!!! Very well written...👏👏

Hope something like this actually happens in the show...😊😊

Bt great work... It was wonderful...👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: happenstance

Aani Im so glad you wrote!

The Raman you have depicted here, is the Raman i 'see' when I'm watching the show. That is the perception I have of him too. I could waffle on here for ages, but what I loved is that you conveyed his utter surprise and bewilderment that Ishita could ever think that he has cheated on her. I want them to have this conversation onscreen too, because sometimes no matter what our actions may be it's always good to actually verbalise our thoughts and feelings.

ps. lovely quote!😳

Originally posted by: avni_19

Omg! Well written. Reallyy beautiful update. Loved it totally.

Lets c wts in store for us in the serial. Hope things sort out betwn ishra! Cant see thm in pain.

Keep continuing. Eager to read more. Plsss PM me.. thnkuuu

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

brilliant one-shot...👍🏼

Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11

This is beautiful and a perfect end to this crappy story. I want this track to end exactly like your OS. It's amazing :)

Originally posted by: ishra4ever

What writing skills! Marvellous. I felt like I was reading a novel written by a professional writer.

The way you expressed their feelings in words is superb to say the least. Keep writing dear.
Pm me too if possible :)