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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

Awesome OS! 👏

I love the stories you write.
I would just say that, this is something I would like to see in the show. 👍🏼

"First thing first... I do not love Shagun anymore you thickhead. I will never again in my life love her. Next, I will not ever cheat on you or even divorce you no matter how much you drive me up a wall, I might strangle you one day but never divorce you.🤣 You are my wife and that will not change, not in this lifetime. I was hiding things from you and lying to you, I know... I was meeting Shagun because of the accident Ishita. I know it was wrong of me to do that but I... I was."


"I didn't wanna lie to you Ishita but was influenced by Adi' tears; by Shagun stopping me. She said you won't understand since you aren't Adi' mother. I was lying to you, all of you. I was letting you down. All of you trusted me and I deceived all of you... I did it out of my love for Adi. I was not thinking about anyone but him... but when I learned that he is the culprit today I knew, I had to tell you the truth. I do not know what to do Ishita. I just cannot understand what to do. I cannot let my son become a criminal and I cannot punish him. I cannot hand him over to the cops, he is a kid after all and I cannot let him go scot-free too else it will set a bad example to him in the future. Today he did an accident and had no remorse, no guilt; tomorrow he may do worse."


I've been imagining Raman speaking these words, when he's explaining to Ishita about all this.

@red, That suddenly took me out of the serious mode into shock, confusion and then laughter. 😆


thanks Dhaakshu glad I could make you laugh out of the blue with that line
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Very well written as usual Aani 👏⭐️

Ishita's assumption that Raman and Shagun trying to get back together and his shock at the same was good. Two things I really liked in this work -- Ishita said she wudn't give up Ruhi no matter what. And she did not forgive Raman. Excellent !!!

Loved their conversation. While I am rooting for a talk b/w these two in the show, IMO Ishita should just give a silent treatment so that Raman pulls his head out of the sand that he's currently buried in. No more mahaanta for the hubby.

I am so done with the crap that CV's are doling out for the past couple of weeks. Too much of Shagun is getting on my nerves and patience is at an all time low. Can they just cut this shit or at least release spoilers so that we know when this is ending

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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Aani, this was awesomely written as always...

Glad you included that little thing regarding trauma of that param track...even I am not done with the way they have ended it in the show...and the way u included here gives chance to CVs to actually sudharofy their slack...

Loved ur approach towards this track...how u made the characters react...sensibilties intact...God know what CVs are upto...

Keep up the good work...it puts some better story in our mind, if the show fails to reason.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woohhooo. Another OS! Yay.
Loved it. 😛🤗

The fact that our dear Raavan Kumar needed a helping hand to detangle himself and that was his dear JKR-his wife : portrayed wonderfully.

You kept the premise of the show in mind and retained maturity along with reality.
Ishita is truly mature when it comes to troublesome situations, even Raman is generally, just that he loses his control and forgets to assimilate himself when it comes to Adi!
Hence, fortunately when one has his cool the other loses in their case!😆 Truly amazing co-ordination. Rather you're thought process is clearly vivid in your writings and it is in sync with the CVs!😉😆👏Every person does have a weak point. Unfortunately it is his gruesome and impertinent son : Adi the great!

The way Ishita acted was the last thing that Raman expected. If the CVs do depict a similar situation then the entire audience would applaud for sure.👏

When you treat the guilty with you're silence that seems most painful to their loved one.
Silence speaks volumes in times of distress. You end up amusing people with your tactful skills and i'm sure the audience will accept the mature handling. Hope the CVs does enact a proper situation at the end. Fingers crossed.

By the way, i noticed that you did NOT forget to lighten up the mood a little. In Raman's reactions he did come back to his normal self!🤣

For the time being, thanks a ton for the OS! Breath of fresh air in this forum.😊
Again a request of writing these amazing stuff at short intervals.
Do keep them coming buddy. 🤗
Edited by afsanaanjum - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Aani, i absolutely loved it i soo want stuff to happen along the same lines, youve done a fab job, i will update my reserved comment properly real soon, just wanted to know, this was FAB and that im done reading 😳 im ina hurry atm 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Human beings are fickle by nature. Raman behaved much the same. He decieved Ishita , not in the way she expected but nonetheless he did and hence Ishita choosing not to trust him makes sense to me. After all the efforts that went into their friendship , Raman could have acted better. He didn't and that makes him human.
Ishita only acknowledges herself as Raman's friend.So her doubts were legitimate. She proved herself once more the better woman and better mother than Shagun. Incubator would be the correct term for Shagun (airhead , bimbo also suits very well). Mother goes only with Ishita. This woman deserves standing ovation.
All in all very good job Aani. Loved this thoroughly.
Love
Nidha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Hey Aani!

Hey Sneha

I am loving this Raman who screwed up everything because it will be a treat to watch him earn Ishita's trust.

well you are about to love him more just learned the family vacation will happen! 😳


With Ishita and Raman, they repeat incidents. Previously when he was trying to pacify Ishita, it was for Ruhi's sake. I am talking about the Ishita apologising to Adi episode. Now, he will actually try to win her for his sake.

I know but damn with what he is about to do he isnt digging a hole he is digging his grave cant seem to see how this will work 😕

Ishita bit him and it bled?😆 I am still hungover from your previous OS. So, this made me immediately think of love bites.😆☺️

LMAO no comments on that 😆 I cant in good faith type what came to my mind here

Now coming to the serious part. Your Raman was bang on. He would have coerced and bullied Ishita into telling her troubles but not speak a word of his own. Like I said in your post "Burning The Last Bridge", this is about Raman's trust and final doubts regarding Ishita. This incident will break probably the biggest wall that Raman has built around his heart.

Cant say about that anymore the news Ramona just posted has kinda zapped my mind
I have always wanted to see Raman's feelings for Ishita. Pure raw emotion because the other times when he did show them they were masked by other factors like Ruhi. I wanted it to be just about him and her. I have a feeling this track will fulfill my wish.

Well right now I think perhaps the track is heading to unite two unlikely allies- Ishita and Ashok since Shagun is out to wrech havoc 😡

I also wanted Ishita to give him the cold treatment which your Ishita did and I loved it. This was exactly the way I imagined and want Ishita to behave when the truth comes out. Even some of our dialogues match.😃
Alas the treatment seems to have no effect at least not of the desired kind 😵 not on the show at least I really hope this pathetic track ends man

Her idea to take Neil and speak to Adi is brilliant.
I am quite eager to see how Raman will earn her forgiveness. The show's Raman as well as your Raman. *hint hint*😆

Oh from what he is about to do it will require him to move mountains

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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I'm in the same boat as you with the current track and I'm sure many others are as well. I love what you've written as that would be what I want to happen in the show as well. I do not know about the Adi part but the core concept of Raman telling the truth to Ishita and Ishita understanding Raman's difficulties and yet being disappointed at the way he handled this situation is what I hope will be shown soon in the show.


Hey Abby thanks and well this boat is about to drown us from the latest news

@bold - if only wishes were horses
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: rev4eva

That was a mindblowing OS... I so wish the CV's read this and handle the whole misunderstanding track tactically...


thanks Rev 😊

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