Tangled Webs - An IshRa OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: CharmGal

Glad you wrote an Os 😊

Reserved

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

*Reserved*

***

Finally, another piece from you. I absolutely love it! 👏 Thanks Vanny

I understand what you mean about getting frustrated with the current track. -___- I'm losing patience bit by bit.

God tell me about it I mean when this track began I had no idea it would gnaw at patience this much probably because this show has never stretched a track this long and when it did it had to be this one

It was amazing and it covered everything I want to see addressed in the serial. Thank you 😳

Raman is indeed having a hard time coping with the recent revelations, but as you pointed out and we all know, not sharing with Ishu is the biggest mistake he'll ever make because Ishu was/is his strongest support.

exactly my grievance with him I mean a man shown as smart as him completely loses his plot for the sake of his son, fine it shows he's human and prone to mistakes and weaknesses but what really irks me is that he is doing this not on his own but on Shagun' orders almost! Like come on who is your ex to tell you and why should you listen to her duffer 😡

And if he loses that support, like your ending, he'll crumble and be a broken man once again.

I want this to happen to him, he should be rescued from this ditch by Ishita but instead of being scotfree he should be burdened and feel more guilty because of that - her support something he knew she would provide him and yet lying to her plus I want her to ignore him LOL

Alas, if only all this happens in the serial. SMH. By the way, I especially liked the way you managed to untangle Raman from the web, yet left him there dangling! 😉 The idiot deserves it!

Yep he deserves to be only troubled with one thing by the end of this week how to make up/out with Ishita 😉😆

P.S. - Even in this somber OS, you managed to make me laugh! This line right here "...I might strangle you one day but never divorce you." So romantic in RKB style! 🤣

😆😆 credit due to the scene with Sid where he says he cannot let someone else do the honors of killing her only he can do that... LOL I could actually see him being so pissed off here in my head when she assumed he was having an affair she took him on a different tangent with her assumptions and one which honestly miffed and annoyed him and we all say the first thing that comes to us when that happens

Originally posted by: Nany

wow...
its amazing...
love ur writting skill...
reaallly nice

thanks for the wonderfull os

Originally posted by: shalu79

reserved :)

Edited:

Beautiful Anni👏

Their conv was so sensible n mature . loved it. I was choked up while reading this.

Thanks Shalu 😊 I am not actually a fan of melodrama so I tried to keep it real and rooted and yet show it had an undercurrent of tension to it 😳

Very beautifully written as always. Loved how u incorporated that Parmeet incident here to show Ishu's pain to RKB.

an incident like that is hard to forget for any woman after all and well something repeating like this esp when she is that disturbed was bound to show

n hw Ishu misunderstood RKB meeting lawyer as he wants divorce from her. This thing can surely happen in show if Ishu gets to know they both had gone to meet lawyer. Loved this part the most

exactly if she learns they are meeting lawyers she can conclude loads of things but accident would not be one of them for sure and that is why this idea struck me too bad she didnt follow em last night ah perhaps she overhears Raman talking with a lawyer or something I want her to actually shake him up without being OTT 😉

"First thing first... I do not love Shagun anymore you thickhead. I will never again in my life love her. Next, I will not ever cheat on you or even divorce you no matter how much you drive me up a wall, I might strangle you one day but never divorce you. You are my wife and that will not change, not in this lifetime. I was hiding things from you and lying to you, I know... I was meeting Shagun because of the accident Ishita. I know it was wrong of me to do that but I... I was."

Typical RKB style I can imagine KP saying those dialogues

LOL I am glad it sounds like him I wasnt much convinced 😳

At the end Ishu gave him right advice to deal with this issue.

You, your blind love is as much damaging to Adi Raman as is Shagun' ego here. " 👏👏👏

Raman really has to realise this who better to tell him this than his anchor Ishu.

yep a parents love can be as harmful too esp if its blind only mothers cant be blamed for damaging kids 😉

Though it will be sweet torture to see Ishu angry n hurt n how RKB wins her trust back but seriously wish they dont drag it too much.

Thanks n a big 🤗 for this wonderful OS

Love,

Shalu

thanks once again Shalu glad you liked this one and I cant wait for RKB' Ishu manao mission :P I hope she doesnt give him a free pass for the sake of all that is holy

P.S. This track was making me so restless that today I too tried my hand at writing OS n felt really relieved after writing it😊

welcome to the frustrated viewer/writer club Shalu 😆 will edit my comment asap for sure 😊

Originally posted by: _Divya_

resdd

Originally posted by: prosevelvet

This was nice! I laughed at Raman's incredulity that Ishita thought he was cheating! I'd love it if the show would portray the same😆

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

aaahissshh like feel relief reading now this part. absolutely in character and gripped story track. this could convinced me no doubt can be the the part of show.


thanks Zene
She does not want to force herself on him taking advantage of Ruhi 😉 that impressed me most so much inverse of shagun . 👏 i loved your ishita👍🏼

I cant see Ishita being someone who can do something like this, she would never compromise on her self-respect she never even once pleaded with Subbu the man she loved for a decade why would she stop Raman - esp if she thinks he doesnt want her whats the use of forcing yourself on someone but Ruhi is a part of her soul and that is something she cannot give up 😳


"Next, I will not ever cheat on you or even divorce you no matter how much you drive me up a wall, I might strangle you one day but never divorce you. You are my wife and that will not change, not in this lifetime. I was hiding things from you and lying to you, I know... I was meeting Shagun because of the accident Ishita."

one more things apart from his determination of not divorcing her,how he is back to main issue like he made divorcing as 2nd but being honest to her was his main priority and like he is again going to his zone from his almost confession .😲 dunno if am wrong

well he has been cheated on so def being accused of being a cheater cannot be a light thing for him and he has been dying to tell her the truth 😳

Think about it Raman. Are you setting the right example here for your kids

may his soul wakes him up after adi is revealed as culprit ^^


amen I want her to say something on these lines in the show too
You showed me a way to deal with this problem Ishita but how will I win back your trust? How will I ever earn your forgiveness

^^ shows how much her trust upon him is important for him

as someone who is now important to him he is of course bound to feel the loss of her trust and faith in him esp because that is the one thing they had established so far and now its all for naught

gosh I was just shocked reading last line. perfect punishment for him 😎 just like you i feel to tatol him 😆


LOL he deserves it after what he is making Ishu go through sometimes the biggest punishment is the burden of guilt that you carry and not what someone sentences you with 😉

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

awesome aani..loved tht line by Raman tht he may strangle her one day bt never divorce her...tht ws so typical RKB..i could so so imagine bhai sayin this if at all if the same line ws givn to Raman in show as well..!!

Originally posted by: divya17.8

Again an amazing OS from you..👏

loved it..

Hope they show something like this in serial too..