Tangled Webs - An IshRa OS - Page 8

Originally posted by: SWAN123

Loved it Anni!

I hope they make our man good and real again. Don't want to see him like this - cheating and conniving.

Good work!

Love,

Ashu

Originally posted by: Dhwaniiam

I loved it ...
Please do Pm me your other OS ...
Please do continue this OS

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Haila... 5 pages already :) will edit in some time Aani...

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Your Author's note DESERVES a comment from me :)

Hey Lucky 😃

😆 I didnt think anything could shake you! YOu are right, Raman needs rattling. I understand what he is doing, and even agree with a lot of it.

Read the news Ramona posted the whole forum is shaken I am no exception I wasnt when I wrote this OS btw just pissed off now I am angry!

BUt like I said in some posts, I absolutely dont understand why he is keeping all this from the woman he started sharing so much with!!!

Exactly esp when the woman in question is so understanding in the first place

P.S Comparatively I am still cool. It could be because I am busy in my holidays. If I was back home, maybe I would have had time to be more irritated than I am. Holidays end tomorrow, so I know what I have to look forward to... so for my sanity, CVs, please end this track soon!!!


You are about to go insane!
Now, coming to the OS:

- The Quote... made so much sense to me once I completed the story. It was perfect

😳 Raman is getting tangled up in webs alright of emotions, lies, betrayal and deception of his own and of those around him hence I felt the quote is apt

- I LOVE LOVE this Ishita of yours. Strong, smart and ready to beat Shagun at her own game! If emotional blackmail trapped Raman, then actual blackmail will surely bring Shagun to her knees... and Ishita is still rooted in her morality. She just wants what is best for the kid!!!

From what I have seen of her that is what I have seen her to be - a strong woman who is smart and willing to do what is needed of her but not lose herself in the process and of course she has a very understanding and forgiving heart esp when it comes to people around her and Adi, well she has come to accept him as a son so that is what inspired me as well as the fact that I could see her self-respect wont let her forgive Raman too

- I can see KP enacting this "As soon as she is done so shocked is he by her conclusions that he almost jumps off his chair in his haste, making the chair tumble down with the movement."

LOL I saw this in some movie once the hero was so angry when the heroine said something when he gets up from the chair the moment is so sudden that it topples down the chair!

- Whistle bajaao moment "Next, I will not ever cheat on you or even divorce you no matter how much you drive me up a wall, I might strangle you one day but never divorce you. "

LOL this line seems to be a hit with everyone 😆

- ""Save it Raman, just because I understand things doesn't mean I am in a forgiving mood."" >> I obviously LOVE you for writing this line. My Ishita and yours are 'connected' too 😉

of course they would be we share a connect after all 😛

- Idhar bhi leke aa gayi tum Subbu ko? Desperate much Aani 😉 😆 Jokes apart, yes... Raman would have actually strangled her if she'd gone to Subbu for comfort!

LOL not desperation here I just wanted Raman to feel what Ishita did and just thinking about this made him uneasy as they say you cant understand what ails someone unless you walk a mile in their shoes its the same here - he cannot even imagine walking in those shoes

- "You, your blind love is as much damaging to Adi Raman as is Shagun' ego here. " You said this in reponse to me yesterday too... perfectly placed in your story here!!!
and his love is being even more blind

Finally Aani, you shouldnt say you aren't proud of this one. I have told you before (in one of the stories you wrote during the Perv track I think) of a quote that goes something like "an author needs inspiration, perspiration or desperation". Aani, Any story coming out of any of these is worth writing, and worth reading. This was another fine piece from you, and I am glad you wrote this. OK, I will stop preaching now, before you get annoyed at me too :)

Ah Lucky I am fed up of this track honestly and hence wrote something that just came to me in a flow of sorts not that I am not exactly happy with how this shaped up but its not my best piece that is all 😳

Here goes... this one can be interpreted 100 different ways, but I look at it for the inclusiveness in the first line and not the literal words of the other lines. Hope it makes sense to you as it did to me?

"Yet each man kills the thing he loves
By each let this be heard
Some do it with a bitter look
Some with a flattering word
The coward does it with a kiss
The brave man with a sword"
- Oscar Wilde, The Ballad Of Reading Gaol


OMGG I was gonna use this one for the epigraph of this one 😲

Originally posted by: SilverGold

See Raman, that's what happens when you lie and try to fake-kiss your ex.

**Reserved**

Originally posted by: baubles

Amazing piece of writing and simply perfect!! This is the way I wish it would go in the show...

Raman was typical Raman...humourous romance in RKB style..esp the 'I might strangle you one day but never divorce you' ...could imagine him saying it..😆

And your Ishita is BRILLIANT...!!! Calm throughout and yet made sure every word she spoke impacted him...got him out of the whole mess beautifully and at the same time made it clear that he isn't gonna be forgiven easily..

Subtly written...it's perfect..! 😃

Originally posted by: Elita

Very nicely written...with the way Ishita and viewer's saw things in Monday's episode...this confusion of being cheated is bound to happen.

Originally posted by: wendy25

*Huge Applauds*
Its the most sensible, subtle n ishra-ish ending of this track!
I hope writers show us something like this rather then OTT cliche drama
please add me in your pm list ,
I would love to read ur work :)

Originally posted by: Annu92

superb yaar...👍🏼

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hi dear
as always, beautifully written👏
i really enjoyed this... ⭐️
i like a strong, firm and when needed an unforgiving ishita..👍🏼
some of raman's reactions were pretty hilarious though 😆.. i could so imagine karan pulling them off with ease😎

take care

Originally posted by: rutu83

this was the exact quote i thought of when the whole raman lying started! what a tangled web indeed
raman is acting like an idiot and i don't think he'll come clean like this 🤢- i'm so glad you pointed out everything we've all been thinking about. honestly, he was unforgiving when it came to romi but for shagun 😡
really well written- i know it's too much to hope to have somethng like this in the show