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Res- Aani is this suitable reading on my commute? 😳

Res

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I am not one of the disappointed ones Aani, and I am not just saying it. I think you'll know when you read my comments fully.😊

You have left it at a crucial juncture yes, but anything you could have said in continuation would really have been a figment of your imagination and may not have resonated with us when we actually got the background from the show.

Now, about the update. It doesn't seem enough nowadays to say "wonderful" There has to be something more superlative. I will find that word one day.👏

Although you haven't delved into Ishita's past. You have given us detailed description of her pain. Irrespective of what her background story is, the fact is , she is a heart-broken woman. And Raman has realised that.

On first reading, this story seems devoid of Ishita, because she doesn't say much. But thats not true is it? This is Ishita's story, just told by Raman, thats all. He has aptly guessed the anger, the pain she holds for her past. He relates to her more than she knows. She seems him as a bitter man angry at his ex, but he too is a lonely man with a wonderful heart, just like you said. I remembered the quote I put the last one, about how a man's face is is autobiography and a woman's face is her work of fiction. That is so true with these too.

Now, coming to Raman... WOW. How he has grown. Not because he realised her pain, he was always a perceptive man. But because he found the confidence and the belief. Courage to talk to her, because he knows that he'll have to bare his own soul to comfort her. and Belief in their relationship. In spite of the circumstances that brought them together, he wants this relationship to have a solid base for the future. He sees her as an equal component of his future, not just as Ruhi's mother (and you were right when you replied to my earlier comments, this is sooo not about Ruhi or motherhood) but as his partner in life.

Here's to the end (or pause) of another excellent short story from you Aani!!!👍🏼

I got 2 drastically different quotes for you today 😉

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." - Aristotle


Piglet sidled up to Pooh from behind. "Pooh?" he whispered.
"Yes, Piglet?"
"Nothing," said Piglet, taking Pooh's hand. "I just wanted to be sure of you." - A.A. Milne, Winnie-the-Pooh

Originally posted by: happenstance

Res- Aani is this suitable reading on my commute? 😳

Wow excellent stuff

Only If they could use such sensitivity and depth in the show

Now I never do this

But could you please comment on my story

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4053782

I would like to know what you think of this

Originally posted by: serendipity.

coming coming, gimme a few minutes 😛

)okay maybe hours :P) 😆

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

Wow excellent stuff

Only If they could use such sensitivity and depth in the show

Now I never do this

But could you please comment on my story

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4053782

I would like to know what you think of this

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Of course Uz they just talk no PG stuff here😆</font>

Lol- hehe yes I read it and loved it. Will comment in detail a bit later. All I can say right now is that it was everything I wanted it to be! 😳

😭 It's over. And was so emotional. Yes, Ishita had to know that Raman went through total heartbreak at the knowledge of his wife cheating on him. And it was not like he was a player or a bad boy that he deserved it. And this understanding of theirs, will be the next step in their friendship. At least Ishita and Raman are together... And Aani, even this SS was amazing. You have to be back with another one. Sorry, I wasn't able to comment on the second last chapter,😔, but I was not well and I wasn't online but that chapter was amazing too. Raman had to know how broken Subbu had left Ishita...I'm going to either kill him, or his mum...😡

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