Beneath The Surface - An IshRa SS | Last Ch - Pg 28 - Page 22

Thanks for the pm, I haven't visited this forum for a while now since I have exams going on this month. Today I have read all the parts and Aani it's was wonderful! 👍🏼

Personally, this chapter is my favourite in Beneath the Surface SS since brought some closure to Ishita regarding to Subbu's matter and it's had also covered the most vital issue which is for Ishu to realise that she is entitled to grief and feel angry (basically to experience all emotions that makes us human beings). The best part is it is her beloved Ravan Kumar, who had taught and encourage her to be free from those bitter emotions and only then she can really start her life afresh. Otherwise if she doesn't grief or express her feeling then in a sense she wouldn't be able to move on fully because physiologically thinking is that she hadn't acknowledge and recognise that this subbu chapter in her life is closed. It's was very maturely written and really hope to see something like this in the show.

loved it.. hoping u will write more stories.. i love rading ur work.. thanks 4 ol the lovely stories you wrote on yhm..i loved them ol :)

Loved it very very much AnniLoved the way u ended it. Really Ishu's character is really intriguing. She has never shown her inner feelings or hurt openly, she always hide it or as u mentioned worked it off. As i read in ur note abt 6th dec episode, it reminded me of episode in which IshRa get custody of Ruhi n how Shagun accuses n insult Ishu there too she went silent n Aftr coming home she was angry n again diverted all her energy in cooking. As Raman mentioned in ur OS, JKR only takes out her frustration n anger on her Ravaan Kumar😆😉.

wonderful ss aani...for me THE BEST part in this last update is THIS.. this ws REAL...i can feel it...evry word u wrote...it made me teary eyed.. this is something EPIC EPIC REAL...i really donno hw u wrote this n i donno hw to explain wht i felt readin this...i would just say..u couldn hv gt more real than this..fact...harsh fact is wht u wrote here..

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

"People who ...who do these things Ishita, they may try to find ways, say they had their own reasons for doing xyz things. However, the truth is, no reason ever feels valid enough when you are heartbroken or betrayed... or abandoned midway.

Nothing can ever qualify for that. No reason can ever validate stabbing someone who loved you in the back. No excuse can be good enough for it.

Nothing can amount to that experience or feeling or the pain and loneliness; you get in return as some sort of punishment.

You feel punished for loving someone, love becomes your crime.

When you give someone a better part of you, your life, and your time - you expect that person to honor it, because you have had him or her in this, just the same, because you are honoring your end of the commitment.

You feel you should be just as valued by the other person, because you are valuing them, but if that does not happen... it kills a part of you. It kills you somehow somewhere deep down. You feel angry and dejected - with them but with yourself as well, because all of it seems such a colossal waste. You feel you let yourself down; you wasted and ruined a better part of you over someone who never deserved it someone who was not able enough to appreciate it in the first place.

You can't just get over the fact you made a mistake in choosing the wrong person to hand out your heart, yourself somehow."

Aani!🤗

Amazing update Aani Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

Aani I am seroiusly thinking of keeping a bank of your stories on yhm along with its episodes...totally love how you intricately depict the situations happened in the show with the feelings of the characters...how he felt that spunk in her. during that engagement ...

Ishita was very much herself ...loved the way u potrayed her...loved the words Raman used to make her understand his motive...

I am very content with this end...its very much real then...everything cannot be told over a cup of coffee

Feel awesome reading such stuff...makes me watch the episodes again n again...

Yaay...it my 500th post!!!

You completely justified your SS. I found the End PERFECT. That was the End of first phase and start of another so that story should stop there only .

AWWHHH, It was sweet to see Raman getting so nervous to have this conversation with Ishita but I'm glad he went through with it and managed to establish that he will be her friend from now onwards. Though I'm sad that this SS has ended, I must say it ended on a very logical note as it will definitely take time for Ishita to open up and start talking about Subbu and her heartbreak. So, to have Ishita just accept Raman's offer of one day talking to him about all this was the perfect start to their new relationship.

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

"It's okay Ishita... we have our whole lives ahead of us, you can open up whenever you want, after all I am not going anywhere. I just wanted to let you know today, you have a friend you can talk to, one who will not cry or sympathize with you, one who won't question or embarrass you, just a friend who will be there for you, who would understand you."