Beneath The Surface - An IshRa SS | Last Ch - Pg 28 - Page 19

Originally posted by: lourel24

loved it.The akwardness aroused because of presence of subu was beautifully portrayed. 👏

Originally posted by: sridevi_n

very nice. the way raman understood ishita's pain was awesome.

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Great update Aani Di!Thanks fr pm!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!

Originally posted by: PagliLadki

Nice update

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

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Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Res, and i'll unres tomorrow :)


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Hey Aani... this brought tears to my eyes. Although maybe I should have saved them for the next part, I think it will be more emotional! Thats my compliment to you BTW. I don't usually get teary-eyed because of fiction :)

Hey Lucky thank you so much for saying this, the fact that my UD could strike a chord with you is the biggest reward and compliment for me 😳 as a writer yourself you know how it feels to receive such feedback, I can only say thank you for the feeling reading this gives me 😳

I am not sure what touched me more; the description of Ishita's reaction to Subbu OR Raman's realisation about her pain. I am looking forward to more of both in the next part.

Raman as per me is a barrel of contradictions -he is quite hot tempered too , but it doesnt meanhe does nt have any sensitivity, this was my attempt to get that across, and Ishita... I find a quiet strength in her hence somehow I could clearly see this scene in my head - her silence and him understanding it so very well on a level thats yet undefined between them 😳

If I haven't said this before, thanks for adding some depth to Ishita's character and bringing out her past. I will close my eyes and imagine your story happened on the show too. It'll make it easier for me to relate to her :)

Thank you once again😳 the way Divyanka plays Ishu with such dignity I cant wait for Subu to come back, since she is clearly not over the hurt of what he did to her even if she is over him, and I want Raman to see that. These two people with their two exes will show two extreme polar reactions I think - one has a very fiery relationship with his ex... the other has one where things are thawed .. its fire and ice here - each is a force to reckon and can destroy in its own way.

Again, terribly short of time, hence can't elaborate more. so sorry... I couldn't NOT comment immediately after reading it, so I edited my comment now.

Here's one for you...

"A man's face is his autobiography. A woman's face is her work of fiction." - Oscar Wilde

thank you for the quote Lucky, I forgot to write this on your last OS but you have a penchant for Wilde too it seems 😛 ... damn I cant speak enough of the connection.. I LOVE the man' works and am trying to read more of them, but alas time 😳

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

aani...best update till nw of this ss...!! its now i got the intention of ur SS.. this update made it clear...ur ss n ur ss title..!! i want show wala Raman also to hv exact realization abt Ishu's pain coz of her past..!!

Originally posted by: Bruce_L

This is what I've been looking(say, longing) for to happen in the show
But writers still stuck with Raman's ex, Sona, Sheila, etc. Dont know when they've planned to show Raman feeling the pain of Ishu !
Thank you Aani for bringing in the real face of Ishu hidden behind that mask in front of her husband Raman
Eagerly waiting for the last part to unfold ...

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

Aani i was waiting for this chapter since i read ur note where u stated the concept...

my GOD Aani and i can proudly say my fav part 👏👏👏

something i was craving to read and m dying to see in show...

this is what i want...

seriously i don't have words to appreciate ur talent... take a standing ovation from me *imagine m standing now 😉😳"

Hey Meet thank you so much for so much praise *bows back* 😳 I am so delighted to know you loved this chapter so much

very emotional and beautifully written... loved it how he felt her pain widout her saying a single word... hats off to u for this idea 👏👏👏

😳 silence can speak louder than most words only one has to be able to hear and decipher it 😳

i never bothered much abt Subbu's entry in show as every one wants it as jealousy track for Raman... something m just not interested...

but today i can say yes i want Subbu's entry, and this is the way i want...

to show Ishita is broken too... if not more but equally as Raman...

we have seen bitter past of Raman but Ishita we have yet to see her feelings...

Ishita can feel his pain... i remember after suicide drama.. when Ishu came to know, she said yeh Raman ke sath theek nahi ho raha, he don't deserve this...

wanna see same for Ishita too...

I am someone who wants Subu back a lot 😆 and the reason is NOT jealousy track, for me like Shagun is to Raman, Subu is to Ishita... he is her past - someone who has helped made Ishita who she is today, even with his betrayal - without Shagun, Raman wouldnt be the man he is today nor would we have his story.. without Subu Ishita' story cant be told too. He isnt her present nor future - IshRa are endgame we all know that, but he is her past! And for the present and future to hold up, there has to be a past 😳

i don't know if m right or not, but it will be grt if before confession we will get to see this...

Raman have seen Ishita's caring side, her politeness and love for all... now time to know what Ishita feels... how her past effect her but still she manages to wear the mask...

Hmm I dont know about the confession scenario, but I have faith in the writers they will have him back once they think NOW is the time, but yes he needs to be back one day so that Raman understands Ishita better, for him to get that he hasnt been the only one wronged - like you mentioned earlier Ishita understood what is happening with him isnt fair, he should realize that life hasnt been fair with Ishita either 😳

Aani thank u sooo much for such an update which can please a reader to that extent...

love u for this🤗

🤗 thank you for this sweet feedback Meet it made me so happy 😃