At a Crossroad - a Raman based OS. - Page 4

Originally posted by: .ProperPatola.

Cheers! :D

Sure...My Name is Arsh 😊

Originally posted by: simples28

You write so beautifully dear😃..I actually could feel each and every emotion there😊..Thank you so much for this lovely OS🤗..Totally loved it❤️..And about the hug in your story😳..Raman hugging Ishu when he knows she is safe⭐️⭐️..I really secretly wish that happens😉😃

Originally posted by: Live-life

Sorry for the late comment! 😳.

Hey no problem, and you are not late I posted this today itself 😳

This is a great OS yaar! I mean seriously I think you have out done yourself with this kind of writing. I mean I can't stop reading it. My eyes were glued to the screen. And I found your OS just on the right time. Towards the end of the day when I was packing up in art class and I finished quickly so I was like why not read your OS. Need a break anyway! 😆 And yet you have done it again! I am blown! 😉

Aww thanks so much, ☺️ I am so glad I could help you unwind and that the OS could connect with you so very much.

You did a fantabulously Fantasticaljob on describing Raman's inner feelings and fear. The fear of losing someone close to him. I mean c'mon I think after this track airs we will all know that Raman cares for Ishita. He just doesn't show it that much but he does! Watching that car burn must have frozen him and his heart cause finding out that the moth of your child, the woman you used to taunt, and fight with, the woman you used to call Jhansi ki Rani is just gone. Like that in a jiffy. I mean it's beyond a shocker. For a minute I was scared too when I read that Ishita's car burns! It sent goosebumps down my spine! And he says he doesn't Love her! I mean seriously.

Exactly, she is like this force of nature he has encountered 😆 and he may call her his Jaani Dushman, but she is his wife, the mother of his child. And while they have been only recently married he has been fighting with her for months now, so its kind a habit that he has developed and suddenly to realize that this person who has become a part of your life, an integral and vital addition to your life can be gone just like that and the last thing you did was be annoyed at them, not thank the person for doing something that helped you, did you good can be crushing.

But I loved the way his father consoled him and made him understand what he is going through. Maybe not in direct words but you learn best from experience. They way he said the part about realizing the value of his wife just made me think about Raman and Ishita! They are like nadi ke dwo kin are jo saath to chalet hai but kabhi milte nahi!

But these two shores will meet one day! I assure you that!

Maybe it's not love yet!

but this relationship is growing into something really beautiful. Yes I agree they have fights and call each other weird crazy names. But larne se pyaar badta hai na 😉😛

That was the intention of making Bhallaji speak - making Raman want to draw parallels with his parents and him and Ishita. Realizing he is standing at exactly the same place his dad did all those years ago and come to the same conclusion - that he needs Ishita, he may not want to accept it immediately but that is the truth and denial cannot change that. 😳

I also loved the part where he described his daughter's love for him. I mean he is right! For Ruhi you don't even need to make an effort. Bas hast kohl ke khade ho jai and she comes running into your arms and kisses you saying love you papa! She is my little rockstar! Love her!

I know right! Ruhi is such an angel, and Raman has neglected her for so long, ran away from the sight of her at times because he remembered Shagun. But now, now that he had that scare that she may not be his and that he could lose her - he realized her worth, and Ishita played a role in that with the DNA test results. With the acceptance of Ruhi' parentage also came the love of a father that was lost somewhere - and now that he knows what a joy it is to have his daughter' love. it is priceless to him. That is what made the Raman Bhalla of now, today do all those things from making dosas to gift electric toothbrushes 😆 - he cannot stay away from Ruhi anymore. And to even dream of his little girl losing the only mother who loved her truly - it would crush her and that kills a part of him.😳

ANd Toshiji is right. Ab Raman akele nahi hai kyunki koi hai jo usski fikr karta hai and she has done what no one could for the past years. She has started breaking the walls he has built around himself!

And that's the first step towards love!

😳

That was Bhallaji 😳 and yep he has Ishita now, he may not notice it but she is invading his fort and capturing it by bringing down the walls brick by brick 😳

Awesomely Fantabulous update I loved each and every bit of it!

You have really outdone yourself

This is beyond perfect...Love you for posting such a great peace of writing. I think it is save to say this that you inspire me as a writer and as a friend 🤗hehe!

Keep writing like this!

Thanks for the pm

Love you

❤️

☺️☺️ thank you so much it is so sweet of you to say that I inspire you , and its a pleasure for me to be your friend too. Btw may I please know your name I keep forgetting to ask you 😳

Love 🤗

Aani

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

This is an amazing beautiful and a heart touching OS👏👏👏