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.ProperPatola

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow! This was amazing. truly indepth of Raman's character. And I doubt we may see this kind of intensity about Raman's psych and feelings as it is in your writing in the show...Truly beautiful!

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: lourel24
👏 good job

thanks Lourel 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: charmee_sammy
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Charms 🤗🤗🤗

I am so happy to see you here, you watch YHM ? 😛

I hope you do edit this comment or else 😈😆

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: jojo1986
Loved it👏

thanks Jojo 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia
lovely yaar :)

thanks Swati 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus
Aani, I loved the story. I haven't read the spoilers but I just hope next week happens your way.
Unable to love, incapable of hate - he is lost about the nature of their relationship.
"But she already has Toshiji; she managed to do something we haven't seen Raman do in years - worry about someone. Care for someone. He has let her in; he just doesn't know it yet."
"Then when will he?"
"When it is too late to do anything but accept there is no keeping her out."
These are my favouriate lines. I don't know how you manage to come up with such lines. Hats off, my girl!👏

Hey Sneha thanks so much for the quote and especially liking the lines from the convo between Bhalla Sr and Toshiji 😳 - that bit is actually a favorite of mine too 😳 after the painting bit. 😳

And somehow all the bits you mentioned - they were the hardest to get right and the most fun to come up with too 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: .ProperPatola.
Wow! This was amazing. truly indepth of Raman's character. And I doubt we may see this kind of intensity about Raman's psych and feelings as it is in your writing in the show...Truly beautiful!

Hey there thanks so much for your comment, its always a pleasure to read your feedback too, may I please know your name 😳

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.ProperPatola

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Hey there thanks so much for your comment, its always a pleasure to read your feedback too, may I please know your name 😳

Cheers! :D

Sure...My Name is Arsh 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

You write so beautifully dear😃..I actually could feel each and every emotion there😊..Thank you so much for this lovely OS🤗..Totally loved it❤️..And about the hug in your story😳..Raman hugging Ishu when he knows she is safe⭐️⭐️..I really secretly wish that happens😉😃

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Sorry for the late comment! 😳

This is a great OS yaar! I mean seriously I think you have out done yourself with this kind of writing. I mean I can't stop reading it. My eyes were glued to the screen. And I found your OS just on the right time. Towards the end of the day when I was packing up in art class and I finished quickly so I was like why not read your OS. Need a break anyway! 😆 And yet you have done it again! I am blown! 😉

You did a fantabulously Fantasticaljob on describing Raman's inner feelings and fear. The fear of losing someone close to him. I mean c'mon I think after this track airs we will all know that Raman cares for Ishita. He just doesn't show it that much but he does! Watching that car burn must have frozen him and his heart cause finding out that the moth of your child, the woman you used to taunt, and fight with, the woman you used to call Jhansi ki Rani is just gone. Like that in a jiffy. I mean it's beyond a shocker. For a minute I was scared too when I read that Ishita's car burns! It sent goosebumps down my spine! And he says he doesn't Love her! I mean seriously.

But I loved the way his father consoled him and made him understand what he is going through. Maybe not in direct words but you learn best from experience. They way he said the part about realizing the value of his wife just made me think about Raman and Ishita! They are like nadi ke dwo kin are jo saath to chalet hai but kabhi milte nahi!

But these two shores will meet one day! I assure you that!

Maybe it's not love yet!

but this relationship is growing into something really beautiful. Yes I agree they have fights and call each other weird crazy names. But larne se pyaar badta hai na 😉😛

I also loved the part where he described his daughter's love for him. I mean he is right! For Ruhi you don't even need to make an effort. Bas hast kohl ke khade ho jai and she comes running into your arms and kisses you saying love you papa! She is my little rockstar! Love her!

ANd Toshiji is right. Ab Raman akele nahi hai kyunki koi hai jo usski fikr karta hai and she has done what no one could for the past years. She has started breaking the walls he has built around himself!

And that's the first step towards love!

😳

Awesomely Fantabulous update I loved each and every bit of it!

You have really outdone yourself

This is beyond perfect...Love you for posting such a great peace of writing. I think it is save to say this that you inspire me as a writer and as a friend 🤗hehe!

Keep writing like this!

Thanks for the pm

Love you

❤️

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