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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
awww i jst had happy tears in my eyes by the time this os ended..!! this ws EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL,TOUCHING and AGAIN keeping the characters traits SAME as of show.!!

omg i soo soo wish to show waale RKB-Bhalla ji hvin heart to heart talk once(be it ny time)..But tht must be to HELP HIM to decrease his confusion or remove his confusion of wht he feel for Ishita..!!

Aani...u r truly AWESOME...Every story u write it just touch ur heart..!!

THANK YOU for this..🤗🤗

Aww thank you Nikki 🤗🤗🤗

I am so delighted that this OS could touch your heart so much that it moved you to tears ☺️

And I honestly like Mr.Bhalla a lot more than his wife 😆 so I would love a father son scene along the lines too, and I felt it would be more apt for a father to talk to his son here - man to man and not have Toshiji be there for Raman - I know as a mom she loves him but this bit needed a father' touch 😳

and thanks so much again Nikki, awesome I don't know about that I just try my best 😳

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: _Deepika_
Beautifully written dear..i loved the father - son convo..so touching

thank you Deepika 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shalu79
Superb👏. was waiting for ur Os eagerly. was happy to see u ve posted one. As expected it was very heart touching n very well written. Just love ur writing. Thanks 4 posting it on Sunday as i was missing YHM.

Hey thanks so much Shalu, like I had said if there is inspiration there will be something from my end 😊 and thanks to the spoilers this scenario came to me 😳

Happy to help you miss YHM a little less on a Sunday 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: peric
awesome

thanks Peric 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Npadz
Wonderfully written! I loved Raman and Bhallaji's conversation. Keep up the great work 😊

thank you so much Neeharika 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: uamaz
Awesome as always

thanks Uamaz 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ashni0905
your stories are a sheer pleasure to read for the reasons 1. you get into the psyche of characters so well. 2. the story lines are amazing 3. your writing skills, they just blow me out. wonderful stuff!

Hey ashni thanks a lot for your sweet comment.

I am happy to know you like my work so much. 😊

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13MEGHA05

@13MEGHA05

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

superb...👍🏼

well done and beautifully written...👏

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: 13MEGHA05
superb...👍🏼
well done and beautifully written...👏

Thank you Megha 😊

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Aani, I loved the story. I haven't read the spoilers but I just hope next week happens your way.

Unable to love, incapable of hate - he is lost about the nature of their relationship.

"But she already has Toshiji; she managed to do something we haven't seen Raman do in years - worry about someone. Care for someone. He has let her in; he just doesn't know it yet."

"Then when will he?"

"When it is too late to do anything but accept there is no keeping her out."

These are my favouriate lines. I don't know how you manage to come up with such lines. Hats off, my girl!👏