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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww alex ryan r sho cute i luv em 😳

i relly relly lyk alex here 😆
oh n sibling n best frnd-very bad in some cases but i lyk it here 😆 n in harry ginnys case 😳

bt alex n ryan r still d cutest 😳

wanno c wht alex has to say to ac2li dating kevin to make rhea jlus 😆😆 shell kill him 🤣

after all she lubs ryan..ryan alex r sho cute 😳

overall~gr8 chappie!!

luv
niyu 😳

ps: did i mention jst hw cute alex n ryan r? 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Hmmmm...
I didnt get a heads up?
But oh well..
The chapter made up for it!!
Let me start off by saying...
AHHH loved it!
Alex and Ryan are so cute..
Fighting all the time!!!
And Alex is soo ganna kill Kevin!
I cant wait, i cant wait, i cant wait..
Please, please continue soon yaar!!!
😃

-Mahak-

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: coolniyu

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww alex ryan r sho cute i luv em 😳

i relly relly lyk alex here 😆

Thankie...its thanks to u my charecs r cute...

oh n sibling n best frnd-very bad in some cases but i lyk it here 😆 n in harry ginnys case 😳

NIYATHI😡 i am so gonna stop telling u stuff bout my story if ur gonnaleak it out!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and u wer supposed to be the secret keeper in our frendship [-( ... so now im changing the plot so lets c if Hilly ends up with David or someone else...


bt alex n ryan r still d cutest 😳


thankie... i lyk em the best too...

wanno c wht alex has to say to ac2li dating kevin to make rhea jlus 😆😆 shell kill him 🤣

Of course shes gonna yell... she wants to date scott but ten shes gotta act for rhea... Sam's plate throwing idea will come inuse today...i really like it that shes throwing something at himso maybe ill takeadvantage of Sam's absence and steal her idea >:)

after all she lubs ryan..ryan alex r sho cute 😳
overall~gr8 chappie!!

thankie 😳

luv
niyu 😳

ps: did i mention jst hw cute alex n ryan r? 😳

😛luvya loads bby

Ysh

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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Mini786

Hmmmm...
I didnt get a heads up?

u dint gimme for ur story either... a small IM would have made me ur first reviewer [-( i am stillmad at u for tht [-(


But oh well..
The chapter made up for it!!

awwww 😳

Let me start off by saying...
AHHH loved it!
Alex and Ryan are so cute..
Fighting all the time!!!
And Alex is soo ganna kill Kevin!
I cant wait, i cant wait, i cant wait..
Please, please continue soon yaar!!!
😃

-Mahak-

Of course i'llcontinue yaar bcos im just as much in luv with this stry as u r... and lets see what i have in store for Hilly after the blabbermouth niyu spoilt the slow romance [-( but yea i think i have an altenative...

will update soon only if u do tanu.... 😛

hey why dont u post something here???

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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
Mahak....did u start a story??????? CONFUSED!!!!

Ysh...I sooo liked the dialogue between Kevin and Alex!!! Too cute for words!!!

And the part where it goes...
"How cute! My best friend and my brother! So not gross!" she said sarcastically. Hilly looked away awkwardly and walked to the car after muttering a quick goodbye to David. Once Hilly's back was turned David raised his eyebrows as if to say that these things happen. Alex rolled her eyes and waved a goodbye before getting into the car.

It would be pretty cute if they ended up together despite umm..Niyu's prophetic words!! Harry+Ginny kyaaa.....Bro+best friend lolz it's pretty amusing cos I have this real life experience!!! One of my cousins friend's sister had a crush on my cousin and whenever we went there she'd rush into her room and keep the door locked untile we went!!!

I think I really like Alex!! She's a rebel and someone I can connect to!!

Plate throwing...not bad...but Sam'll murder you when she returns!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
i just read the whole thing, ysh... & its aweeeeeeeeeeesome 😳 😳 😳
it really, totally, completely rocks!!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
i'd give it 5 stars on 5 if i had to review it.... it is so cute..... 👍🏼
i absolutely love it... & i really hope u continue it asap 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
ada pavi!! whr did i predict?? u only made them flirt! i thot it was obvious 🤣
okok i think ill keep my *prophetic* comments to myself 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: PIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mahak....did u start a story??????? No yaar! Not yet!! 😉

But Ideas are forming in my head whenever i enter this section...:D, I'll start it soon..

CONFUSED!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Blackmailer!!!

will update soon only if u do tanu.... 😛

-Arre yaar that is black mail! I wont be able to continue this weekend..well maybe, because i have to read Things fall apart, by monday for skwel....and then i have exams next next week..so yea..I mite continue tom..if i finish the book!

hey why dont u post something here???

-Yea im thinking about it...well a plot is forming in my head..but as i said im pretty packed, but if i cant help it, it will b up:D


:D
-Mahak-
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: umrao_jaan

Mahak....did u start a story??????? CONFUSED!!!!
Na she didnt... i am bugging her to... help me???? 😉
Ysh...I sooo liked the dialogue between Kevin and Alex!!! Too cute for words!!!
Thank you 😳
And the part where it goes...
"How cute! My best friend and my brother! So not gross!" she said sarcastically. Hilly looked away awkwardly and walked to the car after muttering a quick goodbye to David. Once Hilly's back was turned David raised his eyebrows as if to say that these things happen. Alex rolled her eyes and waved a goodbye before getting into the car.

It would be pretty cute if they ended up together despite umm..Niyu's prophetic words!! Harry+Ginny kyaaa.....i know they r pretty cute... 😳Bro+best friend lolz it's pretty amusing cos I have this real life experience!!! One of my cousins friend's sister had a crush on my cousin and whenever we went there she'd rush into her room and keep the door locked untile we went!!!
Awwww how cute... i think im reconsidering it in spite of niyu's *ahem* slip... 😛
I think I really like Alex!! She's a rebel and someone I can connect to!!
I bet u can nuts 😛
Plate throwing...not bad...but Sam'll murder you when she returns!!!

I am taking advantage of her absence andposting before she comes back.. so i ahd better hurry and write it... 😛

Thankooo for reviewing nutzie 🤗😳🤗

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