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~Sirius*Ysh~ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

PART 4

Alex and Kevin were playing tennis in the evening at school.

"Hey Al, did I mention that Rhea might be starting to think of me as more than a friend?" he started casually as he served.

"Really?" asked Alex, smiling as she hit the ball back.

"Yea… I mean I think I kind of made her a little jealous…"

"What did you say?" asked Alex as she leaned low to hit his ball back.

"Good one!" he said commenting on her serve, "Uhm… maybe I told her that we were dating…"

Alex did not make any attempt to hit the ball when it reached her side of the net. Kevin grinned at her sheepishly.

"Alex… come on! You have got to help me out here… you're the only person I can rely on!" he cocked his head and gave her a puppy dog look. Alex glared at him for a minute. And then she bent down and started picking up the tennis balls lying down. She then looked back at him.

"Kev-in Tay-lor!" she yelled, punctuating every syllable by throwing a ball at him. He ducked and even hit back a couple of balls. "You are such a…" and she started throwing more balls at him. And when she had no more balls left to throw she looked at him and said, "The things I do for you…"

"So that's a yes?" he asked, the corners of his mouth hinting a smile.

"If you want to see it that way…" she muttered.

"Thank you thank you!" he said rushing over to hug her.

"So now you are happy… what do I tell Scott?" she asked once he returned to his side of the net and served a ball to her.

"Tell me what?"

Alex and Kevin turned to see Scott standing at the entrance of the tennis court. He had obviously finished his football practice and had come over to see her. Alex felt a smile creep across her face at the way he was looking at her.

"Tell me what?" he repeated, looking at Alex inquisitively.

"Uhmm… It's…" she stammered.

"Actually Alex and I are acting as girlfriend and boyfriend for some reason…" started Kevin, rushing to explain.

"Rhea?" Kevin turned slightly pink and answered, "Yea… and she was, well, worried that you wouldn't…"

"Understand?"

"Yea…" nodded Kevin grinning.

"That's fine… I understand!" he said walking over to Alex. Alex started to blush. It was the first time any guy had ever liked her and it felt real good. He put an arm around her waist and pulled her closer. He looked at her intently and she blushed when he fingered her numerous earrings, which were lined all over the edge of her ear.

"Say something?" he said smirking at her.

"I dunno what to say…" she said smiling nervously. She was so not used to these things…

"Ok, I'll say it for you…" and with that Scott bent down to kiss her lightly on the lips. She smiled widely as he pulled back.

"Well said!" she said and both of them started laughing. Kevin looked on from the other side of the net, eyebrows way up. Alex was not the lovey-dovey type at all and here she was romancing with Scott Truscott right where a load of people could see her. He had an irritation somewhere but he wasn't sure if it was because he was jealous, surprised or just plain protective. He decided to go with the last option because that made more sense… he was interrupted from his thoughts by Ryan.

"Hey Kev! Still at practice?" Clearly he hadn't noticed Alex.

"It's getting a little delayed thanks to your team!" replied Kevin jerking his thumb to where Scott and Alex were still whispering to each other.

"Yea I – Wait a minute! Is that Scott and ALEX????????"

"Yea…" he said rolling his eyes, "I never ever thought Alex would do this… I guess she really is recovering from her tragedy!"

"I don't understand this man… how can Scottbe attracted to Alex? I mean they are so total opposites!" said Ryan unable to tear his eyes away from the couple.

"It beats me! But the great news is he is ok with Alex and me posing for the sake of Rhea! Ryan?"

"Ye, yea… that's great…" said Ryan distractedly. He walked over to the two of them talking and coughed loudly. They broke apart guiltily. Scott was smirking embarrassedly and Alex was looking everywhere but at Ryan. "The five minute break was for all of us to cool off… not for socializing…" he said looking at Scott. Scott grinned and said –

"Aw man! You understand don't you?" Ryan opened his mouth to say something but then thought the better of it. So he broke into a grin too and replied, "Of course I do!" and then the two of them slapped each other's backs and Scott gave Alex a quick peck on the cheek and walked away. Ryan turned back to Alex after he walked away with a look of utter confusion in his face.

"Don't!" she said positioning herself on the court to serve, "Don't ask me anything! I have no idea what just happened and I don't want to spoil it by talking about it with you!" Ryan looked at her for a moment and then walked away. Alex was surprised at his lack of comeback but her mind was too full to bother about Ryan. She had better, and more handsome, things to think about…

*~*

"Hey Hilly… do you really think Alex and Kevin are dating?" asked Rhea slowly in the course of her telephone conversation with Hilly that evening.

"I don't know… I guess so…" said Hilly smirking at the other end. Ryan had filled her in on the details and she had decided to play along.

"Oh." Silence on the other end.

"Well Kevin really surprised me with that Alex thing…" continued Hilly, filling the silence. Usually it was Rhea who would take care of all that but somehow this time it seemed to be Hilly who was given the job.

"Yea well… I thought he liked…" and Rhea stopped talking.

"Liked who?" prompted Hilly, holding her breath.

"Nothing…" said Rhea sighing. Hilly was almost sure Rhea was going to say that Kevin liked her.

"Come on Rhea! I'm your best friend!" said Hilly, prompting Rhea to speak up.

"Nothing… hey did you know I am going to run for the vice president elections this year…" and Rhea was on her roll again. Hilly knew that it would be forever till she got Rhea back on the subject. For a girl who was so talkative Rhea was excessively closed when it came to her feelings. This was the reason Kevin wanted to make sure Rhea completely liked him before he even talked to her about going out. Hilly sighed on the other end hoping the mix up got over soon.

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hope you all like this chapter!
i am going on a holioday this evening so i hope that by the time i retuurn i will have a load of reviews!!!!!
luvya all 🤗

-Ysh 🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
its amazing as usual 😳
kevin is sho shweet 😆 makes a nice bro 2 alex 😛😛😛
scott seems nice too 😕 bt i lyk ryan better 😳
u kno,the whole hot-pigheaded-guys-who-dont-recognise-love-when-it-stares-de m-in-the-face....esp when it concerns hot-pigheaded-girls-who-dont-recognise-it-themselves..wht wit a load of jlusy thrown in..tht totally endears dem to me 😳
cont soon 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
i love kevin, no, i love ryan, no i love kevin.... oh who cares.... i love them both 😳 😳 😳
ysh.... i hv no words.... u write so well that its impossible to say anything 😊
& now, im warning u, u better update asap... nahi to u'll be dead in no time 😆 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Newbie Nagger reporting for a report...
Actaully no i cant report..
Im at skewl..*Smiles sheepishly* I broke into the system, actually no i didnt i found a site..but anyway
Well i wanted to see if u continued
and you did..
But now i have no time..
the bell is about to ring!
So I will Review rite when i get home!!
:D

-Newbie Nagger!-

*Edit*

Ysh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I thought that part was short!
I wanna read more!!!
But still I liked this part..
And I love Ryan!!!!
Ryan and Alex..
Awwwww...
Kevin and Rhea..
Another Awwww...
Scott and Alex...
Well.....lets stick with ryan and alex?
But an awsome part yaar!
Please cotinue soon!
:D

-Mahak-


Edited by Mini786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Ysh..I think I have a crush on Kevin! Shriya has competition!!!!

Totally great chapter! I loved the chemistry in the kiss!!! Is that the right way of putting it in lolz? I'm looking forwards for what is to come!!! Seems like there'll be even more confusion!!!

xxxxxx

Nutzie 😉
~Sirius*Ysh~ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: shriyaroxxx

i love kevin, no, i love ryan, no i love kevin.... oh who cares.... i love them both 😳 😳 😳

how sweet 😳 me likie Ryan better... but thats cos i have writen the next 3 chapters... 😆
ysh.... i hv no words.... u write so well that its impossible to say anything 😊
& now, im warning u, u better update asap... nahi to u'll be dead in no time 😆 😉

ill keep that in mind 😆 and thankie 😳😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#67

[Quote=Newbie Nagger]
Newbie Nagger reporting for a report...
Attention!
Actaully no i cant report..
Im at skewl..*Smiles sheepishly* I broke into the system, bad girl... u should be studiying [-( 😆 actually no i didnt i found a site..but anyway
u seem confused... 😆 but i guess thats wht scul dus to u...
Well i wanted to see if u continued
and you did..
But now i have no time..
the bell is about to ring!
bummer :(
So I will Review rite when i get home!!

Okay 😳
:D
:P
-Newbie Nagger!-

-Head Nagger!-
*Edit*

Ysh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I thought that part was short!
u did??? well i guess but i have a word limit of 1500 per part.. and yea i did cut that chapter short....
I wanna read more!!!
But still I liked this part..
And I love Ryan!!!!
me too 😳 😳 😳
Ryan and Alex..
Awwwww...
Kevin and Rhea..
Another Awwww...
Scott and Alex...
Well.....lets stick with ryan and alex?
thank you! if u said awwww for this i dont know what i would have done with you... 😛
But an awsome part yaar!
Thankie 😳
Please cotinue soon!
Shureeeeeeeeeeee
:D
:P
-Mahak-

-Ysh-
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Edited by ~Sirius*Ysh~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
Hey yshuuuuuuu...salut!!!

I came on to Tales Corner(after niyu explained to me what it is n how to find it😆😆😆) n I read ur fic all today It's amazing👏👏👏

I love Ryan/Alex😳😳😳 (no surprise there😆😆 as I love love/hate..I think I told u that😆😆😆)

Can't wait to see what happens next with Scott n Sharon(hey even their current BF/GF have the same initial "S")😉

I was initially very confused with all the characters but after reading through all....I like the character of Alexis very much😳 Her story seems the most interesting.
I like Rhea too...she luks cute..n I love Kevin..the guy in d pic u hv used is so cute!

One more thingy....why does Ryan's elder sis Cathy n Hilary's mom Lynda looks similar???😕

Hilly is a nice nickname tho😆😆😆 I wonder she doesen't protest against Ryan though for that name!😆😆😆

Now that u hv come back...update fasttt!!!😳


Originally posted by: coolniyu

its amazing as usual 😳
kevin is sho shweet 😆 makes a nice bro 2 alex 😛😛😛
scott seems nice too 😕 bt i lyk ryan better 😳
u kno,the whole hot-pigheaded-guys-who-dont-recognise-love-when-it-stares-de m-in-the-face....esp when it concerns hot-pigheaded-girls-who-dont-recognise-it-themselves..wht wit a load of jlusy thrown in..tht totally endears dem to me 😳
cont soon 😆



I agree with niyuuu...nice description of Ryan/Alexis, Ashi-Yuvi, Lily/James...etc etc😆😆😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69

😲 ysh... u've written the nxt three chapters & still haven't posted them? u want me to kill u or sumthing... this is not gonna wrk, alright😒😒

post d next part jaldi.... i have told u, i have warned u... m not d sorting hat, but let the writing now begin😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
Shriya is rite!
You've written the next 3 chapters, and you haven't posted? 😲
Get ready for a lonnnng PM young lady!!
😃

-Newbie-Nagger-who-is-about-to-send-Ysh-a-long-PM-
😆

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