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Dream Weavers

Posted: 4 months ago
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Silence as a pregnant pause in life

Silence in its pregnant state

Ready to deliver a feeling!

However, since long in labour

The space and time are

Eagerly awaiting the moment!

What it's going to deliver?

How it smiles and grows!

There it is, too eager to see the world

With the vivid hues of love!

Suddenly, the chasm of tranquillity emerged

To reveal a mountain of sensations!

Passion and silence danced joyfully

As life flourished everywhere!

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Posted: 4 months ago
#2

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Silence as a pregnant pause in life

Silence in its pregnant state

Ready to deliver a feeling!

However, since long in labour

The space and time are

Eagerly awaiting the moment!

What it's going to deliver?

How it smiles and grows!

There it is, too eager to see the world

With the vivid hues of love!

Suddenly, the chasm of tranquillity emerged

To reveal a mountain of sensations!

Passion and silence danced joyfully

As life flourished everywhere!

Wow Madhu This Is A Lovely Poem

Thanks For Sharing

smiley31

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 4 months ago
#3

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Wow Madhu This Is A Lovely Poem

Thanks For Sharing

smiley31

Thank you Nishita for liking this simple poem. smiley31
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Posted: 4 months ago
#4

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Thank you Nishita for liking this simple poem. smiley31

Your Most Welcome Madhu

Anything You Like Write I Will Like It

smiley31

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Posted: 4 months ago
#5

How prolific and empathetic! Adore this poem, resonates with all of us, the situations n sentiments. What I loved best was it ends with hope, simply wonderful, Madi!! Keep giving us more such gems!! ❤️ smiley20

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Posted: 4 months ago
#6

Wow! Such an amazing & deep poem about silence.

Loved it, I am glad it’s not negative & ends on a positive note.

Thanks for sharing.

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 4 months ago
#7

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Silence as a pregnant pause in life

Silence in its pregnant state

Ready to deliver a feeling!

However, since long in labour

The space and time are

Eagerly awaiting the moment!

What it's going to deliver?

How it smiles and grows!

There it is, too eager to see the world

With the vivid hues of love!

Suddenly, the chasm of tranquillity emerged

To reveal a mountain of sensations!

Passion and silence danced joyfully

As life flourished everywhere!

Beautiful poem..

wow loved the comparison smiley32

Thanks for tagging and sharing. smiley1

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Posted: 4 months ago
#8

What a beautiful poem about silence and the birth of feelings smiley32. Loved it!

Thanks for tagging and sharing.

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 4 months ago
#9

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Silence as a pregnant pause in life

Silence in its pregnant state

Ready to deliver a feeling!

However, since long in labour

The space and time are

Eagerly awaiting the moment!

What it's going to deliver?

How it smiles and grows!

There it is, too eager to see the world

With the vivid hues of love!

Suddenly, the chasm of tranquillity emerged

To reveal a mountain of sensations!

Passion and silence danced joyfully

As life flourished everywhere!

The imagery of silence being in labour and then delivering emotions smiley42

Loved how passion and silence danced together

Beautifully written 👏

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 4 months ago
#10

Omg .....This is too good .....so beautiful and deep..... Loved it .....And the choice of words are so positive.....

Thanks a lot for sharing dear smiley31

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