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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is so beautiful! Lovely expressions and a etherealty all throughout! <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fantastic poem Ramya ⭐️
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Poetess ❤️
I love it! I told you, you are born to write poetry, and I stick by that.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow, amazing poetry, Ramya! 👏 I don't know how you do it, but your rhyming is so perfect and has just the right rhythm. This was truly a joy to read.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A pragmatic approach towards life which set positivity in the first sentence itself, great!😊

Feeling like a free bird to fly in the sky -- shows that the eagerness to reach the far-off lands in search of love, glee, happiness whatever-- indicating an unconditional love which touched the heart, infusing new jollity into the life!

Traversing from a night's retreat into the vast canvas of the ever-changing skyscape-- have to say your imagery is at it's best Ramya!👏

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This is so beautiful! Lovely expressions and a etherealty all throughout! <3

Thank you, Pro! <3

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic poem Ramya ⭐️




Thank you, guys! Your support keeps me going. 😳


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for dropping by :)

Originally posted by: Shrinika13

Poetess ❤️

I love it! I told you, you are born to write poetry, and I stick by that.

Aadhuu🤗 Thank you so much, means a lot!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

Wow, amazing poetry, Ramya! 👏 I don't know how you do it, but your rhyming is so perfect and has just the right rhythm. This was truly a joy to read.

Thank you, di! ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

A pragmatic approach towards life which set positivity in the first sentence itself, great!😊

Feeling like a free bird to fly in the sky -- shows that the eagerness to reach the far-off lands in search of love, glee, happiness whatever-- indicating an unconditional love which touched the heart, infusing new jollity into the life!

Traversing from a night's retreat into the vast canvas of the ever-changing skyscape-- have to say your imagery is at it's best Ramya!👏

I don't think I deserve this, as usual. However, I'm really grateful!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I dedicate this to Janu di as she has been trying to make me write something like this.😆 The poem describes how draupadi feels about each of her five husbands.

Love Of Eternal

His face in harmony with the rest of the earth, he was born to rule,
The wielder of enormous wisdom, never once lost his cool,
With righteousness evident in his eyes,
Behold the one whose justice stands unmatched and the subjects' joyful cries.

Mightier than the mightiest with a strength unparalleled,
The second Pandava that is seldom appalled,
And beyond those metallic muscles is a gentle heart,
A childish contentment in that on his loved ones' cart.

Then there is the dark skinned one,
Storming into the field and the war is as good as won,
Deep eyes that could get my mind derailed,
And a skill with the bow that never failed.

Incredibly handsome is his being,
He whose twin's thoughts are foreseeing,
Together the two invincible and unafraid,
And in my bosom their charms stayed.

Their eyes make forbidden sights,
Capable of worsening my soul's plight,
For they make me blush and all hopes of retrieval are lost,
As I am in love with each one as the sun shines through the frost.

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Edited by .moonglade. - 7 years ago

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