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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Ramsy 👏👏

This is DOWNRIGHT beautiful! I love how the emotions flow in the poem, and the deep hurt of the one who has been cheated can be felt. Much louwe to you, for this lovely poem <3

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Raammyy ResWa 😳

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

This was so uplifting! Thank you so much for posting it here Ramyadi! <3

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Lovelyy poem❤️

amazingly written👏

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1023403

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Amazing poem Di! So much feels! I can't connect to it but it's feels awesome to read such brilliant stuff 😃

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

I don't know why, but scribbles that are drenched with angst or pain or an emotion that reeks of myriad of feelings; usually hidden in one's bosom; are the ones that attracte the most. I love the idea of getting up again after a massive fall...be it real or an imagination. This one was a beautiful take of the same.

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

brilliant 👏

Taylor swift she is awesome..❤️

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

Moderator

+ 29

Dream Weavers

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Love's deceit is the theme of this poem ... you expressed it in a dulcet way with the intertwined emotions and in-depth feelings. The hurt that kills the tenderness of the heart in such tempestuous moment which allows the pain and hurt to gush out like a river, to lay down the love to die! It lets you forget what really happened and offers you a distortion of the truth! In last two lines, you chronicled the acceptance of deceit with grace! Wonderful poetic expression Ramya . I saw in this poem the rhythmic outbursts of emotion are spontaneous, unintentional and irresistible too!👏

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Sonatia
Res Res !
Uh-huh you too TayTay's fan ? Me too ! 😉
Will unres soon😳
Unres!!

Wow ! It's just awesome and a treat to read ! I love the lyrics so so much and it's my favourite poem written by you and i love the rhythm . The theme of the poem is so amazing.
The last two lines gave me
goosebumps.
I knew my life was but a dramatic bane,
But i thought it was worth living again.
I love your poems so much ! Please write more Rammy.