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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 7 years ago

#81

An innovative idea, original and creative in thinking! Always feel happy if someone says something about Draupadi.

Will read again and review! 😊

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Excellent poem Ramya👏

Draupadi's feelings about her five husbands are depicted so beautifully

I always love reading any related to Draupadi and Pandavas❤️

Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Awwie! The descriptions are so so sweet! Loved how you dealt with all five brothers effectively! <3

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Ramya..🤗

beautiful description of five pandavs.❤️

amazing..👏

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

a night retreat

superb ramya..👏

Edited by _Eternity_ - 7 years ago

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

Moderator

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Excellent word selection while describing the enigmatic love of Draupadi towards her five husbands and her emotional feelings for them! Expectations are very high Ramya ! 😊

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Shrinika13
RES! 😲

His face in harmony with the rest of the earth, he was born to rule,

The wielder of enormous wisdom, never once lost his cool,

With righteousness evident in his eyes,

Behold the one whose justice stands unmatched and the subjects' joyful cries.

I luurvvee Dharmaraja, as I am sure you are aware 😉 I love the second line, it describes his very name. Same with the 3rd. 😎

Mightier than the mightiest with a strength unparalleled,

The second Pandava that is seldom appalled,

And beyond those metallic muscles is a gentle heart,

A childish contentment in that on his loved ones' cart.

I loveee this too! ❤️ I hate how people forget him all the time. 🤔

Then there is the dark skinned one,

Storming into the field and the war is as good as won,

Deep eyes that could get my mind derailed,

And a skill with the bow that never failed.

Your Arya is so cute *cue to play Gaandiva Dhaari Arjuna*

Incredibly handsome is his being,

He whose twin's thoughts are foreseeing,

Together the two invincible and unafraid,

And in my bosom their charms stayed.

I loved this <3 The first 2 lines, tho.

Their eyes make forbidden sights,

Capable of worsening my soul's plight,

For they make me blush and all hopes of retrieval are lost,

As I am in love with each one as the sun shines through the frost.

Hey, I can totally visualise Panch like this. Adorbs she is.

There, I gave you inline and all. Ciao. 😆

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Such a sweet poem❤️

Lovedd reading it😳

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Excellent poem Ramya👏
Draupadi's feelings about her five husbands are depicted so beautifully
I always love reading any related to Draupadi and Pandavas❤️

Thank you so much!😳