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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Please write a poem on Devasena's thoughts and feelings right after her imprisonment, as she reflects on Amara's cruel death and her son's separation right out of the cradle. 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Brilliant Di! Finally caught up on BB1 & 2 😆
It's such a beautiful yet heart crushing journey!⭐️
Such a combination of awe, pain & beauty is mesmerising! <3

Flawless & amazing as always.

*speechless*

Keep it up!👏

Yours only.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
ResWa 😆
Yaar 😡
Main tereko kitni baar bataaun ke tu poetry likhne ke liye bani hai!
Thoda talent meko bhi baant de na 😳
Where do you even get your talent from?
Words hai, emotion hai, rhyme hai. Poetry finish . ❤️
Vocabulary died, so you need to lend that also.
Write more, more, more.
Muchas gracias.
Rula diya yaar. 🤔
I wanna write like you, but bhagwaan ne itni talent di nahi hai. I love this and I crave more. Kuch likh de na mere liye 😆 Write on your Sakha 😆
Edited by Shrinika13 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Fab one👏
lovedd ttt😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
That was so so beautiful! Loved it! <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Fantastic poem Ramya 👏
You have portrayed Devsena's thoughts very beautifully ❤️
Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
In an awesome way, this poem broke the boundaries of unspoken feelings of Devsena, helping the reader feel the inner emotional bonding between the Bahu and Devsena , through this poem you united the reader with the beautiful world of their love story!A well-written poem Ramya .
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Hey people! So, it certainly looks like i'm here after ages, doesn't it? I also haven't been able to reply to all of those valuable reviews but i promise to get that done as soon as possible. Till then, enjoy the newest poem.

So, i actually got kinda inspired by Taylor Swift's newest song called Gorgeous and this is perfectly in line with that because that tune was playing in my head while i was writing this, lol. Therefore you can try and listen to that song before reading if you want. This one deals with the subject of cheating and divorce in a light and hopeful way.

LIFE GOES ON


I never knew my heart was this fragile,
Running into devastation in sartorial style,
Ranting in pieces to the blasphemous goodbyes,
In her embrace and i looked at the skies.

For he ran into someone whose love was better than mine,
Freeing my love of its lustre and shine,
A blow from his crowbar and my trust wasn't fine,
Talking of separation and i gladly signed.

His was my love who was wicked and vain,
Welled up in tears leaving my white pillows stained,
I cursed at his memory and called for restraint,
Hard i did try but was sobbing in pain.

I surmised at last that hope had been faint,
Dumped pointless broods and it slowly rained,
I knew my life was but a dramatic bane,
But i thought it was worth living again.

~
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Posted: 7 years ago
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