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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Beautiful poem, Ramya! ❤️ I really love the descriptions of nature. This stanza is my favorite.

Wetting her face were light, incessant showers,

She was his heart, his benevolent bower.

Playful splashes and soothing drizzles,

The waters of the Yamuna rose and whistled.

Can you write a poem on Ram-Sita's reunion after the agni pariksha? Or even an angsty one on their last glimpse before Sita's bhumi pravesh?

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

another beautiful piece ramya... 👏

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Nani08

@Nani08

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

I like your poem.
Keep posting :)

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Wow...I typed an entire comment! And it's gone without getting posted. ...annoying!

Okay...let's get down to business shall we? What a mesmerising piece of work. I have always known that poetry becomes you. You are confident and words flow unhindered and smooth. Loved loved loveeed the poem. Thank you for your dedication. Radhey-Krishna's love is so mystical and deep. Thank you Ramji lal

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Hey Ramya, its been long time i logged into forum and by chance I got your PM , I am glad that I found this beautiful thread. All these are lovely creations. 👏 .. Kudos dear ..really magical words..and world indeed..

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Your poem has the depth and the tranquility which can be helpful in meditating and if possible attain the communion with that Radhe Krishna Divine love. Touching, sensitive, replete with heart-warming imagery, soothing, a siege on the senses, love your poem Ramya 😊!

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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

While I was searching random threads I end up here accidentally. But this is one of the best accident that ever happened. Every poem is having it's own flavour. May be I can use these beautiful lines to impress few of my friends out there 😃. Great work girl :) . I loved reading them.

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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Riya_16
Wow...I typed an entire comment! And it's gone without getting posted. ...annoying!
Okay...let's get down to business shall we? What a mesmerising piece of work. I have always known that poetry becomes you. You are confident and words flow unhindered and smooth. Loved loved loveeed the poem. Thank you for your dedication. Radhey-Krishna's love is so mystical and deep. Thank you Ramji lal

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Didu

This happens to me all the time argh . I type with flow and with my whole heart and then it disappears. This is why I copy content all the time once I type , even I miss the post I can paste the same and can repost it 😊

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Hello people! I am back with a new poem. I am not in a position to say much now but the following poem is on Amarendra Bahubali amd Devasena from Bahubali as Devasena quietly reflects on many things.
PS-Thank you all for the love and support. Will reply individually to you all soon.

In Return For Love

A robbed roof and a mother whose affection stood dismissed,
Yet oh bow to the arrow of my soul, why aren't you pissed?
To the spurt of love from the spring of your eyes,
What have i put forth in return, save hurt and cries?

Snatching your all including your candidature to the throne,
Something rightfully yours that rests in another's possession cause you are prone,
To the slightest attempt at maligning the honour of this ill-fated one,
Whom you chose to love in all the reverence that leaves me stunned.

Subjugated by destiny, i walk as you hold my hand,
Never have i seen your face rile up in expressing your inability in taking a stand,
Everything for a word, a symbol of love, a heart?
How do i silently behold your world that is falling apart?

Reassuringly you let your lips twitch into a smile,
Wordlessly stating you peerlessly care a pile,
My lord, you are the source of my indefinite pride,
I hope to repay your love as time strides.

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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Wow! Wow wow wow! ⭐️

Ramya, this is absolutely, irrevocably PERFECT.

I love your rhyme, and the adjectives you used to portray Devasena's thoughts and feelings brought tears to my eyes. 🥺 It's no surprise she feels guilty to Amara's slowly crumbling world (you put that so beautifully), and yet he never blamed her once. He was happy to sacrifice everything for her honor, and that's why he's such a perfect her. ❤️

I love this sooo much.

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