FF:Coincidences-Lead To Nothing?;Update-2 On Pg 11

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Thanks For Commenting And Sure !!😆

Before you could PM me. I already read that first chapter. I doubt if it's really your first chapter, it's too short. I crave for big chapter. So next time when you update, just make sure you write big chapter 😳 I'd love reading stories in hindi and the first chapter was promising one. I really enjoyed their hindi conversation. So keep writing more and PM me for next update. 😉

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: renu4u

Before you could PM me. I already read that first chapter. I doubt if it's really your first chapter, it's too short. I crave for big chapter. So next time when you update, just make sure you write big chapter 😳 I'd love reading stories in hindi and the first chapter was promising one. I really enjoyed their hindi conversation. So keep writing more and PM me for next update. 😉

Yeah, Ur Right, This Is Only A Prologue, I'll Try To Update Soon And PM U !!

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Yeah, Ur Right, This Is Only A Prologue, I'll Try To Update Soon And PM U !!

Oh. If it's prologue than fine. 😉 Sure will wait for your update and PM. 😳

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: renu4u

Oh. If it's prologue than fine. 😉 Sure will wait for your update and PM. 😳

It Will Take Some Time, Cause It's A Long Chapter,😳 And I Have Less Time, My Exams Are Starting !!😭😭

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

It Will Take Some Time, Cause It's A Long Chapter,😳 And I Have Less Time, My Exams Are Starting !!😭😭

Aww... exam? All the best for your exams. I'll wait. Just PM me when you update it. 😉

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: renu4u

Aww... exam? All the best for your exams. I'll wait. Just PM me when you update it. 😉

Thank U !! Will Surely PM U !

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Anuja

@anu93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Nice character sketch and Prologue👍🏼

Waiting for update

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Bhavya

@YashiSingh3

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

radhi, ankita kaun hai yaar..????

dekhi dekhi si lag rahi hai but can't remember her..

by the way nice start and keep updating!!!!

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Vry nyc ff proteeti!! luv ur chars... almost all r my favs!!

n d story seems interesting 2... srry fr commenting late n continue soon..

pm me when u updt... k? updt soon!!!