FF:Coincidences-Lead To Nothing?;Update-2 On Pg 11

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: bhavyajiya

oh i'm such an idiot😆😆 😆waise you did a nice pairing. gurmeet and kritika had become really famous and their popularity is growing day by day!!!!

Yeah And Thanks !!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Update 1

School Ki Ghanti, College Ki Bell,
Padhai Ki Aa Gayi Super-Fast Mail.

A Pillow Was Thrown At Gauri By Laxmi As The Clock Just Struck 8o'clock And Just Then The Bird Would Have Gone Into It's Cage, If Everything Was Alright. This Time It Didn't Go. Instead It Kept On Saying "Aath Baj Gayi ! Aath Baj Gayi !!". Gauri, Who Was Very Angry With This Sudden Attack, Thew The The Pillow Towards The Bird. Perhaps It Was Hurt So It When Back Into It's Cage To Find Some Boroline.

Laxmi : Chi-Chi Ko Chhod Ghari Dekh !! 9o'clock Humare English Classes Hain !! Late Ho Gaye Toh, Punishment Milega !!
Gauri : Oops And Thanks !

In Class 9A :-
Everyone Were Shouting. The Girl Of The Row Before the Row Where Saraswati Was Sitting Alone.Her Name Was Dollie (Devalina Dankh). She Turned And Asked Saraswati If She Had Done Her H.W.. Saraswati Said, She Had.Dollie Then Asked Saraswati For Her Copy. But Ofcourse She Refused To Give. She Knew That If She Gave Her The Copy, She Would End Up Getting Her Into Trouble. But She went On Pleading And Last She Took The Copy From Her.When Laxmi And Gauri, Came To The Class They Saw Laxmi Crying. They Asked Her And Found Out The Whole Story.
Laxmi : Hmm...Is Dollie Ko Dekhna Hoga...Meri Behen Ki Copy Lena Use Bhari Padega ! (To Saraswati) Tu Chinta Mat Kar, Aane De Mam Ko, Phir Dikhati Hoon ! Teri Copy Voh Free Mein Nahin Legi !!!! Mam Toh Kabhi Name Check Nahin Karti Na, Aaj Se Karengi !
Gauri : Great Idea !!!
Saraswati : Par...
Laxmi & Gauri : WE HAVE PROOFS !!
Gauri : For Everything ! Don't Worry ! Chal Ab Rona Bandh Kar, Ms. Topper !

Mam Came.

Mam : Copies Kholo Sab, Kiya H.W. Jo Karne Ko Bole the Hum ?
All : Jee Maaam !!
Mam : Hmm, Toh Saraswati, Aaj Tumhe Kya Ho Gaya ?
Saraswati : Aah...Voh..Mam..Voh...
Laxmi (stood up): Voh Mam Saraswati Ne Kiya Hain Apna H.W. Par Dollie Ne Use Overpower Karke Uska H.W. Le Liya, Kyunki Usne Voh Nahin Kiya Tha, Aap Check Karke Dekh Lijiye, Voh Kabhi Bhi Apna H.W. Nahin Karti !
Mam: Really? Dollie! Apna Copy Dikhao !!
Dollie (stood up): Voh... Mam (fidgeting with the copy)
Mam: DIKHAO, I SAID !!
Dollie (giving the copy): Yes Mam (meekly)

Mam took her copy and saw the name. It said "Devalina Dankh"

Mam: Par..
Laxmi: Nahin Mam, Zaroor Usne Ponchh Diya Hoga! Aap Hand Writing Check Kijiye ! (She Bent Down and Pulled up Saraswati's bag)
Saraswati: Kya Ho Rahaa Hai Yeh Sab ?
Laxmi: Tujhe Jald Pataa Chal Jayega !

She took Out A Copy And Handed It Over To Mam. She Opened Both The Copies And Compared Them.

Mam: Are ! Haan ! Yeh Toh Milti Hai. Dollie You Are Coming With Me !

She Began Dragging Her And Took Her to the Principal's Office.
When She Returned (After the School):
The 3 Girls Were Walking Through the Garden.

Laxmi: Dekh Kitna Sundar Hai Yeh Drishya !
Gauri: Tu Problem Solver Hain Pata Hain Par Ta Toh Kavi Bhi Nikli, Yaar !!
Saraswati: Voh Toh Hai! Par Manna Hi Parega Dollie ko Accha Lesson Mila !
Dollie (from Behind): Haan, Par Main Iska Badla Lekar Rahungi! Dollie Dankh Kabhi Bhi Haar Nahin Maanti !
Laxmi (LOLing): Wow! What a dialogue. Waise Kaun Sa Film Hai Re ! Bilkul "Fit for U" In quotations HA HA HA !!!
Dollie (taking out a knife): I'm not joking! Be Careful ! Ek Aur Complain and This Will Go Through Your Heart. Remember That. Aur Chamche Log Tum Bhi !

She was About to Go When...

Laxmi: I Doubt Agar Us Chhuri mein Dhaar Hain! Kyu Gauri ?

She just went away.

Pls Comment If You've Liked It ! Or Else, I Shall Stop Checking My Post For Likes !!😉

Edited by Radhikerani - 12 years ago

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janani

@Jananivjc

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

me first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nyc story...

cont soon..

Edited by JANAGI - 13 years ago

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

awsm updt proteeti!! its a typical incident of skul lyf!! wid laxmi d problem solver!! continue soon!!!

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Awesome update. 👍🏼 Dialogues toh padh ke mazzaa aa gaya.

Your title and banner is also very nice. I loved it. 😳

School Ki Ghanti, College Ki Bell,
Padhai Ki Aa Gayi Super-Fast Mail.

🥳