Veiled intentions- Prt 3/Pg 6 - 30/08/09

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Posted: 16 years ago
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alright folks, here i am with another story, and unlike my previous one, this one is gonna be full of action :D many people requested me not to write a sad story and i kinda agree with them..this one is gonna a small story of about 4-5 parts. although i'm not such a big fan of romance, i'll gladly inject some romance into it if you guys want :D lastly, this one is dedicated to my friend sonia, who had requested me to write a story on her. Sonu, this one is for you !!! 😃
Introduction:
A man, who looked like he was in his early thirties, casually walked towards the bar. He seemed rather elated, and each stride that he took exuded a kind of intangible confidence. It seemed as though he had recently won a jackpot. The restaurant authorities were esctatic. They knew he would get drunk to celebrate his victory, whatever it was, consequently helping the restaurant to make large gains.
He indicated the barman to prepare him his customary drink from a distance, and before he could take his seat, a woman bumped into him. She staggered a little, and he placed his hand on her shoulder to steady her. She balanced herself on her feet and smiled, "I'm so sorry. It was my fault...I should've seen where I was going.." she said in an apologetic tone.
The man was determined not to spoil his mood that particular day, so he smiled in return and said, "No problem miss...We all have our clumsy moments" He began to move forward from the right side, but fate had no plans to seperate them so soon. The woman began to move forward from her left side ( Which would be his right side ), thus blocking each other again. She broke into a grin and mumbled, "Oh damn..."
She placed her hands on his shoulders to steady him so she could move past him first. He nodded in consent as she walked past him and out of the bar. The man shook his head and finally made his way to his seat...
Sonia walked out of the bar and took a deep, satisfying breath. It had been a pleasant day. More pleasant than she had expected it to be. She now had enough oxygen to last her for another 2 weeks, and she could already picture herself dining in an expensive restaurant. Her life was like a roaler coaster, she never knew what turn it would take the very next moment. But it was exciting, it was exciting in an addictive way. She could never get enough of it.
She pulled out her mobile phone from her jeans pocket and dialled a number, "Dude, Come to the Hyatt Regency for dinner in 20 minutes. My treat" she smiled as she recieved a consenting 'Ok' in return and disconnected the line.
She smirked inwardly as she extracted a heavy wallet from the other pocket in her jeans. She opened it and flipped through the notes with her finger. This was big money. She deduced that it contained something around 30,000 rupees, 3 credit cards and an ATM card. Lovely, she thought. I can even make a short holiday trip to Rio De Janerio or the Bahamas with this kind of money...This is awesome.
Pickpocketing was an art she had mastered as a small time con artist. She had expertise in some of the regular ways to pickpocket, and had also invented some of her own.
Looks like the man's happiness wasn't meant to last for a long time afterall..she thought to herself as she recalled the events of the bar she had just exited. The man genuinely seemed happy. Alas, he won't be able to pay for his drinks.
The 'bumping into someone' idea had done it's trick...
Edited by -Neetz- - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW!!! Awesome!!! What an intro, Mrs. Potter!!! Can't wait for the update!!! 😊 Great stuff. šŸ‘ Romance? šŸ¤” Yeah!!! Why not? šŸ˜† šŸ‘šŸ¼

OMG!!! Twinny!!! You never told me!!! 😲
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Edited by stingray - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok i am hoping its about me!!!! but i kno it is! i am ecstatic.. 😃 beyond myself in joy.. a story about me and a chalak one at that! i cant wait for more.. the adventures of sonu, the pickpocketer.. 😃.. i thought maybe you would write me sumthin for my bday but u did it in advance.. .. i giv it ā­ļø out of 5 ā­ļø's! becuz it has me glued to my seat! yes.. it may be becauz its about me nd i am conceited šŸ˜† but thats not the point.. ur writing is beyond awesome.. nd u make me seem cool.. šŸ˜Ž.. cant wait for more.. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ooh i forgot to add.. i had no clue what was goin to happen.. 😲
my initial reaction was oh.. i am gonna like this older man.. or maybe i am the older man.. 😲
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG!!! 😲 How did this post get here.. 😳 sorry Neetz ā˜ŗļø * faints *

šŸ˜’ And that, my friend, was my clumsy moment!!! 😳

Edited by stingray - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omggggg.. yar this is😲 wow. so beautifuly writternšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ hahha... shes a con artist haanšŸ˜† man.. i wish i could go to the bahamas just like that 😭 I really liked that part where you said.. "Her life was exciting almost in an addicting way".... or something like this. please update soon😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😲

I really thought Sonu was pired up with the old guy!! but ur a con-woman???!!!

NEETZ great workšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Edit. Sorry. LOL.
Posted in the wrong section. šŸ˜†
Will catch your story though Neetz.
Edited by zainab25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Zeebo!!!??? Are you copying me??? 😲okies, Mrs. Potter please don't hate us😭
Edited by stingray - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^OMG! I posted in the wrong section. WOAHH!

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