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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks to all of you for that support again :)
I really miss my old buddies, monica, geet, nish, merry, ishani, disha...they were all supportive and loved my stories..hope you guys come back soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessofkesar


hey sneha miseed ur ff alot
hi re mera yuvi😳

loved it loved do continue


Yes, im back and yukta is back as well..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 55shobha

wow nice FF

Meeshu too,, u mean vishnu meethi na,not akash meethi???



Yes, actually I was thinking of a good match for meethi when I started this ff..now that cv's have introduced Vishnu, I would like to join them...but in a good way, unlike the horrible way in the original one 😕 There's no Akash as of now in my story...I wish to eliminate the entire atisgarh part from my story..my story will focus only on the main couples and their love!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kinny_ranvir

wow dear..loved the update...nice and happy to see u continue FF again


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: HemaG

read everything...

a very nice ff...

hope uu continue it...that too with daily updates..

with the present track...

ffs are much needed...


Will continue surely..thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tayoob

Words cannot describe how much i love this story!Thank you for sharing it! 😃It was very well written and emotional! especially loved Tappu and Yuvi , Iccha and Meethi , i just hope there's my fav character in your story my dashing Aakash.😳..fingers crossed! Will be waiting eagerly for the next update!


Thank you 😊 I really have not thought of introducing Akash into the story yet...if my mind gets a good story to introduce him..il definitely do it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow meehsu mean real vishnu wid meethi.
then i"ll read this FF.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice ff. It's like breathing fresh air,keep rocking yaar.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 8 : BACK TO THE BEGININGS :
Part 1: Landing...

"All passengers are requested to put their seat belts, the flight's about to land" said the air hostess, and Raghuvendra Pratap Rathore tightened his seat belt. A wave of emotions surged through him as he landed at Mumbai, and came outside the airport. A lot had changed in the past 19 years and as he looked at everything surrounding him, he saw a man waiting for him with a board. "Mr. Rathore" were the words written in the board, and as he looked at it, he thought of a way a person used to call him like that and tease him. She never used his first name. All she loved to do was call him Mr.Rathore and laugh at the irritated expression on his face. Again. he thought. Again, she's everywhere. "Why can't I stop thinking about her for a while?" screamed his mind, and his heart replied in a small, soft and sad voice, "Because you still love her." He realised that there was no point in fighting with his heart and mind in an airport. He focused on the one thing that he had come for...the inaugural ceremony of his new factory. He let himself free of all his emotions, and walked up with a straight face towards the man holding the board.

Part 2 : Forming impressions..

As he was waiting in the airport for his Boss, he thought of his superior's words. "Raghuvendra Rathore is a very charismatic person. There is a very different way about him when it comes to treating people. He may seem very impatient, short tempered, but he's an extremely smart, calculative and impressive person. So make sure that you form a good impression and get a good name so that your dreams of becoming the managing director of the new company becomes true." And as he thought of those words, intelligent and shrewd Vishnu Kashyap prayed within his heart that all his dreams would be fulfilled. He had taken a lot of effort to come up to this ladder in the business field and a lot of hardwork from his side was made which contributed to the making of the new company - an addition to the giant Rathore Enterprises. But this addition was a special one, it would make their business more internationally acclaimed. His childhood had never been easy, he was a orphan and he often missed the feeling of being known, being cared for. Hence he turned his attention towards making himself known to the world, being successful and living a happy life. And as he waited, he saw a man walking towards him. He had seen pictures of his boss, but facing him was completely different and he hoped that he would leave a great impression and his boss would be satisfied with him. "There goes, my dreams lie upon the hands of this man walking towards me" thought Vishnu as he put up a smile on his face to welcome the king of his industry.

Part 3 : The search begins...

A hand on his head, another hand with a steaming cup of masala chai, Veer Singh Bundela tried his best to recollect his past, like he did everyday. Small flashes of his past came up, but they never helped him to form a clear picture. He desperately wanted to know about his wife. Mai had told him that she left him for another man, but Veer wanted to know why exactly she left him because his room was filled with memories of wife, impressions of her love. He came through a book where she had written about him, every memory of their moments together and as he read it, he felt that it was completely impossible for his wife to leave him. But he was afraid to ask Mai about her anymore, because Mai always created a scene of becoming ill whenever he started the topic about his wife. The weird thing was, Mai burnt every single picture of hers and wiped away all of her possessions. Veer, by chance had got hold of that little book filled with precious memories and he tried to figure out how his wife looked like. But it was in vain. He couldn't remember a single thing. But Yuvi's words kept flashing in his mind. "Why don't you try to search for her papa"...and from nowhere he got a new confidence to search for her. He was determined to know the truth. He began thinking...

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What is the new relationship that will be formed between Vishnu and his boss, Mr.RPR? Will he create a good impression or fail to get in the eyes of his boss? How will he try to understand his boss? What is Veer's new idea to get to know about his wife? Stay tuned to get the new twists that will make Mukta, Yuvi, Meethi, Vishnu face their past and decide their future. Next chapter, CHAPTER 9 : Truth and lies, coming up soon :)
Edited by sm123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveyouichcha

Very nice ff. It's like breathing fresh air,keep rocking yaar.


Thank you 😊

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