A NEW START (FF)- chapter 6, page 15! - Page 5

Originally posted by: itstimetospeak

dear ur going great. this time ur FF will appear in the newsletter. 👏

Disha!! Thank u so much dear 😊😊

Sneha I don't have words to describe the way you are doing your story telling 👏

Through out you have managed to keep people in suspense and without much effort
the whole effort is thoroughly professional as if written by an experienced writer
loved your story telling ways
loved the simplicity of the words
loved whatever is going on in the minds of the characters
👏 in one word stupendous 👍🏼 loved every moment of it

it's like watching instead of reading
loved the excellent relationship between father and son which is missing in the crap which so called rulai guha is making
they cud learn a klot form you
Teach them this lesson they badly need it 👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: rasyafan

Sneha I don't have words to describe the way you are doing your story telling 👏

Through out you have managed to keep people in suspense and without much effort
the whole effort is thoroughly professional as if written by an experienced writer
loved your story telling ways
loved the simplicity of the words
loved whatever is going on in the minds of the characters
👏 in one word stupendous 👍🏼 loved every moment of it

it's like watching instead of reading
loved the excellent relationship between father and son which is missing in the crap which so called rulai guha is making
they cud learn a klot form you
Teach them this lesson they badly need it 👏👍🏼

Haha, thank you Monica! I seriously hated the way they portrayed the relationship between Yuvi, Meethi, Veer and Ichcha, and im trying to make it up for that in my FF :)
As for RPR, Tappu and Mukku, *suspense* again 😉

this was superb...simple n beautifully depicted their ongoing thoughts n fears..

thanx loads for such beautiful story dear

Originally posted by: kinny_ranvir

this was superb...simple n beautifully depicted their ongoing thoughts n fears..

thanx loads for such beautiful story dear

Thank u! 😊

Sneha already looking forward to Rathor's story 😆

Originally posted by: rasyafan

Sneha already looking forward to Rathor's story 😆

Wait for just 24 hours sweetheart 😉

sneha just loving this ff ..

Woww sneha 😊 😊 Ur rocking dear 😊 😊
Love each n every line of the story 😊 😊
Really happy 😊
I'm more interested n excited to read ur updates than this revenge track..
Superb dear 👏 👏 👏
Our lkg cvs should learn a lotz from u..
U r turning into an excellent script writer 👏 👏

Originally posted by: princessofkesar

sneha just loving this ff ..

specially more eager 4 yukta [selfish me , can't help]

but love the rasya n veecha part too

waiting 4 next part

Haha, I won't make anyone feel dissatisfied in my FF! Everyone will have a glimplse of their fav couple, be it Rasya, Veecha or Yukta! Il have a new and a beautiful story for everyone! 😊 And thank u so much 😊